nd were fighting there. The whips beat them without break as they were kicking, biting the other. When finally Jane managed to touch me there were no more connection between the girls. Jane bit the tip her own tongue off during the race, the mutilated bloody flesh was still attached to Syl's halfway teared pussy lips. Both of Syl's big toes were broken and one of the ring was teared from one of them. She was laying about 2 metres away, unconscious with bleeding tongue and lips, bruised swollen tits, bleeding pussy and feet. One of her nipples was gone, it was chained still to Janes toe, the other Syl-nipple was just teared open. Jane wasn't in better shape, but she was the winner. For Victoria's call guards came in, they grabbed Syl's still beautifull body and pulled her out from the room.

Jane was led out by Victoria from the room too, I stayed there with Angel and Kim. I took part in the next hour in the most wild sex act I could had imagined. I was tied on my back onto a big bed, of course I had strong death fear but for my luck they didn't want to torture me this time, only wanted me to help them. If I didn't look at Maria's corpse or didn't think about that Kim was only 10 that was the most enjoyable part of my visit in the castle. I was licking pussies almost all the time and had mine licked or fisted, no extremely brutal act happened, only passionate sex. I didn't cum or even enjoyed it although I was wet, but for my luck they didn't recognized it and they loved each other on the top my body.

After the sex I was degraded into a horse, I had to walk on my fours with Kim on my back while Angel led me. It was a very long walk, at the end I was so tired that almost fall under Kim, but as we left the building and I saw the crowd on the castle yard I understood that something important was to happen. We went to the stables.

Syl's eyes were full of tears and fear when we arrived to back of the stables. I could understand her. She was sitting on the ground with stretched legs, one ankle was chained to a tree in one metre high, the other was chained to the harness of tha stallion I sucked the day before. The chains were very loose of course, but I was sure they were to stretched soon. All of the guests were all around, I was forced to kneel before Angel and Kim. Jane was with Victoria and the King, after the torments she suffered earlier that day she was in bad condition, but still alive. I could see that she lost all of her teeth, her lips were swollen as she sucked the King's extremely long cock. For the King's sign a guard beat the horse with his riding cord, and the animal jumped forward.

Syl let out a thrilling scream as the chains tightened, her body was lifted in the air. The chains between Syl, the tree and the horse were stretched totally, as stretched Syl's long, shapely legs too. I've never seen such slender legs before, especially when the horse strengths made them stretched to their maximum. Syl made a perfect string, she grabbed her thighs with her hands and tried to pull them back, as her upper body was hanging upside-down. Her long blonde hair fell into the dirt under her. Her screams were so high-pitched that the horse went even wilder, tried to run, but the girls body didn't let him. The guard beat the stallion more and more, and the pressure increased in Syl's joints. I've never seen such a cruelness. She tried to pull back her legs, but I heared cracks as her joints were slowly disconnected. I could see as her tendons stretched extremely in her ankles first, then in her knees and at least in her thighs. Her screams went even wilder when the tendons ripped, small bloodmarks appeared under her skin.

For some seconds only her skin held the girl's legs together, but suddenly blood started to pour, and with a loud crack her leg which was chained to the horse ripped from her body, and the horse started to gallopp pulling the bloody leg behind him. Syl fell onto the ground, blood ran from her mutilated body. Her beautifull face was a mask of pain as she stopped screaming and lied there in shock. Kim ran to her bleeding body, push her pretty face into the stub of Syl's leg and started to drink with big gulps. I've almost fainted to see all this. Syl died within 5 minutes, her beautifull eyes were staring lifelessly after the stallion.

"That was really fine!" the King smiled.

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>>17330
Loved this too, and it does remind me of Bloodlust's work.

I think the title is correct enough, though I would probably say "One Less Witch in the World." But I'm being picky again. Thinking about it more, it really should be "fewer", not "less", but that ruins the impact. And "One Fewer Witch" sounds wrong to me. Maybe someone with glasses who knows about "words and stuff" can help.

Harassment doesn't seem quite strong enough… Maybe Assault? Murder? Torture? Brutalization?

Anyway, those are minor considerations. The grammar is way better than your first story. Looking forward to more!

Thanks both. I checked better the grammar this time. I want to write a prequel and a final part for this if I manage to have enough different ideas. I'm thinking to create a single thread and update it, I don't like to create too much threads.

He should have shot her in the pussy tbh

>>17353

Sorry, pussy shots are not my thing

Great short story! And I agree with Bloodlust. Who I'm also a fan of his stories.
Shooting scenes are my favorite as well. Hope to read more from you!

>>9487

Wow, was this you on NPR just now?
hxxps://www.npr.org/2019/08/02/747476419/polar-photographer-shares-his-view-of-a-ferocious-but-fragile-ecosystem

A really nice story i enjoyed reading it. You looking to finish the Story?

>>17247
Nope, I do scuba dive though, so I'm familiar with hopping into chilly waters!

I love excessive cruelty, and just had to chime in that I enjoyed how well-written this was, as well as the meta humor.

This one was made in 2 parts… 1st was written the ending and then the beginning was added so it sound awful…


Comodo had many opponents in his career as a Killing Bites champion but today was special for him. Brute Rabbit organized a private fight between him and Brute Ratel! He stood in front of this famous new brute and he could not stop himself from ogling her body. she was ready and in her transformed form wearing only pair of white panties and a white t-shirt. She was stretching in front of him to warm her muscles. Her huge breasts swayed from side to side and bounced in with her movements. bit.ly/2SRt1gW She locked eyes with him and smiled "Like what you see? This fists will be the last thing you will see in your life!" she said showing him her fist and then going into a battle stance. "Stupid girl. I will enjoy your body long after i kill you! You will fit perfectly on my wall between my previous kills! " Comodo said and crouched while turning on his own transformation, his head elongated, eyes turns into those of an raprilian, his hands and arms covers in thick scales and his fingers turn into sharp claws… "Come at me little girl if you are ready to die!" Ratel didynt wait as rushed at Comodo with her incredible speed she closed the few meters separating them in a second and her claw aimed at Comodo neck but before she could reach her target Comodos maw opened and his head snapped in the patch of Ratel outstretched arm.

SNAP with a snap Comodo jaws closed on Ratel forearm and before she could hit him with her other claw he jumped backward letting go of her arm. Ratel looked at her bleeding arm, her skin was cut in many places as rows of sharp like needles fangs penetrated and ripped the skin.
Comodo stood up and smiled. "Well i was really expecting you to come more prepared… this turned out to be a very boring match…" Rattle shaked her arm acting like she didynt care about her injury. "Hah? This? This is nothing i can, and will still kick your a..a….ass… what the…" she swayed and collapsed on her knees. "What did yy..you do to m…" Comodo smiled widely and started to undo transformation on his head. "My saliva you stupid vermin… it contain special toxin that no animal can withstand.
And for you i was extra sure to make it potent to the limits of my ability. You should have more or less around a minute of life left…" He looked closely at Ratel shaking body only thing she could move now was her head, her breasts shaking from short forced breath and her legs twitching uselessly… Then he looked to the side at Brute Rabbit.
She looked completely in shock her mouth open agape and her eyes locked firmly on Ratel "You should have enough life in you to see this" Comodo said as he with a blinding speed rushed to Rabbit and with a slash of his clawed hand decapitated poor unsuspecting Rabbit. Rabbit felt a sudden burning sensation on her neck but a second letter she felt nothing.
As the word spined she saw her own chest white bandana covering her breasts slipping down revealing one of her breasts and then with a thud she landed on the ground, she saw her body from a perspective under her own crotch her pussy hidden in her fluffy fur was starting to get wet and was twitching like crazy. "eh?What is this? How did i… " was all she could think of before her vision started to fade to dark. Last think she could feel but not see was something warm spraying all over her face.. Commodo laughed as the Rabbit body frozen in a crouching pose started to piss over her own head. "Well that's a proper end for a coward like her dont you think?" He said turning to Ratel but his words fallen on deaf ears. Ratel body was only shaking as her eyes were forged over and it was certain life have already pleated her body. "Oh well." he said and walked to Ratel body. "Time for some fun with you girls while you are still warm" He dragged Ratel limp shaking body and throw it on top of Rabbit. He used his sharp claws to rip away Ratel shirt letting her breasts bounce around for a bit as he played with them slapping them with his hands and pinching her dark hard nipples.

Next he shredded her panties and with whistled when he saw a patch of thick but short black pubes covering her pussy in a nice soft carpet but leaving her slit completely bare. And what a nice slit it was, with how socially awkward Ratel was she never had sex or even masturbate. It was truly a tight and virgin pussy. Comodo put his hands under her ass and lifted her hips up to his face. Her breasts bounced up and down on her chest as he pushed his face between Ratel tights and started licking her salty slit, his nose firmly on her pubes taking strong sniffs of her salty and fresh smell, it felt like a mix of young girl pheromones, sweat and fresh pee.
His long tongue leaped between her tight labia and pussy as his dick literally broke out of his pants. It was huge but not gigantic. He didynt wanna to destroy his new toy. In the meantime Rabbit body lay completely still under Ratel. Her own huge breasts slipped completely free from her bandana and now were handled by Ratel back, her weight squeezing them and pushing Rabbit huge hard nipples into dead Ratel back fuzzy fur. Rabbits head layd between all 3 bodies legs if she could see all she would see is a pair of balls as they pushed inside her own tight and fluffy anus pushing it open painful. As much as she was a slutt It was her 1st time taking a men in that hole…

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I watch way too much horror - "my wet and horney pussy" conjured up Lovecraftian images for me!

Man I wish I could have seen him live his era

>>17203
Yes, I did mention the sudden change of tense and the pronoun / dialog tag thing in the email. Those things jumped out at me too. Ha! I even said the same thing about it being resolved in the context… I actually spent 2 hours going through the story line-by-line, so I probably gave more feedback than was strictly necessary. But it's a great little story, and I thought it was worth it.

BTW, when is Julie going to get dieded / demised again? I don't know if I mentioned it before, but you're one of my absolute favourite guro authors.

Hey, thanks, man. I appreciate that. I'm not sure when I'll finish something new. I took a break and didn't write much of anything for a few months, and just over the last couple days inspiration struck and I got back into it a little, but it comes and goes. I also have trouble sticking to one story. I have like six different stories in the works, some of which I haven't touched in a year or more, and another dozen in my head floating around, evolving, trying to come out.

>>17205
Wow that's incredible! I have enough trouble with just one story tbh.

Fanmode ON

Bloodlust, I read your Julie stories and I loved them (and love her, every time I don't know if I want to see her die slaughtered or live happy), I'm very glad you like it. Probably it's the best snuff collection I read (and outmatch also a lot of normal literature). "Webseries" gave me chills for two days. I can confirm, we have very similar kinks (less guts for me) and a similar victim preference.
I have a story with a "Julie" that I could post if it's not a problem.

Fanmoxe OFF

Thanks for the tips and I hope in another Julie misadvendture soon

Thank you, OfixN. I’m really glad you enjoy my stuff. Of course you can post a story about Julie. I’d love that.

The best advice I could probably give you about writing is if you enjoy it, keep at it. The only way to get better at writing is to keep writing.

Obviously, thanks to Squunch that helped me with my grammar

>>17150
If you're not going to bother with an effort and writing your own stories, don't make a thread on /lit/, make a thread on /req/.

>>17151
*making an effort

>>17151
Harsh, but fair.

OP, you can write stories, and IMO you should give it a go. Consider the benefits:

1. It'll improve your writing, which will improve your thinking too.

2. It'll improve your self confidence, because you're learning a skill.

3. You'll learn many things about yourself.

4. You'll learn something about other people, and the generosity of strangers.


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>>17132
If you manged to write this "request" you should be capable to write story as well.

Also this is not relay even an idea but actually story itself, idea is when you invent some kind of plot to justify logic of the story so that it becomes predictable.
it is not enuogh to give idea what characters are doing you need to tell why they are doing it. only when we know what is their goal we can write a story how they achieve that goal.

I agree with Squunch and Onix - have a stab at it yourself! Stories on here don't have to be works of high literature :) Just have fun and see how it goes!

Barbecue Sister 1

Elizabeth, a beautiful little 18 year old girl and her wicked step-brother
Tommy and his evil friend Gary, both 20, were all driving up to their remote
family summer cabin deep in the woods. After a long journey, Elizabeth says
"Where is Mom and Dad?" "They won't be arriving - we will be here all alone
and Gary and I are going to teach you a lesson for being so mean to me all
these years" "Yeah, asshole step-brother, so what are you going to do to me?"
"We are going to skin you, cook you and eat you alive!" "Right, asshole,
where's Mom and Dad?" The two boys then grabbed Elizabeth and ripped off all
her clothes. The startled 18-year-old stood naked in the middle of the cabin
living room floor. She was a beautiful 18-year-old girl. She had firm
grapefruit-sized breasts, large for a girl her age. Her body was perfect,

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think we should eat parts of your little pussy lips raw, like "sushi",
before the roast the rest of your body. We have to tenderize the meat. Get up
on the table. They untied her and put her partially skinned body up on the
table. Her de-skinned tits and ass hurt like hell. They laid her down on the
kitchen table and spread her long legs wide. This exposed two pairs of
delicate pussy lips protecting the little 18-year's vagina. One of the boys
found a razor in the bathroom. The frightened 18-year-old spread her legs
wide. They roughly shaved the peach fuzz off Elizabeth's tender vagina lips.
When all of her pubic hair had been removed, it left her voluptuous little
pubic mounds as clean and as smooth as polished alabaster. Then from the
delicate, outer depilated skin, he unfolded her little petals, working with
one pair of lips at a time. He peeled the pliant tissue open, folded it back.
Then her brother took long sewing needles and pinned the tender lips open to

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"Before we cook you my sister, we have to push this roasting pole through you
so you can rotate over the coals". Elizabeth's cute little teenage body went
stiff. Lying on her back She sobbed uncontrollably. What were they going to do
to her now? They turned her long legged body over with her cute little skinned
bubble butt in the air. They grabbed the sharp pointed stainless steel pike,
the tip of the impaling pike was then moved upward to poke deeply into the
little girl's cunt. It felt like a huge dildo! Elizabeth's muted scream was
agonizing as she felt the thick skewer pass deep into her tight but recently
fist fucked vagina. Then she felt it a snap as it breaks through her cervix.
The boys carefully moving the impaling spike back and forth to miss her vital
organs. She could feel it pass into and through her intestines. Her screams
were quickly cut short as the pike cut into the pathway from her lungs to her
throat. Her air was cutoff by the pike as it came out her mouth. Her brother

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Her brother looked his sister directly into her face. Her eyes were closed and
blood dripped down the corners of her mouth where she had bitten through her
lips. He grasped her hair, pulled her head back and shouted into her ear. "Can
you hear me, Sis? Her eyes fluttered open as he splashed more cold water on
her face. She starred into her brother's face. With great difficulty she
managed to speak, They gave her water, but they had to hover close to hear to
hear her shaky voice. "You don't have to kill me anymore. I want to see how
fair I can go with this. Most of the pain is gone now except when you slice
through my muscles. I was going to beg you - Oh God, please, p-l-e-a-s-e, to
let me die. To Kill me, please to kill me" But now I'm awake. She speaks
slowly and softly "It too late to back out now. You gave me some great
stimulants, some acid, great painkillers - I'm floating. Let's get on with
this barbecue, I'm hungry too". The boys fell back in shock! Was she really

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Elizabeth asked for one more hit of acid and painkiller. She became very
philosophical. The three of them had many barbecue memories. Elizabeth's
beautiful firm grapefruit sized breasts, which were actually quite meaty, with
just a little bit of marbled fat. There was intense erotic pleasure from all
three of cutting and eating her breasts. By carefully carved around the perky
dark nipple and areola, and saving these precious pebbles for later in the
meal made everyone excited and that much more special. Saving her bruised
pussy lips, clit and carved out genitals, and sharing her vagina, lips, clit
was a spiritual sharing for all three. Her being able to watch her hard body
being carved into thick juicy steaks and roast cuts and roasting the inner
layers while tasting different portions of her flesh was perfect fantasy.
Elizabeth's thigh and calf meat was the leanest, but all three agreed that
liked the taste the marbled meat carved from the tight little ass. All three

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>>10410

While this one isn't from me, there's a story about Arya that someone else posted a few days ago, and I found it to be quite good. Short and on point.



For some reason I can't post a direct link to the thread, but hopefully this will work:

>>10999

Otherwise, look for "No-One (Game of thrones)" in the /lit/ list.

I haven't visited Gurochan in many months and wasn't even aware that it moved to .cx… I recall that there was a spam wipe of /lit/ at some point and that my Chaos Is A Ladder fell off the board due to that. I wanted to re-post it now that Gurochan is alive and now that the GOT finale is upon us, but would you look at this, the thread is actually still here!

So, I'm shamelessly bumping my own old stuff I guess, but with the series finale happening now, maybe you'll enjoy this trip down the memory lane to the simpler times when Joffrey was having fun torturing a prostitute with crossbow shots.

At the very least, this story has better writing than the current season, if I dare say so myself. :P

This is far, far better than the shit D&D have written. Thank you for this. Btw there are only 10 minutes from last episode, really don't want to see it ;p

Despite all its nudity, I never found Game of Thrones to be a sexy show, and I was never really attracted to any of the characters. Ygritte and Jon were a cute couple, but that was about it.

The world building has some hot situations though. I think the misadventures of a slavegirl in Qaarth would be good to read. Maybe magic is involved, or permanent bondage, both things we know are in the realm of possibility there because Dany was threatened with them. Maybe someone less fortunate than her finds herself harvested, either her flesh (she is slowly dissected and each valuable part of her is prepared and packaged for sale before her eyes), or her sexual energy (bound on a bed and used to produce aphrodisiacs), or some magical source inside her (chained in the dark and forgotten). She's stolen from her free life and used up somehow, in an afternoon or a few months or a lifetime, one more disposable luxury for Qaarth's elites.

>>17110
>slavegirl
>free life

I wasn't paying attention :p
Either one is hot though.

Always exciting to see another of your stories! This was a fun one.

Ellen, this is the story yours reminded me of :)

The ride was long and uncomfortable. There were stops, here and there. The ground becoming a little colder and damper each time, but aside from that it was always the same.

She was taken off of what she'd deemed to be a train, and tied squatting to a post above a hole in the ground. Then while she did what she thought she was supposed to, her gag would be removed, and a rather generous bottle of water would be forced down her throat. She found it all deliciously degrading, but her peers didn't seem to like it as much (judging from the screams and obsceneties that still made their way past her headphones).

After what must have been two days of travel, and most of the country, she was finally taken off of the train.

A far less gentle attendant pulled her up, and the lead through her nose ring was attached to the cuffs of the reduced in front of her, before her cuffs were attached to that of the one behind her.

An outsider would have seen a guy dressed like he was from a paralel universe where cops were surgeons pulling a train of 20 hunched over females with their hands tied to the face of the one behind them.

After a few minutes of walking, the convoy was dismantled, and Seven's whole sensory deprivation rig was removed in favor of a helmet.

As some generic goon strapped her down into what was seemingly an electric chair, she looked around the tiny room she found herself in.

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>>16910
Best one so far!

I love this part ! Continue like that please ! :)

Excellent stuff!

More detail in the future please.

plot twist: she is still a person, she just can't talk! She understands speech after all :D

Opportunistic Part 2

17 year old Marina Clifford sprinted down the back alley, panting. She glanced at her watch and cursed. "Late for class again, Mrs. Hillier is gonna kill me!" she groaned as she vaulted over a fence. Her feet smacked into a slightly raised brick and she tripped. The girl gasped as she fell face first into something large.

Balisiphos had been resting in the shade of a back alley when his second meal of the day ran head first into him. He swiftly grabbed hold of the girl and examined her. She was wearing a summer school uniform, white short sleeve blouse and a dark blue skirt, fashionably rolled up above the knees. Her tanned brown skin, running shoes, and firm, fit body pointed to an active lifestyle. Balisiphos grunted in disappointment. The flesh of sports girls and tomboys were a bit too tough for his tastes. However, his hunger overruled his picky tastes.

Marina looked up at the…thing holding her. Her eyes were as wide as saucers. She felt the thing's tentacles slip around her torso. It tore open her blouse and skirt, revealing large G-cup breasts held down by a grey sports bra, black bike shorts, and a toned stomach.

"What the fuck do you want from me?" she asked, her tone defiant despite the fear beating within her chest. The monster's multiple eyes blinked. "I'm going to eat you", it stated simply.

Two of the tentacles sprouted razor sharp claws.
Before Marina could say anything, the clawed tentacles sliced an incision straight down from the center of her chest to the bottom of her pelvis. Two more tentacles stretched open the skin flaps from the cut, exposing her ribcage and internal organs to the mid-morning sun. The girl squealed, more in shock than in pain as Balisiphos began to scoop up her intestines and slurped them into its mouth, like noodles.


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Would love more pussy death here

Would like a story where a girl doesn't instantly realize she's been stabbed

High Value Target

The squad of special operations soldiers stacked up on the door of the complex. It was the dead of night, with heavy cloud cover blocking out even the dim light of the moon. All the men had night vision goggles over their eyes, giving them the appearance of bipedal, rifle carrying insects with compound eyes.

The point man placed a slipknot of detcord on the door handle, set the charge, and shielded his eyes. The charge blew, blasting the door off its hinges in a shower of sparks and wood splinters. The squad moved in a synchronized, heavily polished manner, sweeping the first floor. Cpt. Rourke, the leader of the group took over point, his suppressed MCX rifle coughing in single shots, dropping the dazed armed guards who were wandering about.

The first floor was cleared of combatants, and the men quickly moved up a flight of stairs. They entered the second floor and saw 5 women of various ethnicity huddling by a door. Rourke calmly raised and emptied his rifle into them, watching through the green tint of his NVGs as they twitched and jerked from the bullets slamming through their bodies. Slumping over each other, the women died groaning in pain.

His second in command, Lt. Farrad walked over to the body pile and knelt down, examining the deceased women. Many of them were foreigners, disenfranchised westerners radicalized by their target online. Most looked very young as well, which fit with the sexual appetite of the target individual. They moved on to the door, stacking up once again. Rourke placed another slipknot of detcord on the handle, looked away, and detonated the charge.

The team burst into the bedroom and saw the target surrounded by a group of children, all girls. They were in various states of undress, hugging the target tightly with expressions of terror. The man reached for a Glock, and Rourke placed a bullet in his head. The children screamed as the man crumpled backwards, falling off the bed and onto the floor. "What'll we do with the kids?", Farrad asked. "Ice them, we can't let this leak", Rourke replied coldly.

The two men opened up on the girls, automatic fire ripping through soft, budding chests and pudgy, childish bellies. Sixty rounds of 5.56x45mm made quick work of the kids, leaving them sprawled all over the bed and floor, wheezing and gurgling their last breaths.

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