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    Mistress places a hand on either side of your head and gazes down at you with a grin. Slowly she backs away, leaving you panting as you lean against the wall, the vibrator still firmly in place up your recently fucked ass. She sits on the arm of the sofa and calls one of the dogs to her side. Immediately, Cowboy, her favorite, presses his muzzle between her legs and begins to lap at the wetness there. You watch with a hint of jealousy in your eyes as your mistress is pleasured by the mastiff. After a beat you find yourself walking over to the sofa and sitting on the floor, next to Cowboy, whose tail wags eagerly while Mistress praises his efforts. When she finally calms down and pushes the dog away she glances over at you and then kneels on the floor between your parted legs. You watch her carefully as she reaches down and removes the vibrator, instantly causing you to relax. She turns it off and stands, walking over to place it at the bottom of the stairs before returning to you.

    The room is eerily silent, save for the panting of the dogs and the crackling of the fire, as she takes your hand and pulls you from the floor, leading you to the fireplace and then releasing you. The door on the front of the black, metal fireplace squeaks on its hinges as Mistress opens it and then removes the iron rod from its stand. She eyes you for a moment before pushing the rod into the dying embers, and seeing the flames jump to life casting a warm orange glow on the surrounding space. The blast of warmth hits you and causes your skin to prickle in delight until your mistress turns to once again. She holds the rod carefully, as the tip glows, radiating heat.

    “Turn around,” her smooth voice commands, then she lays you against the arm of the sofa when you do so. She pushes your feet apart, while the uncomfortable heat of the red-hot rod looms over your bare back. You hear her footsteps as she walks away briefly, and then the sizzle of water against hot metal. Presumably the rod being submerged into the bucket of water sitting next to the backdoor of the cabin. She returns then, and your heartbeat quickens. Mistress places a firm hand on your ass to keep you from shying away, and then kneels down behind you. Slowly she touches the still very warm iron rod to the outer lips of your pussy. You suck in a breath, as the heat sears your skin, not enough to burn, but enough to cause you to squirm under Mistress’ hand.

    You close your eyes and grit your teeth, and behind you, Mistress sighs contently. For a moment the heat disappears entirely, and the sound of embers shifting in the fireplace sends a shiver down your spine. All at once your body tenses and the rod is pushed into your tight pussy in one smooth motion. The smell of singed flesh rises into the air and you gasp through gritted teeth. Just as quickly as the hot rod invaded your body, it leaves, and something cool is inserted instead. You recognize it as an ice cube, one of Mistress’ favorite pleasure items, and it soothes your inner walls, cooling you down in just moments. The combined sensations make goosebumps rise on your skin, and you moan softly.

    Mistress rises from the floor and places the rod next to the fireplace, then comes to retrieve you from where you lay, bent over, on the arm of the plush blue sofa. She slides her hands around your chest, groping your breasts as she brings you to your feet, then pulls you against her. Your head tilts back and leans against her shoulder as she touches you, the painful rod all but forgotten. She then takes your hand into hers and leads you to the staircase, pausing for a moment to turn off the generator, causing the cabin to descend into darkness. With a quick slap to your ass she motions you upstairs and joins you after locking the doors.

    You wait for her at the top step, taking her hand as she reaches for you, and together you make your way across the cool wood floor to the bed, a grand king-sized masterpiece, designed by your mistress with a grate along the headboard, perfect for securing restraints, to ensure your complete cooperation. Moonlight shines through the window that faces the swamp, and throws shadows over the floor as Mistress walks over to the dresser and pulls her maroon sweatshirt over her head, placing it in one of the drawers. When she turns to face you she grins and looks pointedly at the bed before turning back to the drawers.

    While you make yourself comfortable the sound of drawers opening and closing catches your attention, and your mind goes to the toy drawer. You grin and lay back on the bed, your hands above your head, and your legs slightly parted. Mistress comes to the bed then. She places a few things on the nightstand next to her side and then kneels next to your waiting form. Her hands hover over your body and her fingertips brush lightly against your skin, toying with you. Eventually she moves back and takes something from the nightstand. A blindfold. Silky and black on one side, with lush velvet on the other. She places it against your eyes and tilts your head up to tie it before laying your head back down.

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    What a fantastic piece of writing! Having it in the present tense gives it a lovely dreamlike quality.

    The link to my old thread doesn't seem to work anymore, unless I'm just bad at the internet, which is definitely a possibility. Anyway, the return of Squunch and his wonderful, wholesome non-con snuff stories has inspired me to get back on the scene. I'll be reposting a lot of old stuff initially, but there's been a few tweaks since I last posted most of it, so hopefully it's at least a little fresh.

    This first one I don't think I ever posted on Gurochan (I finished it while Gurochan was nuked for like the 3rd or 4th time), and I posted it on Fetnoir, but it's told from another character's perspective I got some feedback that people wanted to get inside Julie's mind. That resonated with me, because the main kink for me is the mental torment the victim is going through as she dies, so I went back and added Julie's POV at the end.

    This is the first time I've ever written first person for a female character, so hopefully it's not weird.
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    >>27902
    >>27911

    A quick search reveals that I might have that one, and some other stories saved in HTML files dated 2017. I'll have a proper look tomorrow.
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    >>27911
    >>27912

    That's awesome, guys, would love to see it!
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    >>27912
    >A quick search reveals that I might have that one

    Sadly the search deceived me, I ctrl-f'd for 'smoke' thru my files, and there were ppl smoking at a party, then smoke coming from orificies. But sadly it was a different story (Julie getting electrocuted I think).

    Sorry to get your hopes up :(
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    >>27911

    Damn, I am interested now too. I have checked my saved folder and no matches. We have to find this gem!
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    >>27935

    Really appreciate you checking! Not every story has a happy ending q_q

    Due to its sensitive content, I decided to release this chapter on gurochan only, for fans of the Sarahs Epic Life Series, here is one containing Loli snuff and Scat, and possibly more with positive user feedback. Enjoy….

    Please Baby… said 25 year old and caucasian Liz as she pleaded with Sarah. "no, I just…. why baby?" Sarah asked quizzidly. "Because I want to try something new!" Liz pouted

    Sarahs pussy twinged at the thought, but could she bring herself to do what her lover asked? She had done many things the past few years that people thought were vile, but this…

    Sarah was about to refute Liz again when something broke inside of her.
    Ok fine, but just three of them, then well see about more. Sarah said with a cute face. Liz clapped her hands together gleefully and passionately kissed Sarah. Tonight was going to be something special!
    "What about that one?" Liz asked while casually masturbating under her skirt.

    Sarah nodded as her eyes dwelled on a six year old baptist girl named Laura, she had her mothers ass and had cute black curly hair.

    What about that one too? Sarah said pointing at a 4 year old skinny girl. "Toilet" Liz answered.

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    Damnn.. yes please continue!
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    If the Anon who replied to this or anyone else wants more loli after the posted ulupdate banning loli works of art, email [email protected] And ill send ya direct updates, you can also find subsequent chapters on aryion in the underage section or lolicit in the guro catagory.

    I will still post non loli updates to sarahs epic life in the other thread, and as always, have fun!
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    I still miss those stories

    You push the tape into the player. The static clears, and the images roll

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    Sophie's hushed tones fill the microphone as the camera steadies on a truck parked outside a nondescript loading door.

    "This is Sophie Slate. It’s 02:11, Friday the 9th of June. We’re outside the Meat Packing Factory, downtown. Place looks quiet just a few lights on. My source says there’s a smuggling op inside. We’re about to find out.”

    The shot wobbles as she crouches low and darts from shadow to shadow. Footsteps crunch faintly, the mic catching her controlled breaths. For a moment the frame blurs, auto-focus hunting, then sharpens again as she steadies.

    "Now… looks like I’ve arrived at the right moment. They’re unloading the truck.”

    Half a dozen naked women stumble down, chained wrist to ankle. Their quiet sobs cut through the mic. Two men in white overalls and hairnets drag them out in pairs. When one woman trips, a short fat cylinder jabs her side.

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    Influencer in Protective Custody (guro, snuff, loli, police, bad parenting)

    1. I am a fairly new erotica writer and as such am hungry for constructive criticism and feedback on my work. This story has been posted on multiple platforms. Please let me know in the comments or via whatever messaging platform is available what you thought of the story, even if you did not like it at all. The only exception to this call for feedback is that if you wish to criticize this kind of (violent, sexual, underage) content, please rather keep it to yourself. If you do not mind this kind of content or enjoy it, but nonetheless feel this story is subpar, do engage.

    2. This story is only an exercise in catharsis – its content and characters are entirely fictional and do not represent any real-world preferences or desires. If you are easily offended by themes or literary portrayals of betrayal, extreme sexual violence, and underage characters engaged in sexual and violent scenes, please do not read any further than this.

    3. If you enjoyed this story, let me know. That's the only way I know to write more!

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    From the pastel-hued cocoon of her suburban bedroom, 13 year old Chloe Morgan reigned supreme over a digital empire of lustful eyes. Three million horny teens, lonely men, and curious creeps devoured her every post, their clicks and comments stroking her ego like eager fingers on bare skin.

    Today, she was giving them something new to drool over, staging her latest shoot with her father Pete behind the camera.

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    Liked this a ton, hope to see more from you
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    This was fantastic! Thank you for posting!

    ____________________

    This story was written with collaboration and input from あのモンニ.
    Link: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/3820163
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    It was the last Friday night of the month, as per tradition it was also the empire armies monthly orgy night. It was no exception at camp delta-04, a small forward camp at the edge of the empires territory. It had been a tough month fighting the rebels, but the recent victories seriously put a halt to the rebel operations in the area. Many rebels were brutally slaughtered and it was a cause for celebration. The frontline heavy trooper company stationed there was especially looking forward to blow off some steam. The event was to be held at the main tent that was usually used as a mess hall, but for the evening it was turned into a place of orgy with more than 150 troopers.

    The event began and the tent was packed with people. As cleaning off semen and love juices from their armor was always a pain, most of the heavy troopers choose to show up completely naked or in sexy lingerie they brought, still some very few choose to remain vigilant and kept their heavy armor on.

    Outside only a few unlucky troopers that drew the short straw was standing guard while the rest of the camp combatants engaged in the hot messy orgy.

    On top of a hill not far overlooking the camp, rebel commander Olivia was stealthily observing the camp through her binoculars.

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    A short report on one of the recent immigration raids, with some slight modifications to current judicial processes. I would like to read reports from other officers as well, so please submit your own.

    Documentation of encounter

    The target, a male age 28-32, was apprehended at his home in [REDACTED]. His non-US citizenship was confirmed, and he was advised that he would be repatriated immediately. He stated that his wife and their four daughters were US citizens. This information was confirmed. He further stated that his repatriation would result in the family having no income, as his wife was pregnant with their fifth child. He was advised that he would be handed over to his consulate per treaty, and that his family would be subject to US law regarding indigency. This information was poorly received.

    Disposition

    The indigent citizens were encouraged to remove their clothing for resale. They refused and were stripped unwillingly. As required by treaty, the detainee was asked whether he preferred to witness the indigency penalty, or impose it himself. He was not cooperative. Penalty was imposed by agents on scene.

    3yo female: Single gunshot to back of head, resulting in death.

    8yo female: Subject rushed to aid of 3yo and was restrained. Suffocation by boot on throat.

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    Thank you for the encouragement. This isn't my usual style, except for the pregnant "offender". But I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    >>17444
    I honestly loved it, was just hoping you could do more with genital destruction lol. Especially with a pregnan victim…
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    >>17444

    Good story, cynical and impersonal. Victims a little too young for me but the each his own.
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    After Action Report

    Date: 12/08/25
    Location: Houston, TX
    Responding Officer: SRT Agent Team Lead D. Saurez, SRT Agent T. Mellow, SRT Agent R. Haley, SRT Agent V. Spinelli

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    Initial deportation order served by ICE Agent S. Rawlins to family of illegal immigrants residing in 445 Avenue K, Magnolia Park. Upon recieving deportation papers, a Hispanic male became agitated and pulled a handgun, fatally wounding Agent Rawlins and injuring her partner, Agent D. Mendoza. Agent Mendoza pulled Agent Rawlins behind the cover of their vehicle and called for backup.

    SRT arrived via helicopter within 5 minutes, fast roping down and surrounding residence. Verbal orders were given to surrender any weapons inside the house and peacefully exit the house. Helicopter received rifle fire, and SRT Agent R. Haley manned the M134 from the door and opened fire on the residence for a duration of 4 seconds.

    SRT Agents Saurez, Mellow, and Spinelli entered the residence. Upon entrance, they confirmed the deaths of a 45 year old Hispanic male, the patriarch of the household, a 34 year old Hispanic female, the mother. Both were killed by multiple 7.62x51mm GSWs to the upper torso and head. After clearing the ground floor, they descended into the basement, where they found two 13 year old Hispanic females. After a physical altercation, both females were stripped of clothing and thoroughly searched and inspected for hidden weapons. None were found, but Agent Mellow neutralized both females with a single 9x19mm round to the back of the head after one bit his arm, drawing blood.

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    >>16872
    Don't give Trump any ideas!

    Hello, I know I've already posted this story as the 'Jennifer Series' but I've decided to expand on this universe and release more stories in future set in my 'Humanity Universe' as I'm calling it.

    I've also rewritten a huge chunk of Jennifer to include the loli scenes I wanted in the original but wasn't allowed too when posting on Dolcettish.

    The tags for the stories will be released per story though I don't enjoy scat so don't expect it here.

    Without further ado I will post the rewrite of Jennifer's story. As I said on the last thread I hope someone gets in touch about proofreading, I try my best but mistakes will likely have slipped through.
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    I want to see more, but I miss the friendly truck driver. Friendly but still absolutely going to snuff you is better than unkind
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    I am considering a one shot story with the truck driver but I also want to write the story about the teacher with an executioners liscence
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    bump
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    I forgot about this thread and I apologize for the necro. I've got some ideas that I might explore in the future such as the teacher with a licence to execute badly behaved girls and such
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    Please continue!

    I wrote a dolcett story, 37000 words, I hope you all enjoy, feedback is welcome

    ...Some tombs of royal kin contain large numbers of human victims sacrificed to the lords. Some humans were decapitated and laid on the ramps within the tombs, while others were designated to be buried directly in the burial pits of their masters. Wang Jihuai - Religious History of Ancient China and the Three Dynasties

    Around 1640, a drought in Henan and Shandong became so bad that "women and babies were arrayed in the market as human food and were sold by the slaughterers just like mutton and pork." Sometimes, women and children were slaughtered in the back rooms of butcher shops while customers were waiting for fresh meat. Zheng, Yi (2018). Scarlet Memorial: Tales of Cannibalism in Modern China

    As far as I understood, Asian (mainly Chinese) funerals differed from Western cultures. The archaic concept of grave offerings still existed.

    A very private Chinese funeral with demonic elements involving sacrificial tribute to the evil spiritswas stranger.

    A funeral with honest-to-god human sacrifice, a tradition harkening back to the cruel Shang dynasty and combined with a culinary offering of human meat, was the most significant shock to me. A feverish dream, and a mind-numbing experience, something I had the privilege of witnessing, and yet, I was invited to one. At such a young age, to witness a complete, paralyzing shock full of horror...and arousal.

    How did it come to this?

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    A young Chinese waitress even leaned close to me, touching my bound hand:

    "One is for you!"

    I smiled at her, exchanging happy glances.

    Sighing, I looked at Jia sideways, who smiled at me, then called a waitress to handle her phone. Jun knelt to look at me with genuine care, touching my hair:

    "This is the end, young man, and I am...glad you had what you wanted. Let's talk: do you want something done? A little jelly snack? A phone call, or contact someone over the internet?"

    I shook my head. "No, but I wouldn't mind a green jelly as a last meal. If you want, do what you like with my past. I bet you have all my passwords..." Jun grinned:

    "We have people that will clear your digital footprint, leaving a wilderness hiking message for your last footage to make sure it's not pursued. Same with Jia. No one but people here will know." She called a waitress, explaining the green European sweet woodruff jelly, who rushed off. "She'll bring a small portion." Jun squeezed my cheek lovingly.

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    good story!
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    Nice
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    I really enjoyed this story. The focus on his feelings, hesitation and eventual acceptance was an interesting look into the mind of a willing offering. His casual treatment whilst naked and bound was very well described

    Witchtrapped

    Transsexual, paranormal, snuff, dub-con

    Nubi, an ebony non-op trans-woman of 24, was living her dream life of being a fucktoy secretary for a sugardaddy boss.
    Being a slut and getting treated like trash always felt right to her. She lived in the moment, with no ambitions or long-term goals.
    A position that pays her bills. Presents from the boss to keep herself presentable. Regular gym sessions to stay in shape.
    Not for herself, but to be the most pleasing for her peers. As transsexual - she got all kinds of looks at the gym.
    And she loved it. It was quite frustrating that those men would never follow her, stalk her, even ask for a date.
    Oh well. She WAS a trash, after all.

    But even in that almost perfect life - she had to do some real work and pull her weight.
    And that involved travelling every now and then.

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    Any feedback please T_T
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    Interesting story. Not my cup of tea...but still, and interesting story.

    Music Video

    Characters:
    Girl 1 (G1) – Blonde 12 year old in a pure white dress, cut to knee length (hairless below the head)

    Girl 2 (G2) – Ginger 12 year old in a pure white dress, cut to knee length (hairless below the head)

    The Monster (M) – Naked man with short, dark fur covering his upper arms, shoulders, and back. Otherwise completely shaven. Wearing a mask over the top half of his face (from the nose up) stylized like a lion. Upon his erect penis, just below the cock-head, is a cock-ring with inward-facing spurs on the outside.

    Setting: An abandoned warehouse and the surrounding yard

    Scene 1:
    The girls are frolicking about, when G1 stops and smirks before shoving G2 to the ground. G2 looks betrayed, as she watches G1 skip off. A scrape is clearly visible on her arm, and gray dust coats some of her dress, with a single tear in the dress visible as she gets up.

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    This first story was inspired by the "Music Videos" thread in /dis/

    The age of the characters isn't really plot relevant, but I imagined this as a legit snuff video that would be filmed for a music video. Obviously that would never happen in our world, but it's hot to imagine.

    I hope the lack of character names, the lack of dialogue, and the scene format don't cut too much into your enjoyment, but it is meant to read a little bit like an actual script for a music video

    I've never seen a real music video script, so this is my best approximation based on my imagination.
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    It's really fun in this abstract format imho!

    “Schlorp, schlorp, schlorp, schlorp…”

    Wet, gooey squelches accompany each thrust made by the homunculus into Sahja’s welcoming mouth. The nameless beast caught the catgirl as she was sneaking around the place it called home. In reality it was a secret meeting place for a dark cult, masquerading as a private library. The homunculus was made for the specific purpose of defending its secrets while its masters are away. And it did so with brutal efficiency. Sahja barely registered its presence before its arms grabbed the sides of her head and gave it a quick twist. The catgirl was soon dead on the ground with a dumb expression on her face, not even knowing what ended her adventuring career. With a lack of instructions in how to proceed further, the homunculus gave in to its base desires. Desires that originated from when it was once a man, walking freely under the sun.

    It dragged Sahja’s corpse to a nearby bench before lifting her head and forcing it down on its engorged member. Its masters saw it fit to keep all of its human parts as possible, just so it can have room for modifications down the line. That left the homunculus with a fully functioning cock, which it promptly proceeded to impale Sahja’s throat with. It didn’t care that its partner was dead, set only on extracting as much pleasure as it can from the catgirl’s completely compliant corpse. The same hands that killed Sahja soon guided her head to its crotch, sliding her tongue across the hardened skin of a subhuman cock, lubricating it with her slobber while stimulating the heightened senses of its rebuilt form.

    Sahja stared with glazed, half lidded eyes while her head continued to bob along the monster’s length. This face would be subjected to countless amounts of orgasm, receiving a layer of sticky white each time. Sometime during her unwilling the monster saw it fit to remove her clothes, tearing to shreds every article that she wore. It experimented with her other holes, at least the ones it could recall using from a woman’s body. But in the end, it went back to simply sinking its cock deep in her gullet.

    The homunculus spent the rest of its day fucking Sahja’s dead throat. The magical process that turned him from human to mindless beast also gave him unnatural endurance, allowing him to climax repeatedly without tiring. It was evident on the catgirl’s face, all the cum dripping from the angles of her feline face and the ones overflowing from her mouth and nose was an good indicator of how much us

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    I'm active again, with my site remodeled and renamed, and several new stories.

    As usual, constructive criticism is welcome alongside praising feedback, as I'm always eager to improve my writing.

    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/index.html -

    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/earlymorningkillingspree.html - Snuff, Nude Child, Necro Sex(Mg), Piss.


    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/motheranddaughterexecution.html - Snuff, Nude Teen.


    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/partykiller.html - Snuff, Necro Sex(MF), Piss.

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    Some consensual and casual. I like it^^
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    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/royalslaying.html - Nude Teen, Nude Child, Shooting(Arrows), Decapitation, Supernatural, Burning, Piss.

    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/hauntingattack.html - Rape(MF), Asphyxiation, Dismemberment, Decapitation, Supernatural.
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    Latest story;

    https://www.asstr.org//~Randall_J._Nelson/Stories/Execution/abigailsbeheading.html

    And, yes, I am aware that the other links no longer work. I remodeled the site, and will repost them in the morning.
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    asstr seems to be gone now... I don't suppose there's a backup of these stories?
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    Summary: When Umbridge's educational decrees threaten to leave Hogwarts students defenseless, Harry, Ron, and Hermione take matters into their own hands. Within the secrecy of the Room of Requirement, they organize Dumbledore's Army to instruct their fellow students in what the coming war truly demands: strength, skill... and sacrifice. Features graphic depictions of death, mutilation, and sexual violence, set against a backdrop of callous horror that questions the very nature of authority.

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    (1/4)

    The Room of Requirement hummed, a low, expectant thrum beneath the excited chatter of young voices. The air carried a fresh tang of anticipation. Wands gleamed, poised in eager hands, as the assembled students of Dumbledore's Army buzzed with the thrill of their first true practical lesson. This wasn't some dusty textbook affair; this was real, practical magic, guided by Harry Potter himself. He stood before them flanked by Hermione and Ron, the trio looking every bit the capable - if slightly overwhelmed - instructors.

    "Alright everyone, settle down," Harry's voice cut through the clamor, clear and authoritative. A hush fell as all eyes fixed on him. "Welcome. This is what we're here for – to learn real magic, the kind you need when things get messy. The truth is that bad things are coming and the Ministry... well, they aren't teaching you what you need to know to defend yourselves. We are." He paused, letting that sink in, a subtle rebellion simmering in the air. "Today, we're going to master the stunning spell. Stupefy." He flicked his wand, and a burst of scarlet light sizzled harmlessly into the far wall. "It's one of the most useful spells in your arsenal - a wizard's bread and butter, really. Non-lethal but incredibly effective for incapacitating an opponent. You can use it to disarm threats or even just clear a path. You'll be using it constantly, trust me. It's a foundational skill." He grinned, a flash of white in the candlelit room. "Now, who fancies a demonstration?"

    Ginny Weasley surged forward, a living ember of fiery red with her gaze fixed on Harry. A palpable eagerness radiated from her, a bright, uncontainable energy that shimmered around her lithe form. Her stark white shirt was a crisp second skin, tight across the burgeoning swell of her chest. The grey V-neck jumper, meant to be modest, instead traced the slender architecture beneath. Her practical skirt, a dark embrace, swirled around strong, athletic legs, each movement a vibrant whisper of anticipation. Her wand, held with an almost innocent grace, belied the flush painting her cheeks. It was a silent testament to how deeply she savored Harry's attention, a burning current in the air she breathed. Each subtle shift of her weight was a silent, unstated proposition—a defiant, youthful promise of a challenge well worth taking.

    "Excellent Ginny," Harry murmured, his gaze tracing the vibrant lines of her uniform as she stepped forward. "I need you to position yourself right in that cleared space there," he pointed towards a wide, empty circle near the back wall, almost like a spotlight, "about fifteen feet out. It'll give us ample room for the demonstration, ensure maximum visibility for all, and, well, keep everyone else out of the way of any… stray magic." He gave a brief, almost imperceptible smirk. "Everyone, watch closely. Remember, aim for the chest and use a strong, clear incantation; say it like you mean it." His voice called out "Stupefy!" and a jet of red light shot from his wand, striking Ginny squarely in the chest.

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    Ron, wanting desperately to prove himself apart from Harry's shadow, squared his shoulders in a posture that exuded clumsy determination. He cleared his throat loudly, his wand held confidently, if a little awkwardly. "Alright everyone, listen up!" he announced, his voice reverberating with an eager boom through the Room of Requirement. "We're moving beyond simple deflections and stuns today. It's time to get into... more advanced... containment!"

    He paused, collecting his thoughts with a visible effort and rubbing the back of his neck as if in deep contemplation. "So, you know Stupefy, right? Great for knocking people out. But what if you don't want them unconscious? What if you need them awake, but also not moving? Imagine you've caught a Dark wizard, but you can't just leave him stunned. Or imagine someone's running off with a stolen snitch, and you need to stop them without causing too much bother." He gestured expansively. "That's Incarcerous. It's a binding spell that conjures strong, flexible ropes. They wrap around the target and hold them firmly. The point is that they can't get away. It's for securing targets and making sure they stay put." He ended with a firm nod, satisfied with his explanation.

    "So, yeah. Very important spell." His gaze, brimming with a self-assured eagerness, traversed the faces before him. "I need a volunteer! Someone to help me show off this, um, this incredibly useful spell!" He finished with a decisive nod, his eyes sweeping the room, confident in their imminent enthusiasm.

    Immediately his eye snagged on a tantalizing stretch of warm tawny skin, visible between the top of a high sock and the hem of a short uniform skirt. The subtle swell of her calves beneath the fabric and the sleek curve of a bare leg held his attention with unexpected force.

    His gaze ascended, drawn by the way the uniform skirt molded itself to shapely hips before continuing upwards. A v-neck jumper clung pleasantly to the chest, offering a vivid suggestion of the generous, youthful curves it barely contained. His eyes finally reached the face. Full pink lips were subtly parted and large dark eyes, made more captivating by long eyelashes, gleamed back at him with an amused challenge.

    A bold smile spread across his face. "Yes! Parvati Patil! You're exactly what I'm looking for!" he declared, gesturing in her direction, his eyes locked on her and her alone. Close by, Parvati's twin Padma raised an eyebrow.

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    Hermione, ever the pragmatic intellectual, stepped forward. Her eyes meticulously swept over each student, her gaze lingering on a few faces with a subtle, critical intensity. "Stunning and binding are all well and good," she began, her voice crisp and authoritative. "But magic isn't always at your disposal. Sometimes, you need… direct application of force."

    She raised her hand, clenching it into a tight, compact ball. "This," she announced, "is called a fist."

    A murmur rippled through the assembled students. Many of the witches and wizards stared, utterly bewildered, as if Hermione had just presented them with a sock and declared it a formidable weapon. Lavender Brown tittered softly. Fred and George exchanged bemused glances. Amidst the rising tide of confusion a slender figure detached itself from the crowd. Luna, with an almost childlike grace, stepped lightly into the cleared space. Her eyes, wide with innocent curiosity, found Hermione's and her ethereal voice, a delicate thread of sound, broke through the murmuring. "A fist? What is it for, Hermione? Does it ward off Wrackspurts?"

    Hermione listened to Luna's words, shaking her head in a small, almost imperceptible gesture of resigned disbelief. Her gaze remained steady but a subtle tension entered her shoulders. "No, Luna, it doesn't ward off Wrackspurts," she explained, her voice entirely matter-of-fact. "You use it to hit people. To 'punch' them. You can use either hand, of course, and you simply aim for any vulnerable spot—the jaw, the gut, the temple." With abrupt precision she drew back her fist and drove it forward, a calculated blow that connected squarely with Luna's delicate jaw.

    The crack was sharp and audible, echoing in the sudden, astonished silence of the Room. Luna's head snapped back with shocking force, her pale hair flying, her body staggering. A collective exhalation rose from the onlookers, a sound of utter fascination and profound disbelief. They all leaned forward, their eyes riveted as if witnessing a raw, unfamiliar display of power utterly foreign to their understanding of magic. Slowly Luna's head reoriented itself and a thin crimson line traced its way down from her split lip. But Luna's eyes, unfocused and distant, held not pain, but a disquieting, almost academic fascination. She touched her lip with a tentative finger, staring at the blood. Her voice was a dreamy murmur, "Oh… so that's what 'punch' means. How… fascinating."

    Building on her lesson Hermione moved to illustrate the next principle of direct force. "And you can use your feet too. Like this!" Without warning her leg shot out in a swift powerful kick. The sole of her foot connected with Luna's outer thigh; Luna's leg buckled, causing her to stumble backward, lose her footing and collapse amidst the watching students. For a stunned moment she lay crumpled, but then her awareness reasserted itself and she began to push herself upright, one hand instinctively covering the point of impact.

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    "Alright, everyone," Harry's voice rang out, breaking the quiet that followed the disposal. "That's a good start for today. You've seen a few basic applications of force and how to handle… difficult situations."

    Hermione stepped forward, an offhand Scourgify rendering her robes like new. "Indeed. Remember, the key is not just technique, but also adaptability. Sometimes, the most direct solution is the best. For the rest of the lesson, it's free practice. Spread out, form groups, experiment. Try out new things, see what works best for you. We'll be around if you have any questions."

    The students, still somewhat stunned, began to murmur amongst themselves, slowly dispersing into smaller clusters. Many exchanged a silent, potent gaze, as a strange new understanding dawned within them.

    The trio moved to a more secluded corner, ostensibly to discuss future plans, their voices low but clear. "This DA is really coming along, isn't it?" Ron muttered, watching the students tentatively begin to engage. "Who knew it'd be this… effective?"

    "We need to plan out the next few sessions more thoroughly," Hermione said, already pulling a small, self-inking quill from her robes. "And we need to ensure Umbridge doesn't get wind of this. Secrecy is paramount."

    "And if we're going to keep this up," Harry added, surveying the room with a practiced eye, "we'll need more teaching assistants. This is a lot of work for just the three of us."

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    wow, that was so great.
    Personaly I never thought sex was necessary for a guro story.
    this one really has the perfect amount of sex, some sexual elements but no long fuck scenes. the perfect casualish atmosphere, they don't want it, but it happens without much problem, death or violence.
    you instantly became one of my favorite writer!
    I really hope you plan to make a sequel or another story soon!
    there's so much potential!
    Hermione and Umbridge need their turns too, and I really want to know who you have in mind for the next 'assitants' and spells.
    also, Luna is one of my favorite girl, and beating one of my favorite way, so thank you ;)

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    Rina's mind wandered and came back, she couldn't remember anything until she woke up in the middle of a pile of her comrades' corpses, all beautiful women in armor surrounding her. To her right was a girl with green-rimmed glasses in white armor. She was the nurse in the unit. Her eyes were wide open, and her mouth was agape as if screaming in pain. Her left breast was torn open, revealing bulletproof silicone full of embedded bullets. Her right breast remained beautiful and prominent, displaying the nurse unit symbol tattooed on it. She had no arms or legs, and her intestines were slightly protruding from her body. Her breathing gradually weakened until it stopped. To her left was a petite woman holding a box of machine gun ammunition in her right hand. She only had her torso from the waist up; she could see her spine and her internal organs scattered about.
    Rina then glanced at her chest and felt wet. Someone's uterus had fallen on her cleavage. Only one ruptured ovary remained, spilling eggs and white liquid down onto Rina's stomach. Sperm on the robes of semen swimming around were penetrating eggs on her stomach. None of them would survive or grow, like the corpses piled around Rina.

    Rina tried to get up from the pile of corpses, slippery flesh bits and blood almost made her slip. She stood up while the fallen uterus still pinched in her cleavage, she didn't care about it and left it there until the end of the day, slowly stepping on the intestines and pieces of her comrades, out to the front of the building. It was quiet.
    Faint smoke rose from the bomb crater near the building she got out of, there were some charred skeletons in armor. A piece of silicone was still intact on one of the corpses' ribs. The pelvis still had some flesh on it, while everything was definitely too burnt to visually identify her. She walked on, raising the rifle and shaking as she took cover point to point to avoid snipers and lurking enemies.

    Rina got to the closest undamaged small hospital building following running civilians and other squads of injured heavy troopers, where she was met with more explosive bullets flying her way. Sound of bullets hitting metal armor and splattering exploding thighs of the pile of corpses lying on the front of a building. When the sounds stopped, she immediately dashed into the building, Rina saw that the bodies were now just belly in armors and short stumps of legs, they had been blown to pieces by the indiscriminate bombardment of explosive bullets. As she entered, crossed into the safety of the fortified building, there was a loud explosion that made her ears ring. Pieces of fetuses, fleshes, and bones were scattered all over her body. She quickly got up, closed the door, and locked it. The clinic door was an explosion-proof bunker door. It should be able to protect the clinic for a while longer.

    “We’re wiped out, I’m the only one here, squad 9” Rina shouted

    “Squad 1 here, only me and these four made it” A badly injured squad leader said to Rina.

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