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    Little bubbles, formed on the surface of the lips, spilling from the throat as her body bobs in water. Foam, indistinguishable from cottony clouds of soap that wander on blue water, so that the whole bathtub makes a shining diorama of an angel floating through heaven. She looks forward, straight to the ceiling, and doesn't react when I caress her cheek or wipe hair away from her brow. Her chest heaves in hard wheezing breaths that only push water up to sputter about her lips then suck it back down.

    Leaning over, my long hair folds over my neck to wind with hers in the water and I lick away the cotton candy frothing from her mouth. Our tongues touch between her teeth, hers is mostly listless and slimy with the contents of her stomach but it's still so warm, I expect to feel breath but there is only stagnant water, and then… a twitch of the tongue, it pushes on mine. I snap away to look her over in her watery coffin.

    "Kacie?!" Her eyes can't seem to find purchase on anything in particular, but they move. Words escape her, but they're mouthed silently, though to covered up with ever growing retches of bile. Something particular about living creatures you learn when you're so cruel, they are extremely resilient, they weren't designed to die. They will fight it til the very last neuron flickers out. But this is good, she can feel me one last time.

    My head drops down, my ear sliding against the still water, I will kiss all of her favorite spots before she goes to bed. The bottom of her chin, just above her collar, where the jaw is tender and plush as it makes it's meeting with the neck just above her collar. Her collar bone next, with thin skin that is easily warmed and a round bone that fits lips neatly. Her arm floats into mine, her warmth makes me light headed. I kiss her lowest rib, just below her breast. There's a scar there from a lashing I gave her the night she'd fallen asleep in my bed when I came home late. She was so tender for so long after that and apologized for the full next day, and days of her nights were sleepless with guilt, just for the crime of sleeping without telling me goodnight.

    I kiss her belly- it's so sensitive she can be tortured by softly touching it. I can see her face in my mind, wincing at the feeling. A pulse in the water, her body flares with movement. I hear a gargling cough, and then for the first time in so many minutes, her voice. Shrill, squeaking.

    "Wait! Where am I?! Where am…!" Her screams signal to me that it's time to put her down. My body moves atop hers, my waists over her chest, my thighs straddle her rib cage. I start to sit, laying my weight into her, she starts to sink into the water, reaching up and grabbing me anywhere she can, I give her an arm to latch onto for comfort, if nothing else.

    "Wait! Wait. What's happening. Where are we?!"

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    Hello! This is just a nice roleplay I had with a girl on F-List. Posting with her consent.

    Trivia

    22:37:52) ***Satoumi a girly boy around Riko's age, dressed in a cute red and white dress with puffy skirt, with black feline ears and tail, matching his long hair color, sits by Riko's side as she starts the stream. "Hello, beautiful viewers! My name is Satoumi, and I'm a boy, if you couldn't guess. I know you're here for Riko, but it happens that she's leaving for Sweden tomorrow. So let us all get her more money to spend there! All tips are appreciated, but my input is going to be special! I'm going to quiz Riko. For each correct answer she gets one thousand euro. You heard it right! One thousand! However, for each wrong answer there's a punishment. What do you say, Riko?"
    (22:47:50) ***Riko Tsukine double-blinked as she turned to face the boy. "Wait, what?! I know you said you'd give me money for correct answers, but…"; hushing her tone, though, she looked back towards the camera, putting on a smile once again as she addressed the audience in-persona. "A-ah! Oh, well, of course I'll have to take on the challenge, then!~ How could I turn down such an offer? Please, guys, don't feel the need to tip too much. I'm gonna have a great time, eheh~", nervously downplaying her own stream, embarrassed by how much money she'd be earning. Gee, he was spoiling her way too hard…
    (22:51:35) ***Satoumi smiles. "That's the spirit! We'll start from easy question. You gain nothing for correct answer, beautiful viewers, so please no answer posting! And the first question is: what is the origin land of the movie "The Ring"?"
    (22:52:24) ***Riko Tsukine stared for a few moments, a finger to her chin, pretending to think for a few moments. "Ah, that's a fairly easy one! The Ring is actually a Japanese story, so it's gotta be that, right?", smiling as she spoke.
    (22:54:57) ***Satoumi claps his hands excitedly. "That's absolutely right!" He reaches into his purse and fishes out two fresh 500 euro notes, showing them to camera first, then reaching them to Riko. "I'm sure you'll be rich for your trip in no time!"
    (22:57:51) Riko Tsukine: /me's eyes went wide as the money was revealed. "Oh, gosh, in cash too?! G-gee, thanks~! Eheh…!"; donations starting to creep in too, subscriber count rising, a cherry on top of her reward. "Ah, thank you so much for the donation! Well, to my fans and.. to you, too, I suppose, Satoumi! E-eheh…"
    (22:59:05) ***Satoumi looks at his phone and makes a swiping gesture. "Aaaand our next question! What condition makes it much less likely for you to be killed in a slasher movie?"
    (23:00:06) ***Riko Tsukine legitimately pondered this one. "Huh… Well, we know that some kinds of people die first. But the ones who survive… They're usually the main character, right? So it must be that!"
    (23:03:22) ***Satoumi turns just his eyes to the camera with a mischievous grin and makes a long pause. "Wrong! While there's a debatable logic to your answer, anyone versed in slashers would tell you that protecting condition is being a virgin. My my, here comes the first punishment. You are to get naked and remain so for the rest of the stream!"

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    I'm not even going to try reading that wall. Break it up into paragraphs and repost it, maybe you'll have something.
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    Actually though, this is literally just copy and pasted. At least take the 2 minutes out to format it a little

    …know a forum like this but in German language.

    She didn't know how she got so turned around so quickly. The young girl had been on her way home from her grandmother's after breakfast, using a little dirt road she had traveled dozens of times before when she felt nature calling her. With a large breakfast weighing on her young belly she quickly decided to head into the woods to relieve herself, but barely ten feet off the little dirt path when she lost sight of the road. Concerned she may lose her way she turned back around, hoping to have the road at least in sight as she did her business. Though somehow she had made a mistake and ended up turning the wrong way, only walking deeper into the woods. Now lost and struggling to find her way back her urges were the last thing on on her mind.


    Fear began to mount as she drifted further into the woods, taking a cautious few steps before looking around, changing direction and walking once more. Everywhere she looked seemed the same, more dirt and more trees. The dull throbbing of her bladder peaked once more to a sharp pain, she hissed and gripped at her groin, bunching up her light blue dress as she looked around frantically from side to side, hoping to see something familiar or even the road. Her all too full bladder nagging against her fears of truly being lost in the woods. Distressed and fighting with the strong urge to pee she picked a direction and took off in it, dashing through the trees, hoping to find a road, any road, as she ran. Her long jet black hair billowed behind her as she ran, spilling over her shoulders and well past her young bum like a waterfall of black ink.


    Without any warning, something caught her foot and yanked it forward, with a shocked yelp she was swept off of her feet and slammed onto her back, knocking the wind out of her, as well as loosening her already struggling bladder. A gush of urine erupted from her young slit, quickly soaking through the thin fabric of her panties and down between her legs, dripping onto he dress and the ground below. Yet before she could catch her breath she began to be pulled along the dirt, dragging her light blue dress through the dirt and urine soaked mud and soon up into the ther air! The young girl finally caught her breath with a ragged coughing gasp as she was hoisted up into the air, dangling by her feet.


    She was nearly four feet off the ground, too far to reach the dirt with her arms, yet her extravagantly long hair managed to close the distance, a sparse few inches of jet black hair resting in the dirt. Her dress had fallen over her face exposing her meager, hardly developed chest to the open air. She quickly pushed it back down looking around in fear at an inverted world, trying to figure out how she had gotten turned upside down. In all of the rapid motion, shock and surprise she hadn’t realized she was peeing, it was only when her pee soaked through bunched up and began to trickle up her neck dribbling up her chin and onto her face that she realized she was peeing herself

    “Eww Ew EWWW!” She squealed as the salty scent of urine began to assault her nose, yet all her screaming was only another mistake, allowing her own urine to trickle into her mouth.


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    Bumping this…because its a favorite of mine and I hope some fans might enjoy it.
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    It would be cool if you made a story about a loli pooping on a toilet
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    I like my lolis to poop everywhere except a toilet!

    But maybe one could poop ON a toilet…with the lid down =3
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    Maybe a loli using an outhouse, I have never seen a story done that before
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    A name not spoken in vain

    An early morning, in a normal house. The sun shone pleasantly through the curtains, and there was a faint hint of cleaning potions in the air. In the kitchen, an adult woman hummed the tune to the same song she always sang.

    It was to this comfortable scene that Aisha had woken, and it was with her mother's melody hanging in the background that she carefully stepped down the stairs, nursing her left hand like it was a fragile object that might easily break. After all, that was more or less the truth.

    "Mom. Mom!"

    Aisha's plaintive, worried voice cut through the air, stopping her mother's melody. She was in no mood for listening to it anyway.

    Miriam turned around. What she saw was her barely dressed daughter, left arm wrapped in a sweater that was also soaked with water. A glance at the mana flows showed a deeper, by now painfully common tale. She lightly sighed.

    "Mom, I… My hand…"

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    > That being said, what about the Car Fight? Your recent post in that thread gave out impression that you were going to write something in that setting. Or is it that as you were contemplating it, it evolved into a new idea that we see here instead?

    Thought about it, decided not to spend actual effort on this.

    As you say, there aren't a lot of people reading. That might have something to do with the place breaking every two weeks, but in any case, I'm going to stick with whatever I have suitable inspiration for at the moment.
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    The A2A tag is because I tried working out what to tag this with, came up mostly blank, and decided we needed a new one. :d

    Truthfully, I could have easily made this tame enough to post it on a different site. Still might. There's an actual plot.
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    >>16326

    If you're not against Reddit, there's a recently made sub, r/deadlyerotica.
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    "Ah– ahahahaha!"

    Linda was in stitches. Aisha glared at the blonde, who was holding on to a table to stop from falling over. She'd doubled over, she was laughing so hard.

    She blew air into her cheeks, pouting at her best friend. "I tell you my deepest, darkest, most embarrassing secret, and this is what happens?"

    "So that's what you were doing!" Linda wiped away her tears and grinned up at her, smile nearly cutting her head in half. "You were wincing for weeks. You stopped helping with goblin fights. I thought I'd hurt you somehow. It took you months before you even came over to play at my house again, and you wouldn't say why. How come you never asked saint Miriam for your arm back?"

    "I thought she'd figure out what I'd done to myself," Aisha, defeatedly, said. This sent Linda into another paroxysm of laughter. Once she'd recovered she grinned at her, made a twirling motion with a finger against her head, and then, finally and blessedly, managed to stop laughing.

    "Aisha, dear, I love you, but you're an idiot. I think we've still got some cakes. Want one?"

    oOo

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    Glad to see more nonfatal guro stories.

    While the start was a bit confusing, the character dialogue is well done and I look forward to more.

    Quiet Confidence
    =written by PogueMahone & JestInPieces=

    As she types away at another email and tries not to die inside, Stephanie feels her phone vibrate. This sets off a little shudder of her own, because there’s a good chance that she knows what that message is. Or rather, who it’s from. The blonde girl quietly extracts her phone from her pocket and looks at the screen. She smiles when her suspicions are confirmed. Ah, to think some people had laughed when she had joined up with that new online dating site. Well look who’s laughing now – she’d only gone and hooked up with the tall and quiet type from her dreams!

    Literally, in fact. She only called herself “Quiet”, and never actually spoke. But she was affectionate, and cute, and hot, and sexy, and she wore next to no clothes at any time, and… okay, so it wasn’t a relationship of deep conversation and romantic poetry and all that stuff. Point is, Stephanie had hooked up with a total bombshell, and she’d even come to visit her today! Stephanie quietly excuses herself to her frankly comatose coworker and heads for the door. Quiet is waiting on the floor above. Apparently she’d come in through a window.

    There was that too. Apparently Quiet was some spec-ops soldier? She didn’t like to talk about it much. It certainly explained how she had been able to absolutely thrash Stephanie at table tennis. And pool. And darts…

    Stephanie opens the door and smiles when she sees the busty woman in her signature black underwear and ripped pantyhose. She isn’t wearing her green storage harness this time, which makes her look like like some kind of hooker – more so than usual, anyway. Stephanie isn’t complaining in the slightest.

    “Hiya,” she says as she throws her arms around the other woman and kisses her. “No top-secret mission today?”


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    JiP & Mahone, writing a lethal story? What a timeline we live in!

    Really loved how Quiet was so skilled she could just crack open Steph's head like that. And then she cracked open her body! She's enjoying it too. Lord, that's hawt. Too bad she died :(
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    next write a story about climbing a very long ladder.
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    Honestly, when I saw this story, didn't bother looking at the authors. It didn't say non-lethal in the title, so I knew it couldn't be by either of you.

    While reading, however, I couldn't help but notice a couple writing similarities, eventually convincing me to look at who wrote the story. As best, I figured it'd be by someone who was inspired by you two. Imagine my surprise when I saw it was written by my two favorite authors. Great story. It's obviously different from your usual shtick, but it's reminiscent enough to still be enjoyable.
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    Nice
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    >>16525
    >>16527

    Haha, hey, got to switch it up a bit sometimes. Glad you could both enjoy it despite the lethal nature of the story. If you want you can imagine that Steph's brain is still conscious afterwards. Although what happens to her then is up to you…

    >>16526
    SNAAAAKE EAAAATEEEEEER

    >>16533
    I really enjoy your casual guro stories, so thank you!

    A wip story based on characters from another book I worked on years ago. Please let me know what you think! I wanted a story where what is seen as bad is good, and good as bad. Matter of persepctive I think.

    But you can’t do this to me! The Latina screamed

    Liz giggled at her lover as Sarah gave the delicious booty infront of them a hard smack.

    Bon Appitit my love. Liz said seductively with a wicked grin.
    Sarah smiled and opened her mouth wide. She then slowly lowered her head towards their meal and with a satisfying squishing sound sank her teeth into the supple ass flesh.
    Aaagghghh stop please STOP! Screamed their meal as Sarah savored the morsel as the quaking ass flesh jostled around her jaws.

    The coppery taste of blood and sweet taste of raw flesh filled sarah’s mouth as she forced her jaws deeper into her food, before ripping out a nice sized mouthful of ass.

    Liz’s pussy wept as she found herself more turned on than she had ever been before in her life. The sight of the morsel inside of Sarahs gaping maw combined with their foods delicious screams nearly sent her over the edge right then and there. Sarah leaned in close and Liz locked her lips to Sarahs. Together the lovers passed the flesh between their mouths with their tongues, coating it in their saliva. By all rights under the sun the thing screaming below them had ceased mattering to the universe, and now only mattered to their rumbling stomachs, weeping pussys and soon to be filled colons.

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    More stalking, character development of the victim and cooking. And I felt making her Latina seemed just incidental than needed in this story; Her being cooked up as something like a burrito may have been interesting. I don't just thinking out loud.
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    Agreed, this was a segment of a larger stiry im wirking on and i added in that basic descriptor as a last minute addon the one i had written in the story was spoiler filked for tbe larger wiok.thanks for your input!
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    horrific writing.
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    Love the reviews here. Especially the last one which gave no in depth criticism. But for everyone else i plan to upload more at a later date. Anything youd like to see added or that you DID like about tbe story?
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    In just a short while, the limp body had been placed in the middle of
    the field. All around Sarah and Liz, were the scattered skeletal
    remains of dozens of women. Most of the bones had been chewed on, though
    there were a few carcasses where maggots were still picking at some of the
    remaining flesh.

    In a nearby pen, three Rottweilers were fighting over a severed tit,
    each one ended up tearing off a piece, and taking it back to it's little
    corner.

    Liz took a large syringe out of her pocket, then said, "Now, let me
    inject her with the stimulant, and haul ass before she wakes up." Liz held her breath as she carefully injected the stimulant into the teens thigh. Once she was finished, Sarah and her ran out of the enclosure, locked the gate, and stood up on a rampart overlooking the mini "arena'


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    I'm back from the dead with another self satisfactory story of major cunt slaying. No scat, no loli, just snuff of legal aged women. I suggest browsing affenknecht to understand the german lyrics at the end, because I used two Rammstein songs (Zerstoren and Puppe) to set the tone for the last chapter.
    This is my magnum opus so far.

    Toys
    (shooting, flesh eating parasites, head bashing, death by corrosive cum, hard vore)


    Intro

    Blue… So bright and blue. A spotless summer sky. A sky is so barren that I wonder if this is just a dream. Maybe if I co-

    “The room is ready, sir.” the lovely girl at the front desk interrupts.


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    Very nice!
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    >>16509
    Thank you. Can you provide some feedback on what you liked and didn't like?
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    >>16529

    Sure. Well first of all I'm slightly envious of your skillful descriptions. It's good prose in my opinion (I should probably take notes lol.)

    And I like the gratuitous splatter, and the way the snuff bunnies change their tune from willing to reluctant adds a nice piquancy too.

    I enjoyed Britney's demise most, because I have a preference for more real and less fantastical stuff, but of course that's just me. The whole story kept my attention though, short and sweet as it was. I reckon there was just enough story to carry the sexy gore.

    I can't find anything to criticize tbh, I guess you spent some time polishing it and ironing out the bugs.

    I didn't bother looking into the Rammstein lyrics tbh, though I expect they are the cherry on the cake for those who want it.

    Anyway, I must remember to check out some of your other writings, I know I've read some already, although I don't remember which off the top of my head.

    'One cannot easily become professional idol.' Thought Nico on her way to somewhere. ‘Unless they would live very long and, while doing a regular job, work on their idol career. It’s a great opportunity! I can be an artist, an accountant, a doctor, a leader, I can do sport… If only I wasn’t so small, but it would still be worth it.’

    She was on her way to antioxidant embedding. Apparently, you get an injection and your aging becomes very slow. It is advertised that one can live up to thousand years.

    She visited the designated doctor’s office and sat down to talk to him.

    “So…” She asked. “There’s this one thing that worries me.”
    “Ask whatever you want, young lady.”
    “How much does it cost? I’m not a rich person, so I would pay in installments, but I couldn’t find the price anywhere.”
    “Oh, it’s free.”
    “Uhh…” Nico was confused. “Free? I don’t get it. You’re joking with me, right? What’s the cache?”
    “Cache is… The aging cure is in its experimental stage. We normally pay people who are our test subjects, but so far tests have proven pretty impressive, so we consider slow aging to be a sufficient reward to them.”
    “Oh! Experimental! Uhh… I did not expect that hehe…”

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    underrated story
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    Awesome story

    Alexander was a small boy aged 11 he looked like he was 9 the year is 1472 May 12th in the country of Britannia(Alternate Universe). Alexander is lying down in his cell his wrist and ankles shackled he knew in just two hours he would be hanging to death for his crimes. Now you might be asking what lead him to being condemned to die? Well unfortunately Alexander was born to very poor parents who abandoned him at 5 he fell in with a group of street children that robbed people to survive. Well 3 days ago they where robbing a home when the owner Mr. Jefferson Walked in Alexander was the closest to the door he froze at the sight of the man. Mr Jefferson Hit Alexander in the head with his cane knocking him out the other 5 boys stabbed Mr Jefferson to Death and ran away When the police Arrived Alexander was lying on the ground knocked out still. He was Charged with Murder and Robbery the judge gave the 11 year old Alexander a deal if he turned in his friends who where in the house with him he would spare his life. Alexander Refused. His last Meal is brought in a light stew a piece of bread and a glass of water he slow eats it over 30 minutes. Thirty minutes after he finished his last meal 2 guards come and escort him to the bath where he is forcibly washed the boy is then dried by the guards. He is left naked and shackled as the condemned in this nation die naked. He is lead back to his cell where a priest waits for him for the next 30 minutes the boy goes over his confession. The priest tells him he is forgiven and after death he will go to heaven. 4 guards, his executioner, and the prison warden arrive the priest steps out, two of the guards step in Alexander puts his hands forward the guards unshackle his hands and turn him around and re-shackle his hands behind his back. 2 guards lead him out of the cell and stand in front of him the other 2 guards step behind him and place a hand each on his shoulders. The priest stands to his left the warden stands to his right his executioner stands in front of the front two guards. We begin the walk to the jails doors which lead right to the center of town. After we are through the door a crowd has formed to watch me die. I'm lead to the gallows all 4 guards stop the executioner steps forward and grabs me by the shackles and forces me up the eight steps and pushes me on to the x mark and places the rope around my neck. The warden then reads the sentence Alexander Lee A magistrate of the Great Nation of Britannia. Has foun

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    I'll be a bit more encouraging, because there's some positives, like the attention to detail. Clearly you've spent some time dreaming up this scenario, and it could be the basis for a good little tale.

    But the critics' harsh words above are true though. So here's my suggestions.

    1. It's a formidable wall of text. You need to break it down into paragraphs. Each paragraph should be like a self contained mini scenario. In my own writing, I tend to use very small paragraphs, sometimes just a sentence or two. Others make them longer. It's probably a matter of style, but you need to have some to break up the otherwise unrelenting text.

    2. I can't see a single comma. Punctuation is important, as it further breaks up the text into easily processable chunks. Maybe when you read it, it seems okay, but try to put yourself in the position of someone who is coming to it fresh.

    3. Again, partly due to (lack of) punctuation, the rhythm of your writing is kinda dull. It's just one descriptive sentence after another, try varying the pace and structure of the sentences to make it flow in a more conversational way.

    4. As the other guy mentioned, switching from third to first person doesn't work here. I think it would work well in the first person throughout, getting inside the head of the victim, so to speak.

    5. I'm not a professional writer or anything, just doing a bit for fun. So I'm not above looking stuff up if I'm not sure. For instance, if I was you I'd google "using paragraphs" and take that advice on board. I've done this loads of times in my own writing, every time I'm not sure about a word, I look it up, and look for alternatives.

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    sorry everyone english is my third language not very good at.sorry very sorry
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    >>16515
    No need to apologize my friend, don't be too hard on yourself. Your English is better than some here who are writing in their first language! I hope you don't get discouraged by some comments here, at least you have the balls to write something in a public forum. Personally, I'm looking forward to more, and hope you will continue and improve. Good luck!
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    >>16515
    Most people will not care that much about your English, but you should add at least some random line breaks/paragraphs to make this wall of text less uniform. Now it is even hard to read it.
    If you move your eyes away you cant find where you were before. here is how it could look like:
    ————————


    Alexander was a small boy aged 11 he looked like he was 9 the year is 1472 May 12th in the country of Britannia(Alternate Universe). Alexander is lying down in his cell his wrist and ankles shackled he knew in just two hours he would be hanging to death for his crimes. Now you might be asking what lead him to being condemned to die?

    Well, unfortunately, Alexander was born to very poor parents who abandoned him at 5 he fell in with a group of street children that robbed people to survive. Well 3 days ago they were robbing a home when the owner Mr. Jefferson Walked in Alexander was the closest to the door he froze at the sight of the man. Mr Jefferson Hit Alexander in the head with his cane knocking him out the other 5 boys stabbed Mr Jefferson to Death and ran away When the police Arrived Alexander was lying on the ground knocked out still.
    He was charged with Murder and Robbery the judge gave the 11-year-old Alexander a deal if he turned in his friends who were in the house with him he would spare his life. Alexander Refused. His last Meal is brought in a light stew a piece of bread and a glass of water he slow eats it over 30 minutes. Thirty minutes after he finished his last meal 2 guards come and escort him to the bath where he is forcibly washed the boy is then dried by the guards. He is left naked and shackled as the condemned in this nation die naked. He is lead back to his cell where a priest waits for him for the next 30 minutes the boy goes over his confession. The priest tells him he is forgiven and after death, he will go to heaven.

    4 guards, his executioner, and the prison warden arrive the priest steps out, two of the guards step in Alexander puts his hands forward the guards unshackle his hands and turn him around and re-shackle his hands behind his back. 2 guards lead him out of the cell and stand in front of him the other 2 guards step behind him and place a hand each on his shoulders. The priest stands to his left the warden stands to his right his executioner stands in front of the front two guards.
    We begin the walk to the jail's doors which lead right to the center of town. After we are through the door a crowd has formed to watch me die.

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    thank you for the advice and encouragement squunch and onix i will use it to improve now back to the drawing board to try and apply this advice.

    gibt es hier gar keine deutschsprachige Stories?
    Nur immer in Englisch?
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    Melanies Schicksal

    Melanie befand sich in einer verzweifelten Lage. Haendler hatten
    sie gefangen und
    an einen Stamm Kannibalen verkauft. Sie hatten ein gutes Suemmchen
    fuer Melanie bezahlt, da sie als Braten fuer ihr bevorstehendes
    Fest mehr als willkommen war.

    Am Morgen des grossen Festes kamen zwei grosse Kuechengehilfen sie
    abzuholen.
    Das wars dann, dachte Melanie. Ihr zierlicher, kleiner Koerper
    wuerde bald lecker duftend
    und knusprig die Festtafel der Kannibalen zieren.

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    Und noch eine, hab ich vor Jahren Geschrieben, Ich poste sie hier mal ohne sie nochmal probezulesen….:)

    Das kleine Meerjungfrauenfilet


    Es war einmal eine keine Meerjungfrau, die hatte wohl zuviel Disney
    gesehen, denn sie traeumte davon, eines Tages einmal einen Prinzen zu heiraten.
    Eines Tages erblickte sie ein grosses Segelschiff und dachte bei sich:
    "Das muss sicher einem Prinzen gehoeren".
    Neugierig schwamm sie zum Schiff und rief: "Hallo, ihr da oben,
    habt ihr zufaellig einen Prinzen an Bord?"
    Die Matrosen des Schiffes sahen ins Meer herab und erblickten die Meerjungfrau.
    "Wow, eine Meerjungfrau!"

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    This isn't a German website. So keep the German threads to a minimum. There was already two created in a short time… Either compile these stories here, in another thread or publish them elsewhere, then reference them in a thread.

    If /lit gets filled with every languages in the world, it'll be full of stuff no one can read.

    Guro stories are already difficult to find to begin with.
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    My German snuff stories can be found here: https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Bender/german/
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    Someone asked for a german story and i still search someone for translation. It is one of my better commisions i think and i really don't want to destroy it with my Bad english:)



    Bocchis Quest für die wahre Freundschaft


    „Ich bin Iniki, Kalea und komme von der Insel Ni’ihau. Schön euch kennen zu lernen.“ Grüßt die Austauschülerin mit starkem Dialekt. Sie sieht komplett anders wie die restlichen Schülerinnen der Klasse aus. Sie ist größer, hat leicht gebräunte haut und wildes schwarzes Haar.

    Als Bocchi gehört hat das Klasse 1 eine neue Austauschülerin bekommt, war Sie noch sehr selbstsicher. „ Sie wird mit Sicherheit ebenfalls neue Freunde suchen und mich ganz schnell akzeptieren … “ Allerdings ist sie sich nun überhaupt nicht mehr sicher. Die neue Schülerin sieht unheimlich aus.

    „ Wie soll Ich Iniki-san nur ansprechen? Das schaff Ich niemals! “ bricht Panik in Bocchis inneren aus.


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    Well, and for reason as this anonymous loser. I do not post my stories here anymore. Thanks for remembering me;)
    It was worth a try;)
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    >>16455
    Also wo kann man denn deine Geschichten finden? Obwohl ich nicht für die Anderen sprechen kann, würde ich mich selber ja gern weiter deine deutsche Guro Geschichten lesen. Und vielleicht könnte ich dir beim Übersetzen helfen, solange ich Gefallen an ihnen finde.
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    Meine deutschen sowie englishen Geschichten findet man Großteils auf ekas portal. Es gibt auch 1 2 exclusive deviantart dolcettforum stories. Doch das meiste ist in ekas portal gesammelt unter den selber namen.:)

    Grundschächlich versuche ich auch english zu schreiben. Doch größere Ideen schreibe ich dann doch lieber in deutsch, da Ich hier bereits schon genug Fehler mache. Das will ich den english natives nicht antun:)
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    Ps: ich Schussel habe garnicht bemerkt, daß gurochan einen großen Teil der Geschichte abgeschnitten hat…


    Der rest:
    Brüstchen feste und gierig. Es wird nur ein kleiner Schnitt nötig sein, um sie von dem zarten Fleische zu trennen. Sie ist fast versucht ein Brüstchen roh zu probieren.

    „Ist das wirklich nötig, um einen Braten zuzubereiten?“ Fragt Bocchi stöhnend.

    Kalea massiert Ihre Schultern und Ihren Rücken. „Du wirst sehen, es wird sehr lecker schmecken, wenn wir den Braten zubereiten.“ Auch wenn diese Teile von Bocchis Körper ebenfalls süß sind und mit Sicherheit auch nicht schlecht schmecken werden. So sind es doch die langweiligsten Teile, Sie beeilt sich also, um schnell zu Ihren Hintern zu kommen.

    Langsam wird es Bocchi zu verdächtig. Sie mag unschuldig sein, aber Selbst Sie bemerkt, dass Kalea die komplette Gewürzmischung verwendet. Da bleibt ja nichts für den Braten übrig! Sie fühlt sich sehr unwohl. Es fühlt sich nicht richtig an. Auch wenn es sich gut anfühlt… „Du planst nicht zufällig mich zu braten?“ Entwickelt sich eine komplett verrückte Idee in Ihren Kopf.

    Kalea knetet gerade Bocchis Hintern. Ihr gefällt die neue Entwicklung in dem Rollenspiel. „Soll das der Moment sein, in welchen die Damsel in Distress , die Wahrheit erkennt?“ Sie hat eine bessere Idee: „Es ist viel lustiger, ein Ahnungsloses Mädchen zuzubereiten.“ Sie kneift Bocchis Hintern besonders feste: „Unsinn!“ Kichert Sie Hexenartig. „Ich würde doch niemals ein Mädchen braten.“

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    No Running in the Pool Area
    A lighthearted guro choose your own adventure story.

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    It is a sultry and sweltering summer afternoon, the kind of afternoon where you can fry an egg on the bonnet of your car.

    Thankfully for Amanda, she's working as a lifeguard at an indoor pool this summer, safe and sound from the unprecedented summer heatwave.

    You would think that the pool will be packed on a hot day like this. However, despite the scorching sun beating down outside, the pool is deserted and quiet, eerily quiet. Only two men in speedo shorts swimming silently back and forth in the Olympic size pool, the silence only breaks when one of them inevitably gets exhausted and pants heavily once he reaches the end of a lane.

    As Amanda takes the last sip from her coffee, she feels this overwhelming urge to pee. She throws a brief glance at the two men in the pool as she dashes towards the nearest bathroom, scoffing at the "No Running In The Pool Area" sign.


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    [Option CA] Keep Running…

    **Gotta run, no time to take it off, don't look behind you…

    Amanda decided to keep running despite the force tugging on her swimsuit. She gritted her teeth, planted one foot after another on the ground, she could feel the swimsuit being stretched to its limits when whatever's tugging on it abruptly let go as she fell face forward onto the warm wooden floor of the sauna, dazing her momentarily.

    She felt something rough and calloused wrapped around her thighs, when she turned her head around she saw the two men are now kneeling beside her, their muscular hands wrapped around her toned thighs, sinister smiles scrawled across their faces.

    "Still trying to run?" The men spoke in unison, digging their fingers into the dazed girl's skin. "Let us put an end to that."

    An series ear splitting shriek echoed in the sauna room when the two burly assailants pinned her on the ground and forcefully bent her legs in an impossible angle. Eventually, an audible popping sound could be heard when her femurs were brutally ripped out of their sockets. As her screams intensified, they calmed reminded her that she really shouldn't have been running in the pool area and continued to break every other bone in her fragile little body.


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    >>15957
    >>15959
    [Option CB] Strip out of her swimsuit…

    Amanda began to peel the shoulder straps of her swimsuit off…

    To her horror, the two men's eyes darkened, their teeth lengthened and talon-like claws grew out of their nail beds. For a brief moment the poor girl was frozen in pure terror, unable to believe what's happening in front of her own eyes, when she eventually came to her senses, they pounced on her.

    Their sharp claws tore her red lifeguard swimsuit to tatters, blemishing her fair skin with bright red scratch marks. The poor girl kicked and screamed when they effortlessly lifted her off the ground, her screams became howls when the men pulled their swim trunks down, revealing throbbing dicks that are at least 12 inches long and covered in barbed spikes.

    In the final minutes of her sorry life, Amanda was simultaneously raped and sodomized by her assailants and their monstrous cocks, as blood and chunks of viscera came dripping out of her violated body, as her vision began to fade, she caught a glimpse of a small poster by the door:

    "No Running In The Pool Area"

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    Option B
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    option AB
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    [Option ZΩ] Ontological Scintillation

    Amanda rotates brazenly about the hyperplane orthogonal to the subspace she had occupied thus far. A pulsating, metallic voice rings through her skull, and the all-too familiar warning about hazardous Hume levels plays in a stilted monotone. Yet, heedless of the warning, she continues in her affine transgression, feeling the uneven inertia of her body as its relativistic mass distorted along the gradient line perpendicular to her axis of rotation. She felt as an astronaut slipping past the event horizon of a black hole, without the comfort of the transcendental embrace awaiting her at the center. Finally, her body left the semistable equilibrium it had occupied since her birth, and buckled as its three-dimensional curvature was no longer constrained snugly within its Schumme energy well. Though already distorted by nonlinear Lorentz dilation, she was able to see her upper arms, her left thigh and several of her fingers vanish from sight, leaving clean, round cross-sections floating about her fisheye view. The heads of the nearby swimmers seemed to fade away into infinity as her every disjoint piece floated in roughly in the direction she had been running, rotating in unconstrained hyperspherical orbits about an invisible center of mass. Helplessly, she watched as her breasts decoupled from her chest, passing through her bikini as its straps slipped through her shoulders, having been displaced along newfound coordinates. She couldn't help but blush as she noticed her uterus among the dozens of her internal organs now joining the throng, moving as if attached by invisible springs to her body, if her body were two meters ahead of her.

    All at once, she completed one half-rotation, sealing her fate as she was bombarded with isomers of her own organic matter, ranging from merely foul-smelling to lethal. Nevertheless, a smile crossed her lips as the now-corrosive blood began to seep from her hollow casing, disappearing into the unseen void from which she had just returned. With the last of her strength fading, she felt a distant sense of relief. Though it had long since ceased to occupy the subspace observable from the pool area, her disembodied bladder had finally disgorged its contents, freeing her of the burden that had gripped her so abruptly.

    <<GOOD END>>

    (TAGS: M/F, Guro, Necrophilia, Rape, Ryona)

    I decided to write an erotic guro story based on For Honor.
    Highly inspired by https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/12698.html
    >>12698

    Unlike his stories, This is going to be one longer story, following one character.
    This is my first time ever posting something like this, so feedback is welcome. Especially for text-formatting and tagging. Those have me at a loss.
    Now Chapter 2 is in the works, but I can't say anything about when I'm done.
    In the meantime, feel free to give me feedback and maybe help me with ideas.
    _______________________________________________
    Chapter 1:


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    Awesome feedback, guys. Keep it coming, i'll probably read everything.


    >>15631
    Will do… Eventually. Gotta get him away from the vikings first

    >>15632
    Yeah, made the decision/mistake of moving the backstory to chapter 2 to try to give Chapter 1 a faster pace. Backstory will be in the next one.

    >>15633
    On the one hand, i'm not against some levity, but it could definitely be better spaced out to maintain some atmosphere. Might remove, but more likely will just make it more rare.

    >>15634

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    Well, I think the confusion is mainly caused by lack of backstory and voice lines. First of all, who is "I"? What happened to "I"? Why did "I" show up in a Viking house? Who do those bodies belong to? However since you will do some explanation in Chapter 2, I guess those problems will all be solved. As for voice lines, I know how a centurion will attack when he shouts "Īnfirmus" or "incredibilis" out because I have played the game, but for people who don't play the game, they may get confused. For it seems no reason that a man shout something like "incredible" or "the die is cast" out in a deadly battle, right? Also I agree with those voice lines may break atmosphere in your story. Latin phrases are cool, but personally I suggest you to bring them up only when they are suitable for the story. And explanation in parentheses may interrupt rhythm of story.
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    Viktorius seems fine to me lol. However I think some simple name like "Centurion" will also do the job.
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    That was incredibilis.
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    Please i need a chapter 2

    Alright, I'm trying this again. Maybe I'll be able to get myself to write before the thread falls off the list this time.

    (Sorry about that.)

    ***

    “Top or Bottom?” The registration Officer asked unnecessarily, holding out one hand for my identification while he continued typing with the other, a rather impressive feat I had to admit, if only to myself as I passed him my ID card.

    “Top.” I replied simply, looking up at the interior of my new High School. It seemed fairly standard, bland walls, bland ceiling, and a janitor just finishing his waxing of the bland floor. I turned for a moment as I heard the doors open behind me, the first of the other students beginning to trickle in. I had arrived early to complete my registration, a responsible person might have done so earlier but well, that would be a responsible person not me.

    I noticed a severe lack of clothing among the students who entered, indicating that almost all of these were Bottoms as only Tops were allowed to wear more than a modicum of clothing so that class could be easily identified by sight. Civilised society had learned long ago that humanity was generally divided into Tops and Bottoms, those who had the potential ability and mindset to do great things as well as a much more assertive personality. These were of course the Tops. Then there were the Bottoms, those people who had either little ability, intelligence, personality or drive.

    Over the years scientists and various types of psychologists have learned different methods to amplify one's Top or Bottom type of personality, making the segregation that much easier. One took a test when they were young, between five and ten years old depending on where they live, and it was determined which they would grow up to be. There were of course occasional people who registered as neither, but they were shipped off to small colonies at the edge of civilisation to live in the stagnating culture brought on by such people.

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    I'd love to see your new story, but I'm anticipating a scene with Beatrice so much that I simply must demand another chapter~!
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    Bump to not lose :D
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    Just making sure not to lose my stories due to that dgerqwad.
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    Bump to save from faggot spammer
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    Man, this story is great.

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