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    Synopsis: Dima has feelings for the village heart-throb, but with one complication: this person has been branded a traitor. Will there be justice? SHORT STORY - COMPLETE



    Introduction: Hi, this is my first story ever on this forum. I hope you enjoy--honest feedback is appreciated. Contents: M/M, violence, sexual torture. Don't want to give too much away, so I'll leave it at that.



    Misha the Traitor



    Mikhail was a gorgeous young man. I thought so. Hell, the whole village did. It was unusual given the ravages of civil war that our region had experienced. The tentative peace, but lack of aid from neighboring countries meant that nearly all of us were impoverished and starving. We were alone. However, as structured as life can be here, I’d like to think the system our elders have established is a just one.

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    I liked it! I appreciate the attention to story. I think it improves the over all feel. I always like to know the characters rather than them being just a faceless or personalityless torture doll. I'd love to read more of your work!

    Story by MackieMesser:



    I picked her for her beauty, this sweet looking little child, this 12 years old girl. Life was ahead of her and I was about to rip it apart for my own personal sexual pleasure. The most arousing thing that I could think of in my life, is using a young female preteen child in order to fulfill the raging lust fantasy of a grown man for murder and rape. That's what I am, a grown man lurking for a sweet little girl to undo.



    She laid there in my lair, a scheduled little shack in the middle of nowhere. Capturing her wasn't an easy task, but here she was, at my mercy. Mercy? I wouldn't have any for her. I was resigned to consider her as meat for my own enjoyment. All her feels and all of her dreams would soon vanish with her bloody death. I was going to murder her, I was going to rip everything out of her.



    She was a 4 foot 7 brunette with brown eyes, and pale rosy skin. I could read the fear into her eyes. She was looking with her petrified, watery eyes at the face of her antichrist, the man who would ruin and degradate her. Her rosy skin was arousing me, I could literally see the blood that I was going to spill, her translucent skin was showing me her veins that I was about to tear into. She was tied and gagged on a bed; the light was very bright, and a snowstorm raged outside. Her chest was moving in rhythm from up and down, her tiny budding breasts being obvious to my sight. Her breasts were perfectly shaped, with pink little girl's nipple on top.

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    My real life story (from an alternative universe)



    Synopsis

    Ch1

    Hi There

    I am Jeremy, 36 & this is my true story that occurred in an alternate universe.

    I 1st met Alison when she way 19 in the noughties at a Goth/Fetish club in Sydney. We were both uni students, I was studying computer science & she was an arts French history major on a student visa from the USA.

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    CH 2



    Ch 2.

    The Modern day

    Fast forward 10 years the kids are now growing too wonderful atypical kids. Alice, now a 14 yo Emo chick who has inherited her mums sluttiness, while Bernard at 11 has grown into a very girly boy.

    Work still has me away from home for a large part of the year, however the trannies have moved in with us into the granny flat and we have a very open four-way relationship and I am allowed to play away from which often sees me in Baths and saunas laying in a sling are you.

    For the times I was on deployment we had set up a web cam stream from the granny flat so the guys could show me everything I was missing out on. Alison getting double fucked and fisted by the trannies and all the random dykes, trannies and queens they would bring home for bareback orgies that ended with everyone filled with everyone else’s cum. We were all on prep so this didn't concern me and I was taking just as much from random trannies and lady boys when I was away.

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    Ch3.



    After a full day with the kids doing the tourist shit in Atlanta like going to the world diabetes headquarters at Coca-Cola we drove our rental car back to the farm. We were running early as we weren’t expected until dinnertime but when we arrived the sun was still up and the kids wanted to see the horses so went to take a look at them. I knocked on the front door there was no but there was no answer, however it was unlocked and I let myself in in.

    I heard some voices coming from upstairs assuming everyone was with Louis I went up to say hi. What I saw there blew my mind, Alison and Victoria were both naked playing with each other’s breasts & pussies while on the bed was a young transsexual in her teens riding the large cock of Alison’s emaciated father bareback. Having not being noticed I quietly went back downstairs grabbed the kids, and knocked very loudly at the front door announcing us.

    We heard a voice from upstairs tell us to come in and help ourselves to a drink from the kitchen and I’ll be down in the second. A few minutes later Alison, Victoria and the transsexual now wearing a nurses uniform appeared. Victoria introduced the nurse as Violet or Vi for short, and that she was Allison niece and Greg’s daughter.

    My head was swimming with questions from that scene but I saw that was just so hot but I knew I would have to tread carefully.

    We had a lovely dinner, Vi Took a plate up to Louis as it was too ill to join us at the table.

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    CH 4a

    The following day, as I fibbed about going to work, I check in to a motel in town before noon and verify all the camera streams are working from the secret server I left at the house. I was not expected back until the following evening so I made myself comfortable

    Not long after, Alison, Victoria, Vi & louis return from the clinic, although as it turns out the clinic is actually the name of a tattoo parlour. Vi is still excited about her new tattoo.

    “How does it feel baby” asks Victoria, “Numb & tingly” replies Vi “but now I have the same marking as you & grandad, What do you think of my new tattoo mom?” Vi asks while lifting up her nurses tunic to show above her hairless cock a biohazard symbol superimposed over a pentagram. “We all have them around here” says Louis dropping his pants & exposing his tattoo above his cock while Victoria slipped off her dress & displayed the same tattoo above her clit. “it is a symbol of our faith & shows that we are fully initiated into the congregation” Victoria said.

    Alison looked Vi into the eyes, while running her fingers over the new tattoo and said “ it is beautiful baby” before grabbing the back of her head and pulling her close into a passionate kiss, and just what did Vi mean by mom when talking to Alison?

    With this her mother dropped to her knees behind her to start licking her anus whilst starting to wank her husband to get him hard. Victoria once Louis was nice and hard, stopped her fluffing & allowed him to approach & mount his daughter from behind while she retrieved & put on a huge 14 in strapon, that she then mounted Vi with while they remained in a tonged tied embrace.

    I could see from the camera angle Louis’ back as he fucked his bare cock into my wife, his daughter’s arsehole at least a dozen or so purple lesions on his back. They fucked hard and fast for about 5 minutes, Vi had in this time gone to her hands & knees, still being fucked by Victoria hard & was eating Alison while she way sodomised by her sick father’s massive cock. As the 4 of them reached a crescendo, Louis yelled “Do you take this seed of Satan my daughter?” to which Alison screamed “fill me with Satan’s toxic cum daddy!’

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    I decided to make a thread for my stories that are too short for their own thread.



    This first one is a a Danganronpa: Ultra Despair Girls story. At one point, the two playable characters are put into a battle against each other. It's heavily implied that Toko's holding back during the fight, so the idea of a story when she didn't came naturally. I tried to stay true to the game, with most of the dialogue taken from what the girls say during the battle.



    Komaru Loses a Fight (F, slashing, debreasting, snuff)



    “Guess there’s no other way… by force if I have to…” Toko Fukawa commented with a note of sadness.

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    Oh look, I wrote another Danganronpa fic O.o



    Maki's Last Assassination (MM/F, non-con, rape, necro, beheading, impalement)



    Maki Harukawa sighed as she threw the bag over the fence, then climbed over it herself. having made sure no one was around to notice her. Since according to her intel the security here was pretty low, she didn’t bother changing from her school uniform into something more fitting of the Ultimate Assasin. Because of that, her skirt was caught by the top of the fence, and as she came down her black skirt was torn just at the crack of her butt, leaving parts of her shapely ass exposed. The sharp pull backwards sent her off-balance, and she rolled onto the ground to regain balance. Rolling over a few sharp stones, she hurt her legs, her red overknee socks cut in a few spots. She got up, pretty annoyed, and wiped the dust off her red shirt, then checked if her knife was still in its place. Since it was, she took out the crossbow out of her bag and assembled it, then moved out. Her two long black ponytails flowed freely behind her as she began the search for her target.





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    Uraraka improves herself!

    “Are you absolutely sure, that this will make me stronger?” Uraraka ask still in disbelieve, that’s she actual plan to do it!
    “Well, there are other options you can try… but nothing will work as fast and efficiently like cutting off your breast.” Deku explains blushing.
    Deku’s notes are 100% perfect. He knows every strength and especially every weakness, from his Classmates. His notes say, that’s her breasts are too heavy for her small body! Her body instinctively compensate it, using her quirk to hold them in balance…
    That is why she always feels nausea when she changes the gravity of her own body. Her body is thrown out of balance.
    However, if she removes these two obstacles, she would have much better control over her quirk. It would improve her skills by about 17.2%. According to Deku.
    “I know. I know!” she shouts shyly. “Still… roasting them, sound a little bit extreme.” Normally she is cheerful girl but this situation it’s a little bit difficult.
    Yaoyorozu taps her shoulder. “You wanted to get artificial replacements, right? If you want them to be realistic. Then it isn’t enough to see them. I must also feel and taste them. Otherwise my Quirk doesn’t work.” She grins. “Besides, it would be a waste to throw them away.”
    Uraraka looks at the floor. “And they really would feel realistic?”
    Yaoyorozu continues to explain. "They will be like the real deal, only smaller. I bought all the material from which women breasts are made. There will be no bare copies, they will be real breasts!”
    Urarake sighs. "Okay, but please don’t tell anyone that I'm doing this. If someone asks, we just have to come up with an excuse!"
    "I'm doing it with my own regularly. So far, you haven’t noticed." Yaoyorozu laughs.

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    It's a clever idea and I mean no offense, but this was a little painful to read due to all the errors. A few I can ignore but I spent so much effort decrypting what you meant that I had no brainpower left to get immersed in the story.

    What I'm saying is that you could really use a editor and I have plenty of free time ;)
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    Dude there's a difference between being critical and being a jerk.
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    "You make spelling errors, I had a hard time. I'll edit for you if you want." Oh yeah such an asshole.
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    The first story was good, the second was not that interesting.

    I did not notice any serious spelling errors that would ruin the experience.

    but if you want to make it better you should do spellcheck with something like Ginger or Grammarly
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    Would you mind doing the Nintendo or Disney princesses?

    Church of the Fallen Angel



    by Regis







    BACK STORY

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    Mostly written for myself, but I figured I'd post it here in case anyone else finds it enjoyable.







    Chihiro Fujisaki was a student of Hope's Peak Academy for a fairly long while. He was enrolled as the "Ultimate Programmer", due to his unmatched expertise in the field. This was what allowed him to enroll in the first place, as the academy only accepted students that are the best of the best at what they do- a.k.a. "Ultimate" students.



    Chihiro met a boy named Makoto Naegi, the "Ultimate Lucky Student", shortly after enrolling in the academy, and the two immediately hit it off. Makoto was about a year older than the programmer, but he was much taller. Eventually, Chihiro became comfortable enough with him to reveal his secret- that he was a male.

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    I have been enjoying the new stories on the board too much to find time to write any more of my own, so here is a story I wrote a while back.

    The New Nursery (preg, cons, snuff, MF + g-unborn)

    The pregnancy happened by surprise, but they started getting ready for the new arrival the day the home test came up positive. She didn't have any plans to make, since she hadn't yet started looking for a job after getting her computer science degree. His schedule at the hospital was flexible, and with male nurses in short supply, he had no trouble working extra shifts so that he could take off work completely for several months. She turned her home office into the nursery. As her due date drew nearer, and irregular contractions reminded them that they needed to hurry, they painted it in a jungle print pattern, with light and dark green, accented with an orange-red sky. They planned ahead, and the smell of paint was long gone now. But they never did get around to pulling up the protective plastic tarp that covered the wood floor, and all the baby furniture was pushed to the middle of the room.

    With her contractions starting, though, it was time to move the furniture back into place. They moved the crib and changing table, though of course he did most of the lifting. Even so, perhaps because of the moving, or perhaps just from seeing the baby's room take shape, she noticed that her contractions were becoming more regular. The small guest bed and the baby's dresser were still in the wrong place, so she sat on the end of the bed and breathed through the contraction. He came over and kissed her on the lips, then between her breasts, and then pulled up her T-shirt and kissed her bulging belly.

    "You're contracting," he said. "Ten minutes apart," she whispered, loving the feeling of his hands on her belly. "Kiss me more," she said in a low voice.

    He pulled the shirt up to reveal her breasts, dark nipples full of milk, pulling to the sides but too engorged to go far. He kissed her left nipple, drawing it into his mouth and feeling the hot milk on his tongue. In just a few minutes, they were both naked, as he knelt at the foot of the bed between her legs, teasing her femininity. This had been their favorite position for the last two months, with her scooted to the end of the bed, legs hanging off the edge or on his shoulders, vulva exposed as though ready to give birth. As he nibbled her labia, teasing her vagina, he noticed how she tasted different, sweeter, and he could feel his desire building. This was it, he
    realized, the end of nine months of hidden, secret desire. Could he really do what his soul begged him to do? Could he really experience his ultimate fantasy?


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    Wow! Great story!
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    >>10588

    please please please write more
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    >>11173

    The genre has a small but dedicated following. I've posted my stories in the past on the PGS2 Google email group. I just don't have time these days.

    The constant breeze was humid and warm, felt almost alive. It was too dark to see, but and the way it touched the more sensitive areas of her body made Libby realize that she had been stripped naked. Very slowly, her eyes started to adapt to the gloom.

    Libby felt dizzy. She tried to stay calm, to figure out where exactly she was: Near the wall of a large, circular chamber with weak lighting she now started to perceive as bluish green.

    Only it was no chamber: Every surface was glistening like wet skin, translucent even at some places, and fine veins seemed to cover everything. Inspecting the ceiling was like looking at a giant mushroom's head from below, lamellae spanning from the outer walls to the center, where things that looked like large eggs lined the slimy ground.

    And everything seemed to be breathing somehow, moving in a slow rhythm, like a giant organism.

    While all of this was disturbing, it played but the smallest role in Libby's discomfort.



    The actual horror emerged from the sight of all the other women and girls around her, arranged in a large circle along the wall. Even with her 24 years, most of them looked younger to her, and none much older. All of them were naked, their arms and legs held in place by some kind of tentacles that seemed to grow from the organic walls of their prison.

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    Those breasts are going to get her killed, she ought to take them off somehow ;)
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    This is completely and utterly fantastic. It hit all of my buttons, specially the alien rape. Thank you!
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    No new chapter this time, but people who are interested in The Hive might still wanna read this. It's mainly about the writing process and what you can expect in the future.



    First of all some Publication Info: I'm currently posting this story on Gurochan, TheDarkSpot and Hentaifoundry. The Hentaifoundry version is the one that deals best with my formatting, so I recommend reading it over here if you don't already: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/eddyboy/25730/The-Hive-A-Duke-Nukem-Horror-Story



    I will continue posting on all three of course, at least for the foreseeable future.



    Something that I realized again and again while writing this story is that it's not a simple thing to find the middle road between your typical one-off snuff-story and your average (maybe even politically correct) let's-see-how-the-hero-wins-narrative.

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    huh. could have sworn i posted chapter 9 here. incoming.
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    Chapter 9: Walkürenritt



    "Join the EDF", they'd said.



    Melanie returned fire over the roof of the Jeep she was hunkering behind.



    "Just go for the five years. The pay is great, and after five years of obstacle courses and boredom, you have a great monetary basis to start the rest of your life. And the aliens won't be coming back, so there's basically no risk at all".

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    Worms



     "So, if you'll follow me, I'll be explaining your new duties and responsibilities as I take you on a brief tour of the mansion and surrounding grounds." Elaine instructed, motioning the new girl to fall in beside her as she began walking.



     "You'll start out doing the most unpleasant chores, unfortunately. Sweeping and mopping the floors, cleaning the bathrooms, and other things of a similarly menial nature." the head maid said, as she led the way into the grand house. "The Mistress absolutely abhors dirt and dust, so you'll need to be very diligent in completing your tasks. Please believe me when I tell you that she WILL notice if you shirk."



     "Yes, ma'am." Citrie answered promptly, as she took in the lavishly appointed entrance hall, her mouth slightly open in amazement at the wealth she beheld there.

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    >>11582

    You're the best.
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    >>11587



    Thank You.

    From the farthest reaches of my mind, I heard a woman scream.



    I shook my head from side to side and drug my consciousness back into the current moment. Heather looked confused and asked me if I was okay.



    "Yeah, I'm fine, perfectly fine," I said as I wondered the same thing myself. "Are you ready to order?"



    She smiled her crooked, wide smile and nodded eagerly. I thought to myself, "God, I love this girl. So why am I having such graphic visions of destroying her?"

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    I know that no one asked for this, but I did a reading of this story. If my voice offends your good sensibilities, then I apologize.



    To find me, just go on YouTube and search for "Marcus Roveri," which is totally a real name, and in no way a name that I made up.

    She was cute. But scarred. So am I. I'm not a slayer though, I've just been... through a lot. Not as much as a Top Class Assassin, though. She was, and hunted many of my fellows. Just my luck, here I was, with a beautiful big-breasted blue-eyed bitch that was tied to a chair, securely thanks to my former ship-mates. She had an hourglass figure, but I knew she wasn't a mere model. She was deadly, and the reason my crew was now dead, aside from the 2 who helped me stop her, but they had enough. They wanted no part of what I was going to do.

    "Have you ever known love?" I ran my fingers over her sharp sweaty hair. It was soft and dry. My question was met with tired contempt.

    "I'm saving myself for marriage." Typical of her sort. She was disciplined. I knew her training involved staying in frigid, fetid swamp water, getting frostbite and bug bites for hours. And everything she fought, that they fought for... was to fight against my personal freedom.

    "And you think I should too? That I'm evil for being with the girl you murdered? You sick bitch." I saw her eyes go wide.

    "Please, I thought she was someone else..." Oh, don't they always.

    "You knew she probably wasn't. Just saw a fine girl, dark hair, rebel outfit, wore a symbol you disagreed with. You think 'eh, fuck it. Should kill her.'"

    "I'm sorry. Just kill me and be done with it, please. If you let me go, I'll make it worth your while. I'll retire, and you can have anything." Killing her was her first suggestion. This meant that she knew where she was and who she was dealing with. At least the likelihood was enough to scare her into preferring death.

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    Someone critique please.
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    Hello friend.



    Now here's a story that's packed with the kind action that makes this site so exciting. It's easy to follow, too, and there's no urge to skip around. I read it cover to cover, so to speak.



    I gather that you like to use something vaguely political as the source of conflict in your writing. I appreciate that there's a justification for what transpires.



    "I ... fuck her asshole a lot." There are six words' worth of vanilla sex there is in this story, which is just the right amount. Maybe a little much, even.

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    Thank you! The narrator does not burn his ship down. I'm thinking I might've intended it all to be in a bunker on land and not out at sea. If I've left it ambiguous, perhaps that would be best, and I might even have a sequel (but I'm a very slow writer).

    The Fool's Baron



    Alight with sound and music and gaiety, the festival rang with laughter and cheer as the King's new harlequin set herself to work, juggling and dancing and cracking wise with equal dexterity in every act as her audience heckled and cheered playfully. With some luck she had happened on the work, having been discovered by one of the king's servants when about town on an errand, and with much gusto she performed and acted and pranced, deriving a certain joy from entertaining her captive audience ... and deriving a certain joy and excitement as she felt ogling eyes on her body.



    Wrapped in taut leathers and a colorful bodice of scarlet, with a tightly-drawn black corset and tall heels clicking on the floor as she moved, she knew that her dress would be sure to draw attention, and her admirers--man and woman alike--made little effort to hide their lust as they took in the show, and the fetching young lady performing it. Each high step, each demonstrative gesture caused her full breasts to jiggle, and she delighted in noticing each of their leering gazes; until she spun about in a dance and stopped before a tall and broad man, and paused. He was a mountain, a wide and strong man in sharp dress and wearing a long and pointed beard of the finest grooming. She could see quite immediately he was an important figure, and so stopped to wave a hand in bowing low, crossing one foot over another politely and bowing so low as to nearly touch the ends of her jester's hat on the floor; and when she rose again, the painted-white surface of her face creased just a bit as she winked but briefly at him. Quickly she turned and went back to her work with a neat cartwheel, and at the center of the floor she paused to again bow to the audience ... keeping her back to her admirer, and bowing low again; low enough to pinch her vulva between her thighs and present herself to him for a longer moment than was necessary to salute the crowd.



    The night dragged long after that, and thoughts of before pushed away from her mind as she focused on the excited prospect of a midnight rendezvous; thoughts and questions, too, of what had happened to the previous harlequin, and those before her. As the hour grew late the party finally dispersed, dismissed by the King who had sated his palette on beer and wine and fine cuts of meats until he had lost his appetite for entertainment for the evening; and with a light and airy bounce in her step the jester left from the room to retire herself ... and yet, it was a sad and long walk to her quarters, though they were not far. She had expected to meet her admirer after the party, and yet he was scarce to be found in the hall. The corridors turned an angle, and she soon entered her quarters to begin to undress, when the door swung shut behind her.

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    Ok, that was hot, but more dubish than con
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    I had trouble figuring out which tag to put so I just defaulted it there since she's not being technically raped, per se.
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    He tore the outfit! :(



    BTW, whatever your proofreading workflow is, it's amazing.

    The Cull



    Naked and trembling, little Lola mouse stepped forth from the dressing area, with only a thin black choker bearing a name tag and registry number. Large, round ears drooped submissively as she passed through the entrance, taking note of the many cameras with their shining red lights--indicating live filming--and timid, shaky footfalls led her slowly towards her fate ... but she shook not from fright, but restrained excitement.



    This was the moment she had anticipated for months; the moment she had carefully dieted for, planned for, and prepared herself for: it was her time for the Cull, her time to become a star, to be admired and lusted for and, ultimately, cum for. Once a month, it had been ordained, the population of the Lesser species must be culled, to be reduced and slashed until it could again become manageable. Rampant overpopulation had demanded it, and modern depravity had twisted it into a game of lust, of sex, and of gory delight. In short, she would be sacrificed on the totem pole of a bull's member, impaled and stretched until she burst and, quite simply, died from the fucking.



    Maybe it should have been normal for a girl to have a sense of self-preservation, to want to survive and thrive and grow into old age ... but this was a great event, a festival of sex and degenerate lust, and a celebrated ending to a short life; she would be a trophy, a prize, and a star in every right, with the event televised across the world to an audience millions strong, man and woman alike waiting and edging and watching as one of the arena's stars ripped her apart upon his powerful member. Indeed, it was a volunteer's event: prey were groomed and trained and even bred for this, and often the line to apply grew longer than the list of available positions; victims could even choose from their death options, and the options soon had to be expanded to include the creative, and for mass executions--firing squad, hanging, beheading, spitting. It had become an honor, a violent and sexy ending to a life that would otherwise have no meaning. Lola had chosen the personal option, the one hardest to earn, to whom only the most "gifted" of girls could be chosen: public arena copulation.

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    Thank you, all. I don't have any other tales--yet--but I plan on writing more stories in the future. Inspiration is the hard part ... I might take suggestions if only to jog my muse. (-:
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    Really sexy story.
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    I'm not into furry, so I tried my best to imagine the girl being human where possible. The story was super hot though and I've surely enjoyed it.
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    <3 That was so great :) thankyou!
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    >>11516



    You're very welcome. C:

    So, some years ago, I wrote a "little" serial called Puppy Mill. It was about a woman, Merrie, who was kidnapped off the streets, raped, and amputated into a sex slave. Later, after a lot of drama, she ended fucked a lot and gained an incredible amount of powers. It ended when she killed a goddess... at the same time she died.



    This isn't done, but there are going to be a huge number of tags, not limited to fucking in every hole, amputation, size, magic, rape, messy, demon, bondage, D/s, and a probably a tentacle or two.
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    Chapter 20: Countless Bites (?/F tort)



    As soon as Merrie hit the ground, the impact and the light broke her concentration on her transformation spell. She let out a strangled gasp as the fur melted off her body and her canine form reformed back into a cropped, naked woman.



    She didn't have time to scramble to her knees or regain her dazed senses when the spiders swarmed over her. Their weight pressed down on her as their tiny, needle-like legs scraped along her skin. Even though each one was no heavier than a handful of rice, more of them kept crawling on top of her until the pressure squeezed her ribs and ground her body into the ground.



    Merrie tried to pull herself up to her wrists and knees but the carpet of spiders held her in place. She knew she could move them individually but somehow the creatures linked together and she couldn't find the leverage to get more than a few centimeters of leeway underneath the blanket of spiders pinning her to the ground.

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    Chapter 21: Blessed Darkness (MM/F oral anal tort inc cons nc asphyx)



    The spiders came with her in a choking, biting blanket of agony. They gnawed on her body while the ones crawling inside attacked her insides. Flashes of heat and pain exploded along her senses.



    The sensation of a hundred spiders crawling and biting inside her cunt and bowels was maddening. She tried to force them out with her muscles, but the spiders only slid around the slickness of her pussy and bit down on new places.



    Merrie wasn't sure if she successfully shifted into the Shadows but she thought she felt the comforting icy seeping through the carpet of agony that surrounded her.

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    Chapter 22: Second Wave (MM nc anal oral, MMF nc anal oral)



    As much as she wanted to remain in the Shadow realm and enjoy her afterglow, Merrie couldn't. She crawled over on her knees and wrists and stretched out. Her abused skin, burnt and bitten, sparked with pain. She could see where Sable's holy magic had peeled back her thin flesh and revealed the smoking darkness inside.



    She gathered the darkness around her, forming it into ribbons, and wrapped it around her injuries. If she had time, she would have poured it into her body to let it fill her but she didn't think she'd have the time to let it set and replace her insides. She only hoped that Sable's holy energy wouldn't strip away the darkness before she could recover.



    With another surge of power, she reformed her cloak. The familiar construct rippled out of the darkness and fluttered to envelope her. It tickled her skin as it wrapped right around her body, sealing up against her leaking pussy, ass, and skin. The pressure felt good and a startling contrast between the blanket of spiders that had recently attacked her. It would also give her a second layer of protection against the light.

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    Purifying Flames



    Heat beat against Merrie's body. The waves of burning ripped at her raw nerves, reminding her of the tiny cuts and scratches that peppered her body. She could feel the heat against the rents in her thin skin and the contrast of the icy darkness inside her with the smoldering air.



    She whimpered and tried to roll away from the heat and back into the cold embrace of the shadow creatures that protected her. The movement caused agony to spark along her senses. She managed to roll up on her side and then down on her front, crushing her breasts against the hot ground.



    Her rolling also brought her into contact with the sharp edge of something wood or metal. It cut into her skin, peeling it open and allowing more heat to pour into her fragile body.

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    Chapter 24: Exhaustion



    The world roared around her, muted only by aged wood. The barrel rocked back and forth from the winds that buffeted it, shaking it loose as the rest of the mill house burned down around her. The heat seeped in but she managed to hold it back with a shield of shadows that frosted the inside of the wood.



    The cold from the shadows didn't last long against the heat. It only had time to ice the wood for a few minutes before the fire melted it. Waves of heat seeped through the barrel and swirled around her as she struggled to keep her attention moving from one warm patch to the other. She laid down a thin layer of ice and shadows against each one before moving to the next and then the next. By the the time she had painted the entire insides of the barrel with her spell, the first parts were hot again.



    It was exhausting but mindless. Her mind drifted slightly as she swirled her attention around. There was nothing to focus on, she didn't have someone to dominate her or even time to masturbate. Instead, she ended up going over the battle over and over. Each time, she thought about the things she missed or mistakes she made: she could have used her collar more, she could have dodged in a different direction, what if she opened a portal first, could she have saved Sable without making her think Bass was dead? She doubted every choice and decision.

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