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    The night sky glowed orange and red, the smoke and embers from the raging fires casting a hellish light. What had taken a thousand years to build had only taken 3 hours to burn to the ground, converted into twisted metal and charred ash. Soldiers from the Republican forces drank beer from looted bars, whooping and hollering as they let loose, the weight of 5 years of constant fighting melting away.

    Corporal Falsenn chewed on his unlit cigarette, engrossed in the view. He turned and looked at his young charge, the former Princess of the deposed Imperial Family. The Princess had been stripped of clothing and her hands tied behind her back tightly. She stared at the ruins of her ancestral home, her eyes wet with tears. The Corporal felt a twinge of pity. His own daughter was around the Princess's age, and he felt a shiver of discomfort pass through him as he thought of what was to come next.

    "How are you holding up, miss?", the Corporal asked gently.

    The Princess turned and looked up at him, her doe-like eyes tinged with red, snot running down her nose. She had been quietly crying all night long, and Falsenn couldn't blame her. Everything she had ever known had been taken and destroyed, and even if what she had known was exploitative, he couldn't blame an innocent teenage girl for it.

    "Fine", she whispered, her soft voice ragged with fear.

    The Corporal nodded awkwardly, reached for his belt and unhooked his canteen. He twisted the cap off and offered it to the Princess. Demurely, she opened her mouth and accepted the swig of water.

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    Very nice story. Always a pleasure to read more hangings, and I liked the thoughtful aspect of it, which made it unique.

    I would have loved a longer description of the hanging, though! It's the climactic moment, after all.

    I hope you post more hanging stories. This one was very lovely.
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    >>20981
    Thanks for the reply. I'll try to flesh out the hanging more in my next story.
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    I love it but am rather confused by who asked who what at the end.
    It's only the military leader and a cameraman, not a 3rd man there in the conversation? And the same cameraman speaks that he's OK with his cousins and sister being executed for throwing fruit?
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    >>21003
    I'm sorry if there was any confusion, I'll try to clarify.

    Corporal Falsenn is looking at the Princess as she hangs, then hears a combat photographer for the Republican forces taking pictures. When the Princess dies, Corporal Falsenn and the photographer stay while the other soldiers leave, and they talk to one another.

    Corporal Falsenn asks the photographer if he thought it was a "moral" thing to kill someone who had not done anything to perpetuate the cruelties against the people of the Empire herself, due to her young age. The photographer responds to Corporal Falsenn's question by recounting his own personal loss due to the actions of the Imperial government, and says that he believes that the message of brutality in the service of a good cause is necessary.

    A Looter's Experiment
    -MK

    Levy militia were chickenshit scum half the time. Roderick knew this by being one conscripted peasant himself. Whenever he and the rest of the unlucky schmucks were in the field, he made sure to stick to the sides and a little bit to the rear. Staying at the rear was an amateur mistake; the ones at the very back were always pushed aside and trampled on once the rout started. That’s not to mention the fact that the commanding nobleman - whoever it was at the time - often picked out the ones at the rear and made examples of them.

    Said nobleman - Roderick really couldn’t remember his name - was currently showing the world his guts by the city gates. To nobody’s surprise, the levy under his command had scattered in the wind, away from the city where the fighting was fierce. Most of them except for Roderick, that was. He was wily enough to understand that opportunities were to be had that outweighed the risk of death. He wasn’t that much of a coward.

    Life was rough as a peasant, Roderick knew. Nothing but the constant drudgery of the fields, grazing of livestock and the fear of starvation if whatever lord that was currently ruling over his village had decided that feasting in the winter was the best way to ration the food stores.

    The sacking of this city might just provide him enough money to live comfortably by himself.

    And here Roderick was, scouring through the corpses in an empty street by the poor residences with a large burlap sack he had hidden beneath his tunic and passed off as ‘extra padding’. His gaze skipped over finely forged swords and plate and honed in instead on coin pouches, jewelry, and the daggers he found on noble warriors that were sure to fetch more than a few shiny silvers with the right buyers.


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    AN: This is my first submission to gurochan and a first jab at erotica in general. It's a bit short since I felt I wasn't going in any direction.

    Any feedback would be appreciated!
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    NICE, just want to read more. And my sadistic side want him to just cut her up, just take the cunt with womb attached, this way he won't have to carry them all.

    Your writing is really good, I'm no writer myself so I don't know what to critic on. Keep it up. :D
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    >>20663
    it ended a bit abruptly but otherwise it's very very good. necro is so underused and when it is it's usually not executed this well.
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    I enjoyed it, love the necro. You should write more!
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    This is awesome hope you continue or make more

    Hi all, I know this is a niche of a niche but I am looking for recommendations on stories featuring casual snuff of young girls, that do not feature cannibalism or dolcett. Ideally, there should be a "free-use" kind of air to the story with the girl not exactly wanting to be snuffed but going along with it anyway; though willingly participating would be fine too.

    Examples of what I'm looking for are:
    - Freedom to Snuff by SexistAliien (https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/2522.html) (specifically the first entry in the story)
    - School Festival by AbbotTar (https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/8041.html)
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    >>20827
    >kids
    It's boomer jargon from decades ago.
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    >>20913
    I was being facetious.
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    >>20895

    Holy crap! That's a nice pile you got there. This is awesome!
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    >>20919
    I did my best. It took 15 hours (I have so many links).
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    I remembered there are three of mine that might appeal to you:

    Dinah makes an exhibition of herself:
    https://pastebin.com/ZuC35NMi

    Polkan's Paradise of Pleasure:
    https://pastebin.com/r9HDfqsA

    And it's sequel, Katie's Last Moment:
    https://pastebin.com/B3qqT46v

    After repairing all links to gurochan stories I don't found this masterpiece. So for greater justice I ressurect it^^
    I hope author of this great story is doing fine.

    [Lord of Pancakes] Ol' McJohnny had a Farm [2016]
    (loli, straight shota, beheading)

    12 year old Jenny was on her way to Johnny's family farm to play with his 9 year old sister Cindy. Cindy and Jenny had been friends for many years and it was Jenny's idea for Cindy to lose her virginity to Johnny a year ago. Since then, there playdates always involved Johnny and sex, so Jenny was excited as always. Her little pussy started to tingle at the thought of another 3 way with Johnny and Cindy, Jenny started running down the road.

    Jenny finally made it to Johnny's house, as she was walking up the path she saw a note on the door. Jenny grabbed it and read it:
    “Jenny,
    Johnny and I are out back in the barn playing Farmer! I just learned about farms and animals in school. I came up with a great game for us to play!
    Cindy”


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    In particle physics there are a set of measurements known as the Planck units. These measurements are extrapolated from the physical constants of reality, such as the speed of light and the Boltzman constant, which describes the mathematics of entropy. A Planck length is the distance a massless particle will travel at the speed of light (the Planck speed) and consequently the Planck time is the amount of time it will take for a particle to travel the Planck length at the speed of light. In the minds of many physicists, the Planck units are the smallest measurements of consequence in our reality, as the laws of physics as we understand cease to have relevance below these measurements within most models and theories. Because of this, the Planck units may be thought of somewhat like the underlying “grid” within our universe, on which the pixels of reality move. Perhaps a single unit of Planck time is the closest we can come to truly defining a “moment” in our world.

    Rebecca stared blankly at her showerhead as the blisteringly hot spray loosened the blood from her supple skin and carried it down her hourglass form and swirling into the drain. She stood there for a long time, mouth slightly agape, eyes defocused as the water scalded her, punishing her for her sins, even as it comforted her, held tight and purified her. Took away the blood. She didn’t try hard to understand what she had done only minutes before, instead simply embracing the heat wrapping around her like a second skin and causing billowing waves of steam to emerge from her apartment’s open bathroom door and into the cool night air past her balcony. Closing her eyes, she felt at peace for the first time in the last… what was it now? Three weeks? A month? It didn’t matter now. A slight smile curled around her lips. All was well now. All could end now. The young woman reached down and gently twisted the two knobs at her waist level, causing the water to spurt to a trickle and for a sudden gust of cool air to run over her from outside.

    She turned and opened her eyes, suddenly realizing she hadn’t even slid her shower door shut in her daze. Slowly, gracefully, her calm figure stepped from the tiled floor onto the fuzzy pink mat a couple steps away, where she stood for a moment and felt the soft strands of synthetic fabric tickle her dripping feet. It was the same sensation she had loved since she was a little girl, just as special as ever this time. Her smile widened. A genuine, sweet, kind smile. She turned once more, this time to the body-height mirror in the corner of the bathroom. She was beautiful, her ivory skin glistening and her perfect blonde hair draping over her shoulders and breasts and wrapping around the curvature of her body like a patient and caring lover in the reflection. She took another silent moment to examine her motherly hips, flared to perfection and curving into her flawless thighs, pressed against each other just enough to highlight the softness of her skin and the pristine balance of fat throughout her body. Her usually modest breasts presented a colorful, tantalizing contrast to her otherwise pale figure, swollen with breastmilk and taking a pinkish hue, shiny and ripe from the internal pressure that was stretching them into beautiful fruit.

    Suddenly her eyes caught the pacifier laying by the toilet in the reflection, a few specks of blood still spatter across its soft plastic surface. Her expression changed for a few moments into, not a frown, but an emptiness. A void of emotion, of thought… characterlessness. But as soon as this transformation had taken place, it was reversed, and her gentle, motherly smile returned. “I love you,” she said silently into the mirror. To whom was unknown even to her. It just seemed a beautiful thing to say in the moment, as the cool night breeze played across her body and caused tiny spots of color to raise across her gorgeous arms and legs, nipples hardening, pointing up slightly from her immaculate breasts. For a moment she felt a thrill, and glanced down almost teasingly at her own lips, barely visible between her silky thighs. She could feel a rush of blood, warmth inside her, contrasting with the cold air as her sex prepared for something that would not come. Not now, not ever again.

    The mother- the girl- the woman, walked with silent, perfect grace through her quiet one-person bedroom, careful not to step in the blood-stains on the carpet as she approached the balcony, hips swaying with the taunting sensuality of a succubus. Her pupils contracted as she exited her room to the neon lights of the city outside, and she took a deep breath of the midnight air, allowing it to play in her lungs for a few moments the way an addict would return to the smoke of a cigar after weeks of a miserable attempt at quitting. It gave her life. Grounded her in the beautiful world around her. And yet, it wasn’t enough. Or rather, it wasn’t a reason to continue. She was happy for this to be her time, her last mark on the world she’d loved living in until now.

    Suddenly she heard a shout. Coming from in front and above her. She glanced up, and caught sight of a young man, appearing to be in his mid twenties, standing on the balcony directly opposite and one floor above hers. “Hey sweetheart,” he intoned with obvious intent. “Saw you out here the other night, but didn’t get a chance to talk.” She could sense his eyes on her naked, dripping breasts, and took no offense, instead smiling sweetly up at him.

    “Enjoy it,” she spoke just loud enough for him to hear, her dark, smooth voice travelling the cool night air in two small, echoing waves. The depth of passion in her voice was unbelievable, and the man felt his heart, and his cock, pounding in his chest and pants. The words of the hauntingly beautiful woman were spoken as if she were instruction, with real power, her lover to enjoy their climax inside of her. He stared at her silently, unable to understand what was happening, awestruck by her beauty, as she lifted herself onto the railing of her balcony and stood up straight, wet hair blowing in the cold night wind around her like a sail in a storm. He tried to speak as he watched lean forward, her smile disappearing under her nose, but his heart had stopped for a moment, and his lungs failed him when he wanted to shout, to call out, to cry to her… “no”.

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    WOW, that was… something else
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    Very nice work! Had no idea where this was going all the way through the end!
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    It is good science porn!

    Sorry there's nothing remotely "guro" in this introduction, other than by implication, but I needed to set the scene. Should get more "interesting" as it progresses ;-)

    Pt 1

    “Hey! This is new!” Chloe exclaimed to Abi as they rounded the corner of the mall and saw the double store-front with the stylised “F” above the entrance. The window display featured mannequins of girls aged from five or six up to young adult but most seemed to be effigies of girls their own age, albeit the impossibly thin, faceless type common to such stores. All seemed to be dressed in fancy leather clothing, from mini-shirts and crop-tops to slinky cocktail dresses and coats that swept the floor, worn over what could either be a leather bikini or underwear set. “Wanna check it out?”

    “I don’t know…” Abi looked uncertainly at the fancy goods in the window. She was pretty sure there was nothing in there a twelve year old girl could afford to buy for herself, not unless she was the daughter of a movie star or something! “Looks expensive.”

    “So?” laughed Chloe, “It’s not like we have to actually buy anything. What’s wrong?” she asked, “You never pretended to be rich before?”

    “Well, when you put it like that!” Abi chuckled and followed her friend through automatic door. The air inside was pleasantly warm and had the comforting aroma of all leather shops mixed with something else the girls could not quite put their finger on. Sandlewood perhaps?

    “Hello, ladies.” A smartly-dressed sales assistant approached them as they came in, her mouth fixed in a customer-service smile that did not extend to her eyes. “Welcome to Falquin’s Fine Leather Emporium. Can I assist you in any way?”

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    >>20860
    This is obviously not Edward's work. The style is completely different, both in terms of the writing itself and the setting. Anyone can write any name on the posts here, so if it's posted under one of the aliases of Edward Hyde it doesn't prove anything anyway.

    When that's said, I enjoy where this story is headed. As anon mentioned, girls getting into trouble is what we like around here!
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    >>20862
    I think there may be some talking at cross-purposes going on here :-) The leather story is mine, started in response to Flaquain's request after some of my others. Someone else, however, asked me to finish a story called "The Trustees' Annual Banquet" and that's the one I cannot remember at all :-) I am currently working on an update for "Beautifully Basted Babysitter" that I hope you'll all enjoy :-)
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    >>20865
    I see, turns out I mixed it all up there! However, I don't remember seeing a story of yours called "The Trustees' Annual Banquet"
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    THE TRUSTEES' ANNUAL BANQUET

    by Perre Fouettard

    Pt1

    “Okay, B-Block, that’s your time!” Officer Maynard blew the whistle alerting the prisoners that their allocated showering time was over. Under the watchful eye of the short but imposing female prison officer, the women wrapped their towels around their bodies, they could dry off properly when they were back in their cells, and lined up as expected against the far wall, waiting to be escorted back to the main cell block by the two male officers who they knew would be waiting for them just out of sight around the corner. The male officers were supposed to remain out of line of sight of the showers while the female prisoners were shouting but the women were under no illusion that they kept strictly to this rule. Even if they did, the CCTV cameras covering every inch of the room made it somewhat obsolete anyway. Officer Maynard consulted her clipboard.

    “B-1543, B-2617 and B-1389 take a step forward.” she barked. The three confused-looking young women did as they were told. “You three wait here. The rest of you, back to your cells. Come on! Get moving!” The remaining prisoners dutifully trooped out, passing as they did so the towel-clad women of C-Block waiting awkwardly in the corridor for their turn. “You three, follow me.” Officer Maynard had the kind of natural authority which meant she had no need to raise her voice. It was simply one of those voices that was automatically obeyed.

    “What do you think this is about?” B-1389, a slightly chubby twenty year old who had been in prison a shorter time than the others, having been arrested for attending an anti-government rally. In truth, she has simply been studying in the library when a group of lads had allowed their discussion to get a little too loud and had been a little too vocal about their thoughts on recent new policies but that had been enough for the Librarian to notify the Police who arrested everyone present, including all members of the library staff except for the one who had informed them. Her name was Emily, known as Em to her friends.

    “No talking.” Maynard snapped as she led the three prisoners through a door marked “Staff Only” at the far end of the shower block, down a short corridor past some lockers and coat racks and into an office. On one wall was a bank of monitors showing live footage from all areas of the prison, including individual cells, the exercise yard and the shower block where the inmates from C-Block were currently enjoy their twice-weekly allocation of hot, clean water. “Stand against the wall. Do not touch anything.” Maynard instructed. The three young women obeyed. “The Governor is coming to speak to you. Be respectful.”

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    >>20880
    Oh wow I stand corrected - yes, I DID write that but deleted it. Now that you've preserved it, I may return to it at some point :) Sorry for the confusion!

    Do you know of any writers accepting commissions? Am looking for someone to put into good words a story of mine. I have every scene plotted out already. Need someone who can describe feelings, pain and various guro stuff well. Must be prepared for some revisions to my liking. Can shell up to $50 depending on length.

    You can drop your profile and work here or shill for someone else. We might even use this thread to list all writers accepting commissions. Thanks folks!

    (Lez/ denial/ con/ fgm/ femcirc/ bodymod/ chastity)

    —–

    Interesting products

    Working at the pre-marketing firm was very pleasant for Charlotte. She had landed a very interesting job straight out of high school, thanks to her language skills. She got to work with a supportive team, all of whom had become very close friends to her over the past two years. The firm was large, with dozens of different teams working of hundreds of different consumer products before they were passed on to different marketing firms.

    Her team consisted of her and four other girls. There was Vivianne, the team leader, a cute short brunette in her late twenties. Then there were Codi and Klara, stunning blonde twins from Canada who mostly worked their phone lines. The two were about Charlotte’s age, with gorgeous 80s luscious hairstyles. They had a thing for vintage fashion and the natural beauty to pull it off. The twins were the stuff of dreams. They were taller than Charlotte and had sizable tits. Not as big as Charlotte’s of course. She was abnormally large. Her Italian heritage blessed her with beautiful olive skin, dark brown eyes, a captivating smile and tits that almost looked out of place on her short frame but seemed to defy gravity.

    Lastly, there was Amber. Amber’s parents were from Russia and she used her knowledge of the Russian language when working with many of the importers and manufacturers. She also did a lot of marketing concepts for products going to targeted segments. Amber was a tall rocker girl with bright red dyed curly hair reaching all the way down to her hips, a sizable septum piercing and often wearing punkish, quite provocative clothing such as fishnets, collars and spiky high heels.

    Charlotte and Amber were very close, more than just friends. Charlotte had not known she was into girls before but when Amber came into her cubicle one late evening with a bottle of wine the two soon found themselves drawing closer to each other, feeling each other’s breath on their skin and eventually their lips touching. They ended up at Amber’s place. Their office romance was no secret.

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    quite interesting a start :D
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    Very good strat, please continue !
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    I really hope you write more of this, it is very much up my street <3

    Accidentally posted this in another thread instead of its own thread so fixing that now.

    Jessica for Dinner
    Tags: Kidnapping, Bondage, Lesbians, Cannibalism, Knifeplay, Cooking, Semi-consensual, Drunk.

    As she slowly returned to wakefulness the first thing that Jessica noticed was that her head hurt. Not just in the sense of a headache, but all of it, down to her jaw which felt strained and over-stretched. Her mouth was open, open wide, and there was something in it. She couldn't quite see what it was, just a flicker of red at the corner of her vision, but she could feel it with her tongue. Whatever it was was large and round and smooth. Like a giant jawbreaker, but it seemed less firm.

    Jessica's addled mind put it aside as she noticed the next thing. She couldn't move her arms. They were locked in place; her hands up by her head and her elbows at right angles. It was pushing out her chest, and now that she realized that; looking down she noticed that her beautiful peach-colored breasts were naked, and so was the rest of her!

    "Ah! You're up!" The sudden interjection drew Jessica's attention to the speaker. It was an Indian girl, younger than her, 18 maybe? Though she could be in her early twenties. She was wearing a cute white tube top through which Jessica could see her jutting brown nipples and a pair of skin-tight blue jeans. The girl looked incredible; her skin smooth and glowing and her smile wide and inviting.

    "I'm Myra," she explained with the same radiant smile. "Don't worry about telling me your name, it doesn't really matter. Meat doesn't need a name, and really all removing that gag would do would be to let you scream and ask questions whose answers you won't have any use for after tonight. So as far as I'm concerned, you're dinner, and that's all the name you'll need, okay?"


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    The entire point is so we can identify things we either preferentially want to read, or absolutely want to avoid at all costs, WITHOUT clicking through to the actual thread and scrolling down to wherever the tags are hidden. Sort it out.
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    I straight up don't read stories without tags in the title
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    >>19499
    Sure, no-one's having a fit. But tagging takes hardly any time, and makes searching/filtering easier. So let's tag, right? No downside.
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    Well, in some cases it could be a spoiler, but I agree that it should be done consistently, our tastes are not so similar and our time and attention are limited.
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    >>19496
    >>19516
    I totally agree to both of these. If your story doesn't have tags in the title I will 98% of the time not click on it.

    We have an etiquette here. Please follow it.
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    THANK YOU! FINALLY SOMEONE SAYS IT!



    Clarissa sat on the plush couch, her finger nervously twirling a stray bang of her golden blonde hair. The waiting room was minimalist, consisting of plain white walls, ceiling, and floor, and containing only the couch, a small table with a scattering of magazines, and a bottle of water. She reached over and grabbed the bottle, unscrewing the cap and taking a deep gulp of water. It was unseasonably hot, and her sweat stuck to her shirt, causing it to cling tightly to her breasts.

    The young single mother grimaced as she thought back to the events that brought her to the room. It started with a letter in her mailbox. The royal stamp was on it, so she had quickly opened it and read the letter. She had been chosen by the king to attend his yearly birthday. The wording implied that it wasn't a voluntary invitation. The king had a reputation for choosing attractive women off the street and taking them to his castle. They were never seen again, although their families were compensated very richly. As expected in a small citystate like San Venizio, rumors ran wild about what exactly happened to these women, but no one knew for sure. Now it seemed like Clarissa was about to find out for herself.

    The door swung open, making Clarissa snap out of her reverie, and a prim looking woman in a business suit walked in with a briefcase in hand. Clarissa didn't fail to notice the two large, burly guards flanking the woman, their pistols holstered on their chest plate carriers. "Ms. Clarissa Overmeier, I am the secretary and legal aide for His Majesty", the woman began. As she talked, her fingers unlocked the briefcase and withdrew a single sheet of paper and a pen. "Before we proceed with the ceremony, I'm going to need you to sign this form". Clarissa took the pen and paper, her eyebrows furrowing as she read the form.

    "Name: Clarissa Franklin Overmeier. Age: 31. Social Identity number: 4558710". Her eyes wandered down, taking in the small print, and her unease only increased. "By signing this form, I hereby declare myself property of His Majesty, with all human rights afforded to me prior now forfeit. Any attempt at escape or causing bodily and mental harm to His Majesty will lead to severe punishment for the immediate family of the subject."

    Her fingers trembled as she signed the last line with her name and initials. The secretary took the sheet and slipped it back into the briefcase. The woman gave a cold smile. "Rest assured, as long as you cooperate, your family will be looked after". She stood up, and motioned for Clarissa to follow. They exited the room, the two guards following behind. Their faces were emotionless, and Clarissa awkwardly looked away.

    His Majesty was waiting in his bedroom when Clarissa arrived with the secretary. Clarissa gasped when she saw the room. It was huge, larger than the dingy one bedroom flat she rented. Her shock increased when she saw the sovereign at last. The king was a private person, so private that no one aside from his most trusted advisors and guards even knew what he looked like. Well, now Clarissa knew.

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    Thats good.

    Tales from the Canterlot Mortuary is a collection of stories surrounding the mortician Mort Momento and looking through the many corpses that head his way, figuring out their means of death, carrying out their terms for a funeral, and having some fun along the way.

    This first entry is more of a pilot story. I had written it a long while ago (like a couple of years now) and I'm just now deciding to publish it here. If you have any ideas for future entries, please suggest them in this format:

    Name: (this would be a character from MLP. It might branch out to other series, but for now, it's MLP. If your suggestion is an OC, please link to their appearence)
    Cause of Death: (how did they die and how were they found at the crime scene?)
    Death Outfit: (how were they dressed when they were processed by CSI?)
    Funeral Arrangements: (what, if anything, have they requested happen to them for their funeral?)

    Without further to do, let's begin!

    Bittersweet (Pinkie Pie, 2nd person)




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    Any chances on something with Derpy or Rainbow Dash?

    Maybe some accident that killed them + morgue necro? :D
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    >>19352
    Not Mort but i think you'll have more chance to get a request written (porvided he have time and the desire to do so) if you developed your idea more

    He made this little form in the OP
    Name: (this would be a character from MLP. It might branch out to other series, but for now, it's MLP. If your suggestion is an OC, please link to their appearence)
    Cause of Death: (how did they die and how were they found at the crime scene?)
    Death Outfit: (how were they dressed when they were processed by CSI?)
    Funeral Arrangements: (what, if anything, have they requested happen to them for their funeral?)

    IMO "some accident" is too vague (unless you want Mort to improvise something for you or decide for you,i dunno) You dont necessarly need to write a whole wall of text/guideline but try to develop your idea more than just "Name X or Name Y get snuffed"
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    >>19353
    Name: Derpy Hoofs and Rainbow Dash
    Cause of Death: Accident(?). Collision at high attitude during flight.
    Dash died from broken neck when impacting Derpy in the air.
    Derpy got her back/spine broken on a rock when she hit ground -suffocated to death.
    Death Outfit: Rainbow Dash tight spandex Flight suit with sport underwear under it.
    Derpy - grey button-up shirt, jeans shorts. Pink cute bra and White panties with hearts on them.
    Incident: Both flyers mush have collided in the air at high speed over the Evefree forest(Dash broken neck and bruise on Derpys forehead).
    Bodies found after approximately one day. Singh of the scene being disturbed as both girls had they clothes in disarray and semen was found in and on them (probably someone found them as they were already dead and used them as no sights of struggle are present).
    Funeral Arrangements: Dash - lack of any found in her documentation. Derpy - not written. By request of royal cort - bodies to be prepared for plastification to preserve them in as much natural looking condition as possible - both being transferred to XXX castle and into private rooms of Txxxxxxx Sxxxxxx.
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    Name: Nightmare Moon(herm version, has horse genitalia for some reason)
    Cause of Death: Execution via beheading
    Death Outfit: Naked, her head being mounted on her now perma erect horsecock
    Funeral Arrangements: None, but her body and head were preserved and essentially given away for public sex relief. Thus certain spells were cast on them. The body should be still warm and is reacting to certain stimuli such as penetrating someone with the penis or getting penetrated by one as if it was still alive. Nightmare Moon's headless corpse and its severed head is also under a special anti-thieving spell that makes it return back to its original spot after 12-24 hours after the body removal or so.
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    bump

    Okay, so I made a thing, a weird thing, in a whim. I hope you like it.



    "Suzie, pleaaaaaase!" Tim begged. "I really need to pass this test. I haven't studied at all!" he explained.

    "No." the blonde girl said firmly.

    "Suzie! We need your help." Leah repeated after her friend. "Just this one time!" the brunette with short hair asked.

    Suzanne sighed. It was always like this before the finals. Everyone knew that she had the best grades, so they were circling her, asking for advice here, there, and everywhere. "How about trying to study instead of begging my help? You know, it might help." the girl said tired. "Not to even talk about the idea." she said, barely resisting the urge to facepalm to the two. It was always fun to go and chat and hang around with the two, but sometimes their whims made her reconsider the friendship. It had been just a few weeks ago when Tim had gotten a great idea to try to climb on the roof of the school building. He had almost broken his foot when he had tried to climb the school's wall. Leah wasn't as bad as Tim, but she often got excited and dragged into the ideas of Tim. Like this time.

    The three were standing just outside the doors of a local grocery store. They had been walking to get some snacks before the last exam of the semester, mathematics of course, when Tim had told them his brand new and absolutely flawless idea for how he could beat the exam without studying for it at all. And as far as Suzie had observed, without studying almost at all at the class during whole semester.

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    Very creative and interesting story. Loved the casual atmosphere.
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    Everyone needs a friend like Leah! Loved the bit about the second-smartest girl getting cooked too :D
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    Amazing story! I loved it!
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    Personally not a fan of the permadeath stuff, but the casual nature of your universe(in particular Leah's generosity) was still really appealing.
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    Masterpiece!

    Pt 1.

    Thank God, it wasn’t cold. I mean it shouldn’t be, it’s early may, but maybe my standing on the Greek theater of campus without a shred of clothing had something to do with it. Some of the first-year students in the podiums are already snapchatting. I can’t really blame them, I’m flattered, and really the more people see this the better.

    The hilt of this knife is cold, wood, and shaped like a large penis. It’s amazing what your local carpenter will do for you if you say it’s for a “project”. My thesis advisor is the one who suggested the guy, cute, but a bit of a creep. Speaking of my advisor, there she is, in the middle of the front row, gorgeous, short skirt and shirt with the first two buttons undone, god what a slut, a sexy, super-smart, chain-smoking, slave-driving slut.

    “Hi, everyone, I am Halley Valentina, my performance titled ‘The Other Sex’ explores the woman’s body as an object of anatomy. I wish to show, that beneath all this objectified beauty, there really is flesh and blood. That behind all the poetry about the feminine beauty, there is nothing but filth and gore, same as the ugliest man alive. Accompanying this performance will be Michael,” I quickly gesture backstage to a male porn star naked but wearing a blindfold.

    “This performance is my final master’s thesis in feminist performance art theory, under Dr. Kate Pappi.” My advisor nods.

    “Let’s begin”, I say, and with the same breath gently press the knife just below my sternum. This is it, I think. The crowd is deathly silent.

    It doesn’t hurt, like at all, not at first. I slowly and meticulously bring the knife down, keeping my eyes at the crowd. Everyone has their phones out, as blood accumulates and slowly drips down the blade. I must hold the knife steadier and dig deep down as I come nearer my belly button, to cut through my abdominal muscles. I feel a sense of pride that my abdominal muscles are giving the resistance that they are, all those months of intense training have paid off.

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    Intriguing start!
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    Would love to see more of this
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    Pt 2

    I put my hand in and pulled out a coil of intestine.

    This wasn’t so bad I thought. Suddenly, I vomited, well dry-heaved, all over the stage. This isn’t happening I thought, was it because of the pain? It had to be, right? I had interned for three months at a morgue, I heaved again, with tears coming out of my eyes. Thankfully, I had fasted for a week before this.

    Oh god, I said, and instinctively looked up at my advisor. She gave me stern look, meaning only one thing…this had to continue. I took a few deep breaths, gulped some air and continued pulling my intestines out.

    At this stage I was horny. I knew this would happen, but I had to ignore it. The intestines coiled and uncoiled and formed a steaming pile in front of me. This was for art. I had to remind myself. This is art. I reminded myself. At one point, the intestines snagged on something, and so I had to yank them out, but thankfully nothing tore. My art project had to be perfect, but what about the throbbing of my vagina? I would have to deal with that later.

    Once my intestines were sufficiently out, and had started tugging on my esophagus, I picked up the knife and cut off. I had meanwhile also managed to take out my stomach. The pain was exquisite. I was sweating from pain and would have defecated had it not been for the fast. My bladder had given way midway though the pulling out, but only droplets trickled down my lag. I had been dehydrating myself for three days for just such a contingency.
    This was stage one.


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    Disclaimer:
    All works are completely fictional. All names were created via random generators, and any likeliness to actual people is a complete coincidence. Be kind to women, they're our mothers, wives, sisters and daughters. With that said, this is fantasy – lets go destroy some cunts.

    Cuntbusting Olympics

    Event: Archery

    The Locker Room
    Four women showered together naked, their skins a multitude of shades creating a tone rainbow of international cooperation and camaraderie.

    The beautiful long golden hair of a British woman gave off a torrent of water as Ailsa Davies squeezed her hair back. Her perfectly light toned body with beautiful arm and back muscle rippling steam filled room. She gently caressed her large D breasts, gently pinching her nipple and giving a piercing grin at Chun-hei across from her.

    Chun-hei flexed her beautiful side muscles as she stretched out, her silky smooth brown skin reflecting gently off the sunlight. Her large dark eyes watching her opponents with a smile on her face. Her petite Korean body looked smaller than Ailsa, but her strong arm muscles show cased her right to be there. She showed off her small B breasts to Alisa, and slicked her hand up her thighs and shaved vagina, and gave her fingers a lick.

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    Damnit. I just noticed I contradicted myself. Forget what the announcers said. First shot must be by arrow, then it can be followed up by anything.
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    Cuntbusting Olympics (ver 2)
    Ver 2: Typo corrections and clarifications of rules made.

    Event: Archery

    The Locker Room
    Four women showered together naked, their skins a multitude of shades creating a tone rainbow of international cooperation and camaraderie.

    The beautiful long golden hair of a British woman gave off a torrent of water as Ailsa Davies squeezed her hair back. Her perfectly light toned body with beautiful arm and back muscle rippling steam filled room. She gently caressed her large D breasts, gently pinching her nipple and giving a piercing grin at Chun-hei across from her.

    Chun-hei flexed her beautiful side muscles as she stretched out, her silky smooth brown skin reflecting gently off the sunlight. Her large dark eyes watching her opponents with a smile on her face. Her petite Korean body looked smaller than Ailsa, but her strong arm muscles show cased her right to be there. She showed off her small B breasts to Alisa, and slicked her hand up her thighs and shaved vagina, and gave her fingers a lick.

    A long haired brunette woman from Belgium with fair skin and beautiful full lips bent over to expose her beautiful ass to the other two women in the shower. Emma Maes's curvy figure bent like a felines as she pressed her hands against the shower wall, and spread her legs to her opponents, letting her dark hair fall towards the floor, giving her opponents a great view of her genitals and strong leg muscles.

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    >Paris, Italy
    Big oof.
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    >>20810

    Well I'm a geographic idiot.

    Thanks for pointing that out, I'll put out v3 with that embarrassment fixed. >.<

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