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    Hello folks, I've decided to share my first ever Snuff story with the community. I've been looking at this site for few months now, give or take, and the level of acceptance and genuine lack of judgement is great.

    I'll post the story chapter by chapter below. You may find some spelling or grammar errors and I love someone to approach me about proofreading!
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    Bumping to make sure this goes above the big wave of spam
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    That was really HOT!
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    shoot, I saw it higher up and was thinking there was a new post, lol
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    >>14070
    Nice story, are there alternate processing centers where meat can be hunting and field gutted like deer? Or would a rich guy do that for a personal party?

    Space Bimbos

    Or

    They Came From Outer Space! (For Our Balls!)

    Some alien girls run out of fuel and crash land on earth. How will they manage to find some more fuel for their ship and get home?

    Ff/mm, Space!, Green (and Blue) Skinned Space Babes, Oral, Castration, Objectification, Silly

    Annie looked up from her weeding curiously, as an odd whining sound began making itself known. The sound was high pitched, strangely metallic, and relatively distant. At first, anyway.

    The odd noise began growing rapidly deeper, louder, and much, much closer, filling the air around her. Annie slapped her hands over her ears as the strange thrumming suddenly seemed to be right on top of her, the sound so loud that it felt like it was pressing in on her skull, then she jumped in surprise when something large and silvery flashed over her, barely higher than the tree tops.

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    I love silly castration stories. I liked it.
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    I like the story. Next time let's find a mom who donated her son's balls

    SCP-NC-1

    Object class: Safe

    Containment procedures:

    SCP-NC-1 is currently located in Site 776, which is posing as an assisted suicide facility. Anyone admitted to the "facility" are considered D class, and may be used to test SCP-NC-1 at the leisure of the site director. Foundation staff may also be admitted, either by choice or as punishment. No special containment procedures are required.

    Description:

    SCP-NC-1 consists of four parts: An entrance/waiting room (SCP-NC-1-A), a non descript anomalous humanoid attendant (SCP-NC-1-B), a "kill room" (SCP-NC-1-C), and a disposal pit in the center of SCP-NC-1-C (SCP-NC-1-D).

    A subject that enters SCP-NC-1 will be offered a beverage. If consumed, the subject will become perfectly docile and obedient, and lose all inhibitions, allowing event NC-1-א(Aleph) to occur.

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    Test log SCP-NC-1-1:

    Subject: D-12 (Caucasian female, age 19, entered the facility seeking euthanasia on account of ALS.)

    Appearance of SCP-NC-1-B: Latina female, 20s.

    S is escorted into SCP-NC-1-A by Dr. #### and two security officers.

    The foundation staff leave after S takes a seat.

    Four minutes after they left, B approaches S from behind the desk, and gives her a plastic cup containing what appeared to be cola.

    B:"Please drink that. I'll be right back after I make some preparations, okay?"

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    I quite enjoyed that!
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    Can anyone post a scenario here?
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    SITE DIRECTOR's NOTE:

    Site staff are encouraged to perform their own experiments on SCP-NC-1. No authorization is required, because the foundation sends us plenty of D-Class scheduled for execution by SCP-NC-1, anyways. Please conform to foundation standards in terms of layout, and insure there are no duplicate log numbers, as that really messes with the system.

    -Site director [REDACTED]

    The Tortured Tits




    We’re finally here, I thought to myself as we pulled
    into the parking lot of an adult bookstore a few miles
    from our house. Samantha, my twenty-eight year old wife,
    had been asking questions about it for some time now.
    She wanted to know what was in there, who was in there,
    what went on in there, what might happen if we went in
    there.


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    This is my first attempt at story writing, I have a lot of ideas but being italian i’m not so sure that everything will be grammatically correct, sorry for that. As you can see I have a strong belly button fetish and I like to give as much details as possible about the victim belly anatomy and navel shape and how that changes the approach to each victim. So here it is the first part of a story I’m writing with a member of another board. I would really appreciate any suggestion for future development, like characteristics of the next victims or killing methods. Thanks in advance.
    Here we go
    It was half past midnight when a received the call I was waiting for the past week. “Sir, your payment has been accepted, a black van will come to pick you up to take you to our club, everything has been prepared as per your indications.
    It took me sometime to gather all the money to pay for this exclusive “Death Club” but finally I can let all my darkest fantasies come true.. not just one, but five young ladies where waiting for me and their bellies ready to transform from attractive to gory messy.
    Finally the van stopped to its destination and I was escorted inside the club and to the private room I was designed to. Everything was perfectly organized, a big stone table resembling an altar is placed at the exact center of the room, on one corner there where all kind of tools attached to the wall. I took my time to examine the shiny knives of different dimensions, a power drill, scissors of all kind, scalpels… everything needed was there. On the opposite wall I could see a window to another room. Standing a the center of the other room are five of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen. “please sir which one you would like to start with?”
    MARGHERITA
    The choice was simple, my eyes were captured by a tall blonde girl, her skin pale white, her belly was long with a very small belly button at its center. Her navel was rendered almost invisible by the shiny belly ring she was wearing. She was escorted to my room, she entered wearing nothing but a bright red bikini. She looked scary and tears runned down her face as she was lied on the stone table, wrist and ankles secured to avoid excessive movements. “What’s your name honey?” “Margherita sir… please don’t hurt me too much” she says sobbing and crying
    “My dear, we are going to have a lot of fun with this long belly of yours”, She looked down to see my finger pointing at her upper stomach and going down ‘till I found her small navel. I moved the belly ring aside and poked my finger deep in the recess of her navel. “Let’s see if we can make your belly hole a little deeper”
    She quivered in fear at my touch deep in her petite navel, terrified at what i had in store for her, i started to caress her soft tummy, envisioning tearing her beautiful stomach to shreds, " what are you gonna do to me" she asked, " i'm going to torture your abdomen for awhile, then split you right up the middle, from belly button to breasts, and reach inside you to feel your lovely gushy goodies", she screamed and began to cry, i simply walked over to the wall and grabbed a pair of scissors, then i returned to her and said "are you ready"?, she looked at me and shuttered in fear, “first I will take a little souvenir” as i grabbed a hold of her sexy belly ring and slowly pulled it, she looked in fear as the upper rim of her navel tried to resist my pull. “Please not my navel ring… please aahhhhhh”
    With a little more effort the ring was out of her flesh and blood started to seep out of her torn rim. Then with quick precision, i snipped into her belly button with the scissors, she unleashed a blood curdling scream, I then proceeded to slowly remove the scissors “see? now your belly button is deeper than before”
    Once the scissors were out of her belly I stopped to admire my work as the blood started to fill the small hole of her navel and started to descend her lower belly and wetting her pussy.
    The scissors were so sharp that her petite navel was bisected almost perfectly to the middle and she looks in terror at the now bloody hole at the center of her creamy belly.
    “Now that your navel is deeper honey, why don’t we make it a little larger?” I proceed to insert my index finger into the bloody hole,”please no no noooo” she screamed for the unbearable pain, I want to enjoy this moment and I start to finger fuck her navel with my finger, up and down up and down, drawing more blood with each movement. Then I start to pull at the side of the wound enlarging it and letting her scream even more. I remove my finger and I lick the blood… so tasty. Now at the center of her long belly, there’s a round bloody hole… no signs of her small belly button anymore.

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    I really enjoyed it. The grammar wasn’t bad for a non native speaker. Check out some of my stories on here and let me know what you think.

    A gothic chick goes to an all female asian massage parlor, gets butchered and cooked at a conveniently adjacent asian restaurant. Narrated from the victim's POV. I think it was on the old site before the site was lost.
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    >>16626
    Seconded. I have no such story, but this sounds interesting and vaguely familier.

    Tags: Preteens, m/f, sex, and murder Original characters.

    A First time for Everything.

    Ava was excited, she'd always been one of natures tomboys, even for an eleven year old the flat chested girl had barely registered that boys were looking at her differently now and she did her best to hide it in baggy clothing or a bit of rough and tumble play. It had been a few weeks since they'd nicked some adult magazines from the neighbor's trash. Rather graphic old spank rags with crisp pictures of much older girls in compromising positions with one or even two other men. The local gang of boys had accepted the girl as part of their group and the little filth rags were stashed in an old rickety shed deep in the woods behind the houses. It wasn't much but to the gang it was home, their own little club house filed with the detritus of youthful rebellion and the hub of their games. Ava had been talked into meeting one of the older boys out at the clubhouse alone they always teased about acting out what they saw in the magazines, and a little goading and accusations of being a chicken was all it took to get her alone to experiment.

    Wilson always stared at Ava just a little too long. Although she was 'one of the boys' she was also very much not a boy. Wilson had been one of the ones that had stolen the old porn magazines and had brought them to the clubhouse for all of 'The Losers' (that's what they called themselves) to enjoy. The boys' dicks got long and hard and they didn't know why, but after seeing the porn magazines one of them figured it was to put in one of the dark, mysterious holes they had seen in the gashes between the older girls legs. Wilson had always had a thing for being curious about things. When he was younger, he wanted to know what it would be like to kill something, so he found some kittens and killed them, one by one in different ways, hanging them, drowning, cutting them open. He had done it in the woods and no one had known. He found a stray dog a year later and hung it. He then found another one and had cut its throat and it was thrilling. He had gotten hard over it and now with Ava there, he was wondering what it would be like to do a person.

    The rest of the boys were on various summer vacations this week, so it was just Wilson and Ava around and they both ended up at the clubhouse. He found Ava, leaned over the table, staring at the photos, touching herself through her crotch when he walked up. He didn't say anything at first, just watching her touch herself and what she was doing.

    The preteen tried very hard not to make too much noise as she rubbed her tiny little bean while flipping through the pages then back again. She especially liked the ones where the man were holding the girl by the throat and was curious about the ones where it looked like the guy had his cock all the way up some teenager's ass. Her pants were unbuttoned and tugged down just far enough to make it easier to masturbate without too much struggle. having tugged her panties aside and pumped her tiny eleven year old fingers in and out of her ripe little peach. Once in a while when she was particularly wet she'd teasingly poke at her little ass but recoiled when it stretched a bit too much or whenever the twinge of pain from stretching her hymen made the girl's legs quiver. She was utterly oblivious to Wilson spying on her at the moment as she read the accompanying perverted stories.

    Wilson just stood there, his dick getting harder. He touched the knife he had in his pocket and it occurred to him that this was the time and the moment. The other boys were gone. They were all by themselves in this forest and rotting shack and no one would hear. He quietly took a few steps back and then made a coughing noise as if he was just walking up. He wanted to see what Ava would do, her fingers buried in her own wet twat. "Oh, uhh, hi Ava," he said, trying to act innocent but he could already feel a wave of lust and power coursing through him, as if driven by something basic. There's a scent in the air that if he were older he would have identified with girl lube.

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    =Chloé's Graduation Party=
    Tags: Miraculous Lady Bug, Marinette Dupain-Cheng, Cannibalism, Snuff, Non-Consensual, Humiliation, Slavery, Bondage, Complete
    All characters in this story are 18 years or older.

    “Alright Marlena, we have a deal. Let me just get Marinette for you and- Oh! Marinette you have excellent timing! Come here for a second will you? Marlena and I have something to tell you.”

    Marinette blinked. Her dad was smiling, though he still looked looked fairly serious, and Alya's mom looked almost ecstatic. She wondered what was happening, but given their expressions, it couldn't be bad news.

    “Sure! What's going on, dad?” Marinette asked cheerfully.

    “Well, honey? Marlena here just offered your mom and I enough money that we can move into a bigger house and expand the shop!” Tom Dupain announced cheerfully.

    Marinette's eyes opened wide in shock, her jaw dropping at the news. “That's great dad!” she announced before she really thought over what her dad had declared. “Wait,” Marinette's brow furrowed thoughtfully, “Alya and her family aren't any better off than we are? How'd Alya's mom get the money and why is she giving it to us?”

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    >>16520
    I haven't been posting much here because it's really annoying to write for hours working on something and then get no responses at all. Gurochan doesn't even give me a counter to see how many times the thread has been read so it kind of feels like shouting into the void. It's not a fun feeling.

    Sorry this wasn't your cup of tea. If you want stories with more meat to them I've been posting them on Hentai-Foundry and other sites where I avctually get feedback. hxxp://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/thevisitorblack/35851/Priyanka-Caught-Spying That one includes tentacle rape with boiling water tentacles. There's some others up there too that might be more your scene as well.


    >>16504
    There's plenty of description. I mention Marinette's blue hair, her petite frame, her small breasts, her clothes, her personality, her race, how her skin is smooth and soft. You don't need a mechanical descripts that she's 5 foot 4 or what have you. This is meant to be a short story focusing on physchological and not physical aspects of the fetish. Cutting down on purple prose is in aid of that. The fact that you didn't recognize the names isn't because the show is obscure (it's actually pretty popular and airs on major networks in the US and multiple streaming services) it's because you personally don't watch it. I tagged the show in the title for a reason. This was a story about characters from that show. If you chose not to look them up that's on you, not on me.

    Now certainly there was no prep or actual snuff shown on screen. There was torture, but it was psychological and clearly that doesn't count for you. But I didn't say that there would be any torture. I tagged noncon, not torture. So that's not my fault either.

    The fact that the most "action" in the story is a sex scene and then a scene of the aftermath is in fact on me. It's intentional. This story (and the other stories of the series that I haven't been posting to gurochan because I'm pretty sure no one's reading any of my work since they're definitely not commenting) are exercises in seeing how little I can write of that sort of thing and still have it recognizably work as a guro story. Clearly it didn't work for you, but again, that's your preferences, not because the story itself is bad. And I'm not obligated to write to cater to your fetishes. I'm not obligated to post here at all. I do so because I believe that there are people who enjoy reading my work (despite rarely ever commenting nowadays).

    If you want ex

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    >>16522

    Who says you'll alter the way you write? The fact that you wasted writing this and reading my comment made me happy.

    Nobody cares about your writing anyway lol
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    >>16715
    Hey buddy? Wanna stop being an asshole?

    >>16443

    Always a fan of your work, man.
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    VisitorBlack is in my top list among thousands of authors!
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    >>16741
    >>16717

    Poor widdle piggie started thesockpuppets! Bwahahahaahahah

    Hello folks, I've got some spots open as far as erotic commissions are concerned and I wanted to make my talents available here, since I often cater to those with more niche fetishes and kinks.

    I write for a living, so you can expect a judgement free experience as well as a level of professionalism that you do not usually find when commissioning stories.

    I have handled a great many kinks and fetishes and will consider all requests. My rates are also very affordable and a free sample is always provided, so you have nothing to lose.

    I have several past commissions up on my HF page, but I do not have publicly available samples of my past guro works, but rest assured I've handled such before.

    Here are my HF and discord info, I hope to hear from any interested parties soon!

    HF
    http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Asswriter


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    What are your limits?

    Any higher power that would grant any better life to my enemies is not one I willingly and wittingly serve.
    If any god or comparable spirit or any entity at all uses me to further its own gains and also assists these cancers, who deserve only eternal torment and should have nothing more than to have never existed, then such which has used me has betrayed me and is evil for it
    If there is any God worth praying to, it will enable me to undo every awful thing that ever happened and erase any enjoyable moment for those who wronged me.
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    >>16624
    If this makes you cringe, you're weak.
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    Sure is summer in here.
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    >>16648
    up yours
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    >>16640
    Cringe, yikes, have sex, etc.
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    Mike entered the hospital room and slowly shut the door behind him, locking it with his keycard. "What took you so long?", a soft voice called out, startling him.

    Chris waved at him from her bed, amidst a forest of tubes, wires and monitors. Mike hurried over and dropped his backpack besides the bed. He leaned over and kissed his girlfriend on the lips. She pulled him in closer, and opened her mouth, letting Mike swirl his tongue around hers. Mike savored the sensation as they french kissed. The two broke off, saliva stringing from each others lips.

    Chris looked down at her lap. "Mike, I've gotten worse", she mumbled. "The doc says I've only got a couple weeks left in me". Mike felt his legs stagger, his heart dropping down into his stomach. "W-What? But t-the treatment was going so w-well", he stuttered in shock. She looked up at him, a regretful look on her face. "I lied", she said simply, her head turned away. "I was being selfish. Seeing you every day, I didn't want to see you sad or worried about me."

    Her fingers fidgeted with the IV tube inserted into her arm. She looked back at him, tears rolling down her face."I'm sorry, you deserved to know", her voice cracked.

    Mike sat on the bed, swung his legs over, and embraced her tightly. She wrapped her arms around his body and pulled him closer. "Fuck me", she whispered. Mike shivered as her warm breath caressed his ear. "I don't want to die a virgin."

    Chris pushed him away, sat up, and undid the buttons on her hospital gown, revealing her firm stomach and modest, palm sized breasts. Mike felt his dick twitch and pulse as she pulled the gown off entirely, leaving her naked. Before her illness, Chris had been the star of the Sir Oakbridge Secondary School Senior Girls soccer team, and her body still retained traces of that athleticism.

    Her slender fingers gracefully pulled the fly down on Mike's jeans. He felt his heart flutter as she pulled his semi erect dick out and grasped it in her warm palms. Chris pulled the bed sheet over them and jerked Mike's dick until it grew stiff and ram rod straight. She moved herself down the bed until she was face to face with Mike's manhood. She took his cock into her mouth and pushed herself down until her nose bumped against his pelvis. Chris bobbed her head up and down, licking and sucking Mike's cock. He felt his climax coming and grabbed her head, pushing it down as he blasting thick strings of cum down her throat. She pulled away, coughing and hacking.

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    >>16634
    This was pretty cute. You thinking of a sequel? Probably either a funeral fuck or even the mortician having a go?
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    >>16641
    Yeah, I was thinking about doing a sequel in the morgue.
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    One Last Time

    Robert the mortician slowly zipped open the bag. A young girl's serene face stared up at him, her dull, unseeing eyes reflecting the harsh white light of the surgical lamp.

    He felt his heartbeat quicken. Oh, how he loved to work on the young and attractive. Robert loved the feel of their soft skin, still pliant and smooth, running under his fingers. He loved their full heads of glossy hair, sometimes still braided or curled or put up in a ponytail, their fresh faces with not a hint of stress or age, still soft with youth.

    Most importantly, he loved to give the most attractive, most youthful "clients" (as he liked to refer to the corpses) a sending away gift for their trip to the afterlife.

    The mortician snapped back from his reverie and pulled the zipper down fully. Robert took a cursory glance at the ID tag tied to the girl's toe. One Christina Luccini, age 17. Time of death was 7:43PM, only half an hour ago. A patient from the palliative care ward.

    He jotted it down in his tablet, and continued looking over the body. Christina had been a sporty girl, he could tell. Her abdomen still bore the traces of a 6 pack, her thighs and legs were firm and still slightly muscular, and overall her form was slim with barely a trace of body fat. Robert leaned over and took a sniff. She smelt of sweat and of something vaguely pungent. He placed a finger on her stomach and ran it down to her pelvis. Her skin was slick with perspiration, and still slightly warm.

    Robert licked his lips, his fingers trembling in anticipation. He pulled open his trousers and gave his dick a few preparatory wanks. It sprouted up, stiff as a steel rod. With great care he clambered onto the table and slowly spread Chris's muscular legs open, only to stop in surprise at what he found. Her shaved pussy was moist and dripping with cum. Someone else had fucked her before him, perhaps a loved one visiting her one last time.

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    From a couple weeks to about five minutes? At least aim for some consistency.

    That said fucking terminal patients sounds hot.
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    >>16655
    I figured the extra physical exertion from having sex would strain her heart too much. Not that I'm a doctor or anything, I don't know if an actual terminal heart disease would be affected by fucking for about 5 minutes.

    Couldn't sleep because this setting kept running in my head, feel free to add to it or correct anything that seems off.

    Just as raven finished drying off after her bath she's assaulted by Terra. Who quickly slides 2 fingers in her.

    She quickly shoves her off and asks "what is it?"

    Terra answers "I just wanted a little taste of you." then sucks her fingers clean of Raven's juices. "MMM you sure you don't want to donate to the cook out? speaking of how do we look on meat for it?"

    "I'm certain I don't want to donate my clit and tits or my whole, we have plenty meat as it is, 15 criminals this month we busted for crimes enough to harvest, 12 cocks for the grill, 1 whole male, and 2 sets of clits and tits, I'm keeping the clits to myself this time."

    Terra responds "just cocks this time or cocks and balls? What can I do to get one of the clits? come on i'll do almost anything."

    "Just cocks I prefer to leave the balls, horny with no release is a more fitting punishment to me. as for the clit you'd like i'll trade you one for yours or maybe you can convince your BF Beast Boy to fuck me. I'm sure his shape shifting let's him find the perfect cock when he fucks. Then we can harvest his cock and let him regrow it. He can right?"

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    a lot of world building here. haven't seen a clit focused story before. Given the title I was gopping to see raven or terra cooked.

    Part 1
    Akaine opened the door into her cold and dark basement. She shivered for a second and turned the light on. Many eyes opened and widened, some in weariness and confusion, and some in fear. She smiled.

    “How is everyone?” She asked the room, but it stayed quiet. There were 4 different young women in the room, with the acception of one young man as well.

    There was Yuri, a small girl at the age of 11. She had soft blonde hair in pigtails accompanied by a light pink ribbon. She loved Disney shows and liked playing video games with her older brother.

    Nike, a senior in highschool, about to graduate. She had long, purple hair tracing down to her ass. Her body was very grown up, with D sized breasts and nice curves around her belly and thighs. She was a big anime fan and enjoyed the communities. She was a borderline weeaboo, even with a fictional “waifu”. Of course, no one in school knew that.

    Jasmine, a 15 year old with short, light brown hair. Her face was very soft looking and she was mistaken to be younger often. She was the only one of the girls wearing clothes, having a light pink skirt on and a small laced bra over her B cup breasts. She likes to watch dramas like Shameless and frequents tumblr.

    Christina, a 12 year old in the first year of middle school. She was a bit chubby but still had amazing curves and looked very pretty to Akaine. She had short, brown hair and had a purple ribbon covering most of it. She likes hanging out with her friends and enjoys chatting with people online.


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    Part 2 coming later tonight (Probably)
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    I'm looking forward to it. Please don't pull a me and forget all about it.
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    Interesting^^
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    Maddy the story! You forgot

    There hasn't actually been a lot of scat fics involving lolis (most of the ones here are made by Pottyboi). There are a few execution ones but they're too spread out across the board. Also try to post or link stories that are about the subject.
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    I don't write often, I'm sorry I leave you guys in want! I spend most of my…lets call it "recreation time" roleplaying on F-list.
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    >>16523
    it's alright, still love your writing!

    how does one roleplay with you on f-list? ^^;
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    Heh, you'd just have to bump into me when I'm online, have the right kinks and…well be at least a moderately decent rp partner.
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    Actually… I'm rewriting my story. The basic setting is a guy somehow becoming part of a group of people that have a common interest in the rape and torture of lolis.

    The main character eventually has a collection of lolis in the basement that he uses as urinals whenever he's not raping them and needs to piss. No shit, though.

    They once in a while get together at a party to get rid of the girls who's cunt has been worn out or just need to be replaced with an even prettier/hotter girl.

    The original story was called Fuck Toys part x. There were 6 parts posted at some point here in /lit.

    The story now has been significantly rewritten, though
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    If you'd like to try, you can send a note to "Oddball Lizzy" on F-list. I'll message you back when I can. Maybe we can play sometime

    How could I have been so careless? The Emperor was slain by a cutthroat assassin. The traitors swiftly seized control of the capital army. As Captain of the all-female Royal Guard I ordered a futile counterattack, but we were overwhelmed and had no choice but to surrender.

    Our captors stripped us of our dignity. We were paraded on the streets naked and in chains while the cityfolk pelted us with insults and eggs. At night the soldiers took great pleasure in defiling us. I was treated no better than a common whore, perhaps worse. I was beaten, sodomized, choked and urinated upon.

    Finally, our sentence of doom was passed. Those of us who remained were brought to the forum, a large plaza in front of the palace, where a rowdy crowd had gathered baying for blood. To further humiliate us, slaves were ordered to apply gaudy makeup on our faces. Denied the honor of dying as soldiers, we would die as prostitutes instead.

    A slanderous list of crimes was read out to all who were present. Soldiers lead the first five victims up onto the executioner's platform where they were bent over and locked into pillories. Behind them, executioners inserted long wooden spikes, thick as a man's arm, into their anuses, causing the poor girls to shriek in pain. Then the hammering began. With each strike the executioners destroyed their bodies and minds. With each strike came bloodcurdling cries or futile appeals for mercy.

    Gradually the screaming stopped. Soldiers carried the impaled girls out of the city, where we would line the roads and left to rot as a warning to any would be loyalists. A new batch of girls were brought onstage and the process repeated again. My shame reached new heights as I watched my friends and comrades die one by one.

    The Sun was now setting. I could hear the crows feasting on my sisters outside the gates. I stoically walked up the stairs to embrace my death. Seeking to rekindle excitement amongst the crowd, the traitors had their way with my body. Locked into the pillory, I could do little as they violated my anus. "Practice for the spike," they mocked.

    Spent and satisfied, the rebel leaders ordered the executioners to continue. No man's cock could have prepared me for this. The sharpened tip of the spike made its way into my prolapsed anus. I screamed my throat out. Then came the heartless hammering. More pain, more screaming.

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    Very good scenario. Thank you.
    A small regret is that the impalement is not vaginal and that, delivered to the gravity, the tortured women sink themselves little by little, by their own weight on a big wooden pole with the rounded tip and slightly conical.
    In this way, when the pole has entered more than 40 cm, the descent will be slowed down and stopped, because the diameter is larger than the internal pelvimetry of women …
    The crowd will be happy because the show will last very, very long.
    And maybe there will be no fatal outcome for the victims, already punished enough!
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    Oh wow, this is actually really fucking good. Erotic and well-written, well done.

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