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    Gurochan isn't exactly Word when it comes to formatting options, but you've got a lot of basic tools at your disposal to make your story not a pain to read.

    Basics



    Each new paragraph should be on a new line with a blank space in between.

    Like so.

    It might look like you have a lot of blank space at first, but it's much easier to read in the long run. This helps mitigate walls of text.

    Dialogue



    You're writing a story, presumably with characters, who presumably speak at some point. Every time a different character speaks, their dialogue gets its own paragraph. Again, it looks like it leaves a lot of space, but it's easy to read (and professional).

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    When I click on "Comment too long, view post No..... to see the full comment" the full comment don´t open.
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    in the Literature section, clicking on the 'comment too long click to read the full comment' doesn't work, and just repeats the screen with the short comment.
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    The long post issue should be good now: >>>/dis/25198

    Sorry we didn't notice it quicker

    Hello!

    Welcome to my new story thread.
    The stories here will all take place in a variety of casual worlds based on fandoms. But with a very casual and brutal tone, hence the name.

    Those stories will all share similar settings. If any further settings diverge from this one I’ll let you know. The next few lines will be a short overview, but you can skip to the story if you prefer.

    First of all the men to women ratio, of course it’s small, but I love to go in the extreme. In those stories there will be roughly one man for every 100,000,000 women. There is only a handful of men/boy at the same time and you can expect to never see more than one boy in each of my story.

    Second of all, there are the usual casual snuff tropes. A man, or a powerful woman, can beat, rape, torture, kill, enslave, or eat any woman they want. Slaves and girlmeat are very common goods that are regularly traded, and girlmeat is the most commonly eaten food in the world.

    There are regular culling, for meat and slaves, by the different governments, to ensure that the population stays as a reasonable size and young, while the economy can continue.


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    Did Caitlyn and Jinx become friends? I'd like to think they did since they shared the same storage room. Also, are there hands tied all the time? If not, Jinx would torture Caitlyn and Maddie brutally because it's her nature, and Caitlyn would likely welcome it, knowing what Holes deserve and fate. But Maddie would complain and sob about it. The prisoners would enjoy this entertainment, and in return they will treat Jinx as brutal as she did with Caitlyn and Maddie. Of course, Jinx wouldn't mind it.
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    They didn't exactly become friends but they chat from time to time, like neighbours.

    Their hands are not tied 24/7 but someone can tie them if they want and they only get untied when someone untie them, they also can't really move their bodies just their arms and legs. It's a bit different for Jinx since she works on the stuffed heads, but yeah, she likes to play when she can ;)

    Caitlyn doesn't "welcome" it but she accepts with no issues. Maddie screams her lungs out and beg her to stop.

    And yeah, they are brutal with everyone ;)
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    With deep breaths the meatgirl suddenly woke up. Odalia looked around: stoves, pans, ovens. She was in a kitchen. And even worse, she quickly realised she was naked, her large breasts bounced heavily with each inhalations. From the corner of her eye she saw that a few noticed her waking up. She wanted to run, but metal bars weighted on her chest and legs. They had put her in a cage specially for food.

    Odalia had no ways to lift the bars, but through sheer fear of death she managed to squeeze herself between those. Of course the cooks prepared for this eventuality. Quickly all of the catering staff gathered in this part of the kitchen, and the one who saw her wake up snatched the back of her head and yanked her on the counter. “She’s awake now! We can’t delay her cooking any longer, the ones scheduled to prepare her with me stop what you’re doing and help me, the rest you can go back to your station.” He explained.

    Odalia’s face was covered in tears. “Please! Spare me!” The chef pushed her deeper into the metal of the table. “Everyone suffered from what you did before your exile. Do not expect mercy or compassion from anyone ever again.” Three more cooks held her limbs and locked her on a stray of vegetables. They pinned her down while rubbing her body with oil and spices. The meatgirl trashed around, or at least tried to. They especially secured her when stuffing her ass and pussy with ground meat. They gaged her screams and pleads with a bright red apple.

    Once they plugged her holes with Radishes, the chef grabbed a fork and used it to poke four holes into her boob. The pain made the adrenaline surged into her body and she managed to push the cooks away barely enough to slide her oiled body between their grips. The meat had no ideas what to do, she spotted a door and bet it all on hoping for a way out. She ran with all her strengths, she couldn’t waste time by removing the apple or the fork, so she just ran through the tears, pain, and extreme discomfort. “The roast is getting away!” she heard behind her.

    All of the staff members come running at her, they weren’t trained figthers like her daughter and future daughter-in-law, but they had the numbers. Odalia on the other hand, had nothing. She was fat, not too fat, just enough to give her a perfect marbling and a hard time running. The oil on her feet made is horrendously difficult to run. The stuffing in her holes weighted her down and made each step a torment. And her huge boobs flopped with each of those steps, the mouvement in itself was hindering, and painful, they flapped against her chest, hurting it and themselves, they shifted her weight constantly and blocked her line of sight, and that is without the fork sunk into the right one.

    The cooks had the advantage to know the place. One hurled a frying pan into the meat’s path, and she received it into the corner of her forehead. The impact not only hurt like hell but caused the fleeing food to last her balance. She mixed-up her feet and had to fight to stand right. Forced into half skating with the oil on her feet and making random steps to not fall, her large body did not help her to balance herself. She eventually completely fell forward and slide to the door, or into the door face first to be exact.

    In a semi-relieved panic she attempted to reach for the door nobs, but the door was lock. She never had a way to escape to begin with. A fraction of a second later, the chef grab the meat and wrap his hand around her throat. “Not a chance! Roasts roast. You won’t escape your fate, you deserve this.” The rest of the cook immediately bent her limbs, folded her boobs and ass to limit every inch of moments she could do.

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    “You may kiss the brides!” announced the priest. Luz and Amity shared a kiss as the gathering of their friends cheered. Amity threw the bouquet and their friend Willow caught it. This meant the party could properly begin!

    The caterers brought the different dishes and lastly the large roasted corpse of Odalia. It was a nice golden brown, and diffused an incredible smell all around. Her face was visibly covered in dried tears. All of the guests let out a long “WOOOW!” of excitement as they saw who they were going to eat.

    Eda, Luz’s mother figure, approached the couple with a smirk. “Congratulations! You didn’t tell me you roasted that bitch! Well done.” Luz and Amity laughed at her comment, and the former gave Eda a high-five.

    As per the tradition, the newlyweds went to the roast and grabbed a large knife together. Odalia’s mouth was still letting out smoke through the apple and here eyes had been crushed and replaced by cherries. None could repress a smile after seeing her tormented expression. With cheers, the couple used their knife and sliced off a large chunk out of Odalia’s ass. “Yeah!!!!” they heard.

    After the first cut, everyone could get their share. The caterers helped them and some guests help themselves. Quickly, Amity’s former mother only had half of her meat left. They grabbed meat all over her body, her bones quickly appeared. She looked like a chicken carcass.

    Everyone got their meat and vegetable, it was served on paper plates so the guests could eat it while they walked, danced, and chatted. The party resumed, the main couple lit the dance floor, their friends and family around them, some chatting, some dancing.

    Luz and amity stopped once in a while to nipple at their meal. They were served one tip of the boobs each and the pussy to share. When they finished their plate, the guest went back to the buffet to grab a bit more meat from Odalia’s bones.

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    No context for this one ;)

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    The guest sat down in the comfortable armchair. Before long he had Harley in front of him. She was kneeling and pulling down his pants. She quickly took his tip into her mouth to play.

    “Hello and welcome mister. I am here solely to please you, if there’s anything you’d like feel free to ask.” She explained before resuming her blowjob.

    This let the guest happily surprised. “Really anything, let’s see…” He caressed her face with a single finger. “What would happen if I asked you to serve me this pretty face of yours on a plate.”

    Harley stifled a laugh through his dick, she slid it out of her mouth to reply, but she kept entertaining it with a handjob. “If you asked me for that, then I’d have one of my friend over there take care of you. After that I’d go to our kitchen and take a knife. I would slid it between my teeth and lip, then shove it until it comes out from the side and do the same all around. Once cleaned, I’d then push my face, barely tied to my skull, into a burning pan, making sure all of your meat gets evenly toasted before slicing it completely off from my head. I’d add everything you want me to, and finally another of my friend would bring you your meal, while I wait in the trash can as used good. Be before that...”

    She plays with him even more sensually, licking his cock and rubbing it against her face to make him enjoy this even more. “I’d have to ask you how done you want your meat.”

    Welcome to "One (More) Week in Dolcett: Scarlett Sky."

    COVER ART: https://ifcomp.org/play/3272/full_cover

    This story is a direct sequel to my first interactive fiction story, "One Week in Dolcett." For the uninitiated, text-based adventures require readers to read a passage and then make a selection that determines how the story will progress. But, because this is a Dolcett story, the reader's choices will determine whether the lead character, Scarlett Sky, advances on her journey or ends up served on a plate as someone's dinner.

    As such, this story contains extremely graphic and erotic scenes involving cannibalism, violence, sex, dubious consent, identity loss, murder, and death. "One (More) Week" is also a story about growth, perseverance, and self-actualization under the most extreme conditions. It is a story about people, for people, and written entirely by a person in an effort to combine the deepest human emotions with our most primal instincts. It is absolutely written for Dolcett fetish readers to explore the complicated relationship we all have between our identity as people and our perilous desires.

    This story contains OVER NINETY Dolcett snuff endings that indulge each and every cooking method, while also providing insight into the characters who would consume Scarlett on her journey back to Dolcett. Every ending is a fully fleshed-out steamy scenario—there are no “wrong turn, you died” endings. Every conclusion provides both an erotic demise as well as additional insight into the people and world of this story. I believe “One (More) Week in Dolcett” is unique in this regard when it comes to gaming: it leads with a compelling narrative that is enthralling in itself, but can be enriched with every “bad” conclusion.

    “One (More) Week in Dolcett” also expands upon the gameplay of the original by removing the blind choices that drove the original story. A careful reader can gain insights at every decision and “know” the correct path forward—but straying from the tools the story teaches will likely lead to Scarlett Sky on the menu. This story also contains a new challenge system developed specifically for the game, called Mindbreak, which places the reader directly inside Scarlett’s lustful mind and gives the reader only seconds to act to save her life.

    There are two websites to experience this story, both are highly regarded and vetted. The first is itch.io, the most commonly used website for independent developers to post their games. The second is the IFComp website, as this story is an accepted entrant in the 2026 IFComp - The Interactive Fiction Competition listed on Wikipedia as "the super bowl of interactive fiction. This distinction makes "One (More) Week in Dolcett" perhaps the first Dolcett story ever accepted in a major competition.

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    This one is markedly worse, the Mindbreak feature is nearly impossible and completely uneeded.
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    I just completed the whole thing, all 3 branches, Dee's book, etc.

    It was an awesome read. Really the best I've read in a long time.

    The mindbreak thing gets a bit in the way of casual reading, but provides a good imersion. I did however had to retry many times to find the right phrase, and it was a bit bothersome. Still, I made it. I'm used to indy arcade games with many retries to get a specific scene so it was a bit similar to that, repeating a scene over and over to get to find the right mindbreak solution.

    I liked the non repetitiveness of the death scenes, or split of details between them (one focussing on getting in the 9ven, the ither of the baking process, other of the deguststion, etc.)

    I would have enjoyed a few scene where her decapitated head is fucked while her body is roasting, but heh. (If there was ine, I didn't find it) I still really wnjoyed the game over scenes. I hope you make more of these type of games. (not necessarly another sequel)

    Cheers!
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    Thanks for both comments, I really appreciate it. The mindbreak has had some love/hate feedback, for sure, and noted.

    And - thank you to anonymous for saying it was the best thing you'd read in a long time and doing multiple play throughs! Means a lot! Email me at [email protected] if you want to connect

    This is the story requested by Vic as his prize for winning my recent contest. The story breaks naturally into two parts so here is part one, part two will follow shortly! Enjoy :D


    A Banquet for The Gods – A Fantasy Feasts Story
    By
    Edward Hyde


    Part One: Party Preparations


    “It’s quite something, isn’t it?” Melanie observed in awe, looking up at the wood-effect effigy of a rearing horse, roughly twice life-size.


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    > “Just a little taste! …”
    This post can also only be a little taste, taking into account that you announced that you'll try to get Part Two finished this coming week. It's just Monday which means there is much time to deliver an epic epos, isn't it? :)=) I'm sure we can expect another splendid masterpiece.


    @Tanja Mars and @Sven Ritter: This opulent setup developed by Edward looks to me very suitable for your kind of artwork as you already had produced scenarios with feasts at (garden) parties. What do you think?
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    Very sorry, I don't think I am going to finish this by the end of tomorrow and I'm sure nobody wants to see the ending rushed! I will be otherwise occupied for about a week from tomorrow so I shall finish it when I'm back! In the mean time, I shall post as much as I have so far!
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    Once everyone was close to being done eating their Iphegnia appetiser, members of Melanie’s team went around with rubbish bags to collect the used plates. Agamemnon knelt with his head bowed on one side of the altar while the priest stood looking upwards, his arms raised to the heavens, on the other and the two handmaidens knelt at either end, their heads bowed in supplication like their master. The whole scene and all the performers who had been part of it sank down into the floor which closed over them, leaving an open and empty arena once more. Nep was about to ask what was going to happen next but then a deep and resonant voice began to boom through the speakers around the theatre.

    “And so, his sacrifice being pleasing to Hera and to her husband and their court, Agamemnon and his fleet did set sail for Troy.” The voice was familiar, like it was somebody he knew from TV, and Nep wondered whether it was a pre-recorded track or there was someone down below reading out the narration in real time. Either was, he wondered also whether it really was a performance by someone famous that Melanie’s company had been able to arrange or whether it was just a man with a similar voice imitating the better-known actor. “The journey was long and arduous,” the voice continued in a sonorous rumble, “but in time they reached their destination and did lay siege to the city. But,” the narration continued, “the walls of Troy were impregnable, its soldiers who defended them mighty, and although they could not be defeated, Agamemnon’s army could gain no advantage over them either. Days turned to weeks, weeks to months and months to years,” the unseen narrator reported gravely as the whole audience, Nep included, listened in enraptured silence, “and the goddesses who watched over the Greeks and over the people of Troy wept at the loss of life and resolved to beseech Zeus to bring about a speedy conclusion. Yet each wished for their chosen people to prevail.”

    Two smaller circular trap-doors opened in the floor and a cloud of smoke, illuminated very brightly from below, erupted from each of them. The light made them almost too bright to look at, which was the idea, and as the light disappeared and the smoke began to dissipate, two figures were revealed. Two girls, both around fifteen or sixteen years old, now stood before the throne. Both incredibly beautiful, one on the left from Nep’s perspective was black with her hair in micro-braids but tied up elegantly under a golden tiara. He sheer toga was a rich purple and she wore gold jewellery like Rowan’s. The other girl had golden-blonde hair which was partially tied back and partially allowed to hang in ringlets either side of her face and onto her shoulders, and a honey tone to her skin hinting at perhaps some mixed heritage in her ancestry. Her toga was green to match her eyes. Like Rowan, both girls had one breast exposed. In the case of the girl in purple it was her right and for the girl in green her left.

    “Why have you come before us?” Rowan, in her role as Hera, asked imperiously.

    “I, Artemis, have come to petition the Mighty Zeus on behalf of the people of Troy!” the black girl declared.

    “And I, Athena, seek your favour, oh Mighty Zeus, for the Greeks.”

    “And what will you offer me in return for my favour?” Nep asked, taking in the sight of the scantily-clad teens and trying not to think too much about what he knew must be to come later, wanting to savour the whole experience and enjoy every moment building up to the inevitable climax.

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    The team worked quickly and efficiently, smearing the naked teens from neck to to toe with oil then patting a mixture of dried herbs, rock salt and cracked pepper-corns all over them as, behind them, another altar like the one on which Iphegnia had been sacrificed rose up out of the ground. The one, however, was nearly three times the length and was topped with a bed of real, glowing coals rather than a metal hot-plate. The reliefs carved or moulded around its sides showed scene of the Trojan war, including the horse being brought into the city by its unsuspecting inhabitants, Odysseus and his men slipping out of it and opening the gates then Agamemnon’s army swarming in and sacking the city. At either end of this altar were bronze spits protruding around three feet out of the ground at an angle of around forty-five degrees. Mounted onto the ends of the altar’s top surround were matching bronze handles and on the ground were similar arches that a foot could be slipped under with a curved piece behind to cup the heel.

    Once again, once the first team had done their work, a second team appeared with the apparatus needed to remove the hair from their heads so that it would not burn as they cooked. With a dignity befitting the divine nature they portrayed, the two oiled and seasoned goddesses, their heads now as smooth as the mouth-watering fillets between their legs, approached the altar, Artemis to the left, from Nep and Rowan’s perspective, and Athena to the right. First slipping their feet under the arches then positioning them so that their heels were against the back plates, both girls carefully lowered themselves onto the sharp, waiting spits which extended a good ten inches inside their bodies. Both girls winced as the spits forced their way through their cervix and into their uterus but neither cried out or gave any other sigh of distress. They were meant to be goddesses after all, offering themselves as a sacrifice, and the self-impalement was a sign of their willingness in making their offering. Breathing heavily and trying to relax around the thick, bronze intruders, both girls gripped the handles at their respective ends of the altar and a mechanical, rumbling sound started up.

    It was difficult for the audience to notice what was happening at first but they quickly worked out, as much from the way the girls squirmed and straightened their backs as much as anything else, that the spits were working their way up inside them, pushed by some unseen force from below. At around the same moment, both girls began to cough as if they had something stuck in their throat then the spits erupted out of their mouths, pushing down their tongues and scraping against their teeth until they came to a stop with about twelve inches visible in front of each girl. With the audience watching in awe, a second, much thinner spike began to rise out of the ground an inch or so behind each spit. These spikes, the caterers carefully guided into each girl’s anus to serve as a stabiliser. The angle of both spit then began to change, with the mechanical mount of each rising up behind them and lifting the spit horizontal, the girls still holding onto the handles for the moment but shifting their feet out of the floor-stirrups.

    Once the spits were fully horizontal. The caterers lifted the girls’ legs level with it and tied their ankles to the spit with the same golden rope that had been used to tie Gemma’s behind her head. Then they tied their wrists behind their backs and used the remainder of the rope to connect wrists to ankles so that the arms of the roasting girls would not flop about too much as they turned. With another mechanical rumbling, scraping sound the spits moved forward so that the girls were now suspended over to coals, the tips of their respective spits just inches from each other, then they began to turn.

    Inside the horse, the pre-teen girls squirmed with pleasure against their bonds, the inside of the effigy bombarding them with heat from all sides as they were constantly misted with a fine mix of water and seasoned oil, both to keep them moist as they cooked but also to ensure the most delicious possible flavour for their meat.

    “Did you see Nep’s face when we came out!” Suzi giggled in a soft voice which never the less resonated around the inside of the glowing orange chamber so that Gemma could easily hear. “I thought he was gonna pass out!”

    “I bet he’s looking forward to your tits!” Gemma grinned. “Do you think he’ll have both of them or share one with his girlfriend?” They both giggled, Suzi clearly understanding that her friend was referring to the young woman who was playing his wife in a professional capacity.

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    Just a little something that Ed asked me to work on to dress up the story, ... Might be more later

    I've started writing a couple vignettes of a story about a guy who works as middle school teacher at a 'Snuff School's (it's just a middle school but you murder girls)

    Anyway, here's the first part.

    At the station, I absentmindedly adjusted my timepiece, tapping impatiently against the worn leather straps. Glancing up, I readied myself for another tedious day at P.S. 103, my district's all-girls snuff school. Dismally greeting the morning with a dispassionate mantra—work, kill girls, repeat.

    To fill the time before departure, I scanned my surroundings until a fortuitous sighting: two young students in P.S. 103 attire. Hope kindled in my chest—perhaps fate had delivered a suitable companion for the wait.

    I walked over to the two girls. He didn't recognize them. "Excuse me," I said, "are you two students?"

    The two girls turned around. Slim, Asian, maybe 12 or 13. "Yes sir," one of them said. "I'm Kiki, this is my sister, Miki."

    Brushing invisible dust from my sleeve, I leaned in casually, delivering a grim ultimatum. "Alright, here's the deal: I only require one of you for my fucktoy. The other I'll snuff out."

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    This is fucking EXCELLENT.
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    Shame this hasn't been updated in a couple of months, I was enjoying it.
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    Very nice, though it is a shame that it hasn't been updated in months.
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    Are you still alive? Is there any chance of any updates to this series?

    Did you get locked in a closet like Amy and starve to death?
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    so. any plans on a follow up to this great story?

    "If you're looking for the cellar, it's two doors down and to the left, but I wouldn't go in there without a torch," the innkeeper said, leaning over the scarred wooden counter. "The damp gets into everything, and the rats have grown bold enough to steal a man's boots if he falls asleep."

    Kaelen didn't answer immediately. He spent a long moment staring at the map sprawled across the grease-stained table, tracing the jagged lines of the valley that the locals refused to name. For three months, he had followed a trail of cold hearths and empty villages, moving through the highlands where the wind sounded like a choir of the grieving. He had slept in ditches and eaten salted fish that tasted like old leather, all while tracking a scent that didn't belong to any animal he’d ever encountered. The search had been a slow, grueling process of elimination, narrowing a thousand square miles of wilderness down to a single, oppressive peak.

    The ascent had taken another week, climbing through a canopy of suffocating grey fog that clung to his cloak like wet wool. He had found the castle not by sight, but by the sudden, absolute silence of the forest. The birds stopped singing, and the wind ceased its whistling the moment he crossed the invisible threshold of the estate. The fortress sat atop the cliff like a jagged tooth, its black stone absorbing what little light the overcast sky provided. There were no guards at the gate—only a heavy, oppressive sense of being watched by a thousand unseen eyes.

    He had expected traps, or perhaps a gauntlet of mindless thralls, but the interior of the castle was unsettlingly pristine. The floors were polished obsidian, and the air smelled faintly of ozone and dried lilies. Kaelen moved with a practiced, rhythmic caution, his boots barely making a sound on the stone. He had navigated the labyrinthine corridors for an hour, his hand never straying far from the hilt of his blade, until he reached the heavy oak doors of the inner sanctum.

    As he pushed the doors open, he wasn't met by a monster, but by three women. They stood in a semi-circle, blocking his path with an air of casual, predatory grace. They wore nothing but sheer, transparent gowns of pale silk that clung to their curves, offering no modesty and little mystery. Their figures were lush and exaggerated, with heavy breasts that strained against the thin fabric. Through the translucent material, the dark, metallic glint of heavy piercings in their nipples was clearly visible, catching the dim torchlight as they shifted their weight. They didn't look frightened; they looked amused, as if a stray dog had somehow wandered into a royal banquet.

    "You’re a long way from the valley, hunter," the woman in the center purred, her voice a low, melodic vibration that seemed to echo in the obsidian floors. She stepped forward, the silk of her gown rippling over her hips, her gaze lingering on Kaelen’s travel-worn gear with a look of genuine pity.

    Kaelen didn’t feel the intimidation they were projecting. He had faced chimeric horrors in the deep woods and survived the crushing silence of the peaks; three women, no matter how distracting their proportions or the daring transparency of their attire, were merely obstacles. However, he wasn't foolish. He knew the strength of a vampire's nobility—the way they could move faster than the human eye could track. To fight them in a chaotic scramble would be to gamble with his life. He needed to break their formation, to create a moment of sheer, blinding agony that would shatter their coordination.

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    Kaelen approached her slowly, his eyes scanning the lush symmetry of her form. He stopped before her, his gaze lingering on her breasts. They were masterpieces of nobility—heavy, pale spheres that strained against the sheer silk of her gown, their peaks hardening with every gasp of pleasure. He leaned in, inspecting them with a jeweler's precision. While both were flawless, he noted a slight, barely perceptible difference in volume; the left breast was marginally fuller, a more decadent curve of ivory flesh.

    "You're quite fond of the pain, aren't you?" Kaelen remarked, his voice dry and devoid of pity. He reached out and cupped the larger breast, feeling the frantic beat of her heart echoing through the tissue. He could feel her shivering, her moans intensifying as she sensed his proximity.

    "Since you're so fond of the sensation, let's see how you handle a permanent loss," Kaelen murmured, his voice a low, clinical drone. He shifted his grip, his fingers digging into the lush, heavy weight of her left breast. "I think a precise amputation will push that pleasure of yours into something truly transcendental."

    The vampire didn't speak, but her response was visceral. A long, shuddering wail escaped her throat, her hips bucking violently against the shaft of the lance. Her eyes were rolled back, her breath coming in ragged, desperate hitches that sounded more like a plea for more than a protest. Kaelen took the rhythmic vibration of her body as a definitive *yes*.

    He reached out and gripped the heavy metallic ring piercing her nipple, pulling it taut. He didn't just tug; he stretched the sensitive peak outward, creating a tension that made the vampire’s entire frame stiffen. He wanted the tissue primed and stretched, maximizing the exposure of the underlying layers for a cleaner harvest. As he felt the resistance of the skin, he brought the silver edge of his broadsword to the base of the breast, the cold steel contrasting with the feverish heat of her skin.

    "Listen closely," Kaelen whispered, leaning closer to her ear as the blade first breached the epidermis. "The steel is sliding through the subcutaneous fat now. It's a thick, buttery layer, resisting just enough to make the separation feel earned."


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    more stories on my pixiv account
    https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/2996805

    "At least your stance looks good." The man chuckled, echoing the same words Taki had so boldly pronounced at the start of their battle. The defeated kunoichi could only grit her teeth in silence, unable to form a rebuttal amidst the overwhelming pain that consumed her trembling form.

    The sharp poke on her rear barely registered compared to her missing limbs, the shame of it somehow weighing more than her mutilated state.

    The formerly arrogant kunoichi's conqueror casually planted his sword upon her upturned ass, mockingly laying claim to the limbless bitch. Her stocking clad cheek dimpled beneath the pressure, her firm and round buttocks tightening.

    The slut had lost the hands she dared to raise against him, lost the arrogant little feet that dared to tread upon the battlefield.

    That defiance broke when he showed his true intentions.

    R-R-RRRRRRRIIIP! Her outfit tore away the thin barrier that so shamelessly outlined her hairless pussy, her folds twitching as they were completely exposed.

    The man paid no heed to the slut's sudden change in demeanor, ignoring the frantic begging and pleading as he stripped away the rest of the flimsy red fabric.

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    Four men discover the aftermath of the bitch's brutal rape and execution.
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    The bitch's humiliation displayed for the world to see. No longer a kunoichi, reduced to a cumdump public toilet.
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    Anyway, feel free to write some story beats/snippets for the images. If you don't know what's going on, just CSI it as best you can.

    Example: Image 3 her throat was sliced, silencing her screams, the injury clearly stretching her neck as her torso's weight pulled on what little flesh remained to connect her head and limbless body.

    Image 4 shows her body with its vertebrae exposed and pulled out, clearly a result of having her neck slashed while hanging.
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    Hopefully someone will write something sexy to accompany these images, but I'll come back occasionally to try and write/edit some stuff myself.

    I'd appreciate any help or encouragement.

    Something happened to the last one, so here's a new one. For any self-contained stories of yours that are no more than a hundred words. I won't tell you if that includes the title.

    I personally find that this extreme constraint really helps in getting writing done. It forces you to be efficient, and it's easier to remain aware of the whole story and tell yourself that it is finished. And sometimes there are ideas that just don't seem like there's enough to them for a much longer story than that.

    Many word processors have word counters.
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    >>31787
    >>31789
    niiice
    any dolcett vignette perhaps?
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    The random woman was jogging, listening to some Taylor Swift's song in her earpods, when you intercepted her in the park.
    You stripped her of her jogging panties and tried to fuck her doggy style against a tree, but your penis couldn't get through all the way. Why? You pulled a string and discovered the reason: She was wearing a tampon. It must have been uncomfortable to jog while on her period. Oh, well, more uncomfortable still to be raped when she just went outside for an innocent jog.
    So you rammed her while her running blood soaked your phallus, and you got one of your hand inside her sportsbra, rubbing her sweaty tit. Every inch of the bitch was slippery and stinked of sweat, having already jogged for about an hour or two under the hot sun before you got to her.
    With the other hand you grabed her head and slided her face up and down the rugged crust of the tree, disfiguring her. Skin and teeth got stucked in the tree while you cummed.
    You buttoned your pants and turned her to face her rapist. You noticed she had strong muscular legs.
    "Now, let's see how you jog with your legs broken".
    "No, please!", she begged, "I've been practising so much! You can't take this away from me!"
    "Watch me".
    You pressed your boot against her knee and bended her leg in an unnatural way with a cracking sound, causing a howl of pain that was probably heard a mile from there. Then you did the same with the other leg and left the blood-stained woman to be found later by someone who might take pity of her and may help to a wheelchair, to where she would be bound for the rest of her days.
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    >>31806
    All original, baby.
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    >>31810
    well, what i meant:
    will there be any of these short stories set in a dolcett envirioment?
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    >>22038

    Dear Mom and Dad

    Today was great! Being a Toy Scout camp counselor was such a good idea! I took my troop of campers on a nice hike in the woods, and even came back with a few. There were eight to start, but naturally nobody expected all of them to make it. Two of the girls earned new snuffing badges though!

    I'll tell you all about it later tonight, but I gotta get back to my three girls washing up in the lake. Hiking is messy!

    Sorry for all the blood and cum and brains on the paper.

    Love, Joy

    (Incest, lesbian, birth, implied cannibalism, loli, pet trans f)
    The couch was crowded, but a lot of it was empty as well. Jillian was sitting on Barbie's lap, her nanny, although she felt more like family. Janet, Jillian's mom, who had been Barbie's nanny when she was younger, was cuddled up next to the rwo girls.

    As was tradition every year, the three were huddled on the couch to watch the video of Jillian's birth. Her older sister Macy was curled up on the floor at their feet.

    On the screen, filmed on her thirteenth birthday, Janet was sweating and pushing and screaming as her father, and father of the nearly born baby, stood by "fuuuuccckkkk!!! Dadddddyyyyy!!!!" the Janet on the screen was screaming as the crown of her first baby girl was emerging "ohhhmygoddaddyyy!!!"

    Janet on the couch, next to Barbie and Jillian, had her right hand pumping into her cunt as she mouthed the words along wirh her thirteen year old self "fuck! Daddy I'm cumming!!!" And she did. Like she always did. Like she had when her oldest daughter emerged from her body ten years ago to the day. Janet trembled and wanted to close her eyes and lean her head back, but she kept her eyes locked on the screen as she fisted herself and came nearly as hard as she had back then. Her daughter and the nanny moaning and whimpering right next to her barely registered in her mind.

    Jillian rocked her hips as she watched, transfixed as always, at the moment her big sister was born. Sitting on Barbie's lap, riding her nanny's surgically enhanced cock, Jillian knew her moment was about to come, and she would too. They all would. They always did.

    Janet had been Barbie's babysitter years ago, when Jillian and Macy were still toddlers. It was only a year ago that Barbie (although she went by Marie back then, before the DDD implants and the laser treatment and the general bimbofication at Jillian's request... Jillian wanted her bff to be a Barbie doll, and nobody argued) had moved in to be the live in nanny at fourteen years old. Janet kind of saw her as a little sister. Jillian saw her as a big sister, more than her actual sister, curled up on the floor.


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    Sorry for double posting. I'm just not used to how posting works here.
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    >>31795


    That's a lot of confusing information. Are you sure it's not written by an AI? ;)

    Allow me to give you a hint. Make some detailed notes to sketch your idea. After writing a first draft wait some days or longer. Then read your text as if you haven't seen it before. While doing so make notes about what you just read. At the end compare your first and second notes. If you do this honestly you'll be surprised about the many differences. Now it's time to fix them and write the next version. Repeat the procedure. Some day the discrepancies will be acceptable small and you got your final text.

    Good luck.
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    The information provided in the story was a bit confusing, but it was quite interesting.

    Also, was there a reason for why Macy was raised as a pet whilst Jilian wasn't?
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    >>31813
    Not AI at all (just over tired and over alcoholed), but I just had too many ideas that I forced into a very short story. And I didn't do as much proofreading or editing as I should have. I don't tend to do a lot of world building by exposition, so my writing can be like being thrown into a cold pond. It all totally made sense in my min's eye, but I failed to spell it out the way I had hoped to.

    I promise the idea is/was very hot and playful. I rushed it. I may revisit it and repost it more the way I imagined it.

    Thank you for your criticism (although it was ouchy, but not unwarranted)

    I have loved a lot of the stories here, but I don't think I'll ever go so in depth as Jenny's Piglet Cure or Training Tina, for a couple examples of longer stories.

    But who knows?
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    >>31813
    There were reasons. At first I toyed with the idea that it was tradition to snuff the firstborn girl, and then as I was writing I changed my mind. I went back and changed some things and diced it would be more fun if Macy was still there but not considered human. I though the twins' relationship as person and pet could be more interesting when it got to the next chapter. I actually imagined this starting with Jillian blowing out her candles at the party, but then I overcomplicated everything.

    I haven't written much guro to begin with, and this was only my 2nd go here. I think I had too much loli guro pent up in my mind and it tried to burst out all at once. Smh.

    I've realized that I should really have a single thread for all my miscellaneous little bites of meatgirl. I'm sure I'll still have longer stories/chains now and then on their own thread, but a lot of my stories will probably get posted here now.

    Tags will vary, but most will have consensual, cannibalism, snuff, lesbian with quite a bit of incest
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    >>31778
    Thanks 😊

    I didn't really call attention to it, but the doctor was quietly taking the meat as his payment for the house call and/or just to get rid of the bodies. I never really made up my mind if he was selling them to the neighborhood butcher or keeping them for himself. Probably some of each.

    > "Well, I am tempted by your offer– uh Satu, but I need to deal with this little monkey while she’s fresh. So, for now, good night.” Then he hefted Rosie over his shoulder and left.

    I was originally going to have Mama chop up each little monkey to split with the doctor, but I decided that was just slowing down the story.
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    >>31779
    Well that's a lot of meat for one person so I imagine he has a deal going with a local butcher! The only thing that might have made this story a little better would have been a variety of euthenasia methods but I understand the repetitiveness is part of the conceit :D
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    >>31780
    > The only thing that might have made this story a little better would have been a variety of euthenasia methods but I understand the repetitiveness is part of the conceit

    Yes, good point. This story started with several fewer points of variation in each day, and I kept adding more with each editing pass, so really the reason the snuff method was always the same is that I got tired of reading about little monkeys jumping on beds after about the hundredth monkey met her end. 😮‍💨

    Maybe if I repost this on Ao3 a few months from now when I'm ready to look at it again, I'll spice it up a bit more.
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    Sorry for a late response but it took me a while to browse through your stories and of course I read those that appealed to me (I at least peeked at all).


    >>27959 (>>27955)

    > … it reads more like a summary of events rather than an actual story.
    That is certainly true. It reads like a fairy tale from Brothers Grimm. The style is very similar, so I think it fits the story perfectly.


    >>28649
    Do you know Christopher Nolan's 2006 movie "The Prestige"[1], based on the 1995 novel with the same name[2] by Christopher Priest, starring Hugh Jackman, Christian Bale, Michael Caine, Scarlett Johansson and David Bowie? Movie and novel are like a template for your (short) story, only a little less bloody but with more deaths. I don't know the book, but the movie is absolutely worth viewing.

    [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Prestige
    [2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Prestige_(novel)
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    >>31799
    > It reads like a fairy tale from Brothers Grimm. The style is very similar, so I think it fits the story perfectly.

    Thanks! I was deliberately imitating the structural style from those old timey fairy tales when I wrote that one, and I'm glad at least one person appreciated that. Even still, I recognize that the old style isn't used anymore for good reason, so I probably won't try that again.

    > Do you know Christopher Nolan's 2006 movie "The Prestige"?
    Yes, love it. I thought about it a lot while writing my own little 'prestige' magic story. That opening scene where Michael Caine explains the three acts of every magic trick were a major guiding force in planning this story. Obviously, there were a few other scenes I also took inspiration from in that movie, as you noticed 😉


    Let's have a writing general!
    This is a thread dedicated to taking and delivering requests or suggestions.

    >Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate.
    >All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.

    >Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens.
    >You might get lucky.

    >Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in GC.
    >Use that negative energy for requesting, reading, and writing instead.

    >Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into.

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    Request: non-con, rape, combat, death.

    Beauty and the Beast.

    The Beast doesn’t wait for Bella to fall in love with him. He rapes her daily until she falls in love with being raped and abused. Anyone who attempts to rescue her is tortured, killed, ripped apart by the beast. He forces Bella to cook up the meat for his dinner. It could have him forcing her to eat it as well.

    In the end she is bound to him. Serving his every need.

    Writing letters asking for brave souls to rescue her.
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    >>31661
    >I will never have the time to write them myself.
    Oh no!
    >I have a dozen story ideas in my head.
    Please share them!
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    >>31680

    Here are some of them (link below). I’ve written a couple of these ideas so far. Mostly under 18, erotic cannibalism stuff yet anyone can have a shot at writing their story +18 if they like. I make no claim to any story idea I present here.

    https://boards.guro.cx/lit/koko.php?res=31175
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    >>31683
    Fascinating. Can you tell us why you like what you like? Would you write a story about something else?
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    **this is a work of fiction, inspired by a work of fiction that I recently read but can't seem to find!! Please link the original story and credit the original author! This is just a slightly hornier and much shorter fan fiction, I guess.**


    Emily wasn't in it for the science or the good of the snakes.

    When her mom had gotten involved in the burrowing boa project, Emily knew right away that she needed to be included for one reason only: she was desperate to feel a snake slithering inside her, stretching her little eight year old holes, making her cum. Emily knew she was a nymphomaniac, even though she hadn't heard the word yet.

    It had only been a few weeks since she got her own baby snake, Suzy, and what a few weeks!! Suzy was squirming and restless and Emily barely found time to do anything other than cum, with her new friend constantly wriggling in and out of her. Then she had gotten up one morning, exhausted, in a puddle of her grool, and staggered to her parents room just in time to see her mother's head sticking out of the mouth of her own boa.

    "Ohmygod, mom!! It's happening!" She cried out. Her mom locked eyes with her, an expressing of joy and lust on her face.

    "Yes sweetheart, it's time. Always remember how much I love you, ok?" Her eyes rolled back and she bit her lip. Emily recognized that look. Mom was cumming hard as she was being swallowed.


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    ##Training Tina (MM/f, F/f, loli, age difference, incest, humiliation, drug use, watersports, bodymod, snuff, con, non-con, and lots more)##

    [The following is a work of speculative fiction, only a fool or madman would take anything written here as fact or consider actually performing any part of it.]

    1 First Night

    Only the small standing lamp behind the couch was on and the living room was mostly plunged in shadow.

    It was Friday night, way too hot, their dad was away on a two-week business trip, the fridge and freezer were stocked, there was pizza money for the weekend and some more for emergencies and next week would be the last before the summer break. Pauline, 16 years old, would have to babysit her sister, but she would definitely use the time to fucking relax for once and maybe get to sneak out for some fun with her friends.

    Maybe they could sneak into a club. The bouncers usually looked the other way when her friend Phoebe was with them, she had pretty impressive tits and fake driver’s license.

    That only left the problem of her baby sister. She never really talked to Tina – almost seven years was just too much of an age gap to play together or have the same interests – and she often stayed out as long as she could anyway, hanging with her friends.

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    Holy shit brother (or sister?), this is like an entire fing book.

    Just got to Carla and it's pretty good.

    Might have overdone the accent a little, but I live her personality!

    Big fan of the video watching thing, you got a beautifully fucked mind.

    Looking forward to more.
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    >>27114
    This was really good. Well done!
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    >>27108

    This is really good, but you should know that squirting isn't peeing.
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    >>27118
    moar plz? i relly liked this story i hope it wont end in a cliffhanger like this
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    My daddy has been writing me snuff stories with various scenarios to help satisfy my particular desires. He always deletes them after he lets me read them a few times. I managed to convince him to let me share this one, and hopefully he'll let me share more in the future. I hope you like it!

    Tags: M/F, M/f, Snuff, Execution, virgin, deflowering, anal, semi-con, non-con

    *****************************************************

    "Uncle Tommy!" Lucinda squeals as she hugs me and gives me a quick but firm kiss. "How ya been, killa?" she asks playfully in her thick Brooklyn accent. I roll my eyes at the choice of address, especially because she has asked me to attend this meeting. Lucinda or Luci, as she's commonly known, is Antonio Brava's granddaughter. Yes, the head of the Brava crime family. It's unusual for a woman in my profession to be a handler, but she's always had a strange fascination with this type of work.

    "Hi, Luci. What brings me the pleasure of your company today?" I ask in a flat voice.

    "Mickey White," she answers directly.

    "Mickey? I thought he was a made man," I ask with a raised eyebrow.

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    >>29433
    Even if this is someone just playing out a fantasy, none of us around here have the right to judge considering what we're into.
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    >>29434
    > Agreed! Rude and unneccessary!

    I second this!
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    >>29422
    > My daddy has been writing me snuff stories...

    If you don't mind me asking, do you mean your literal father, or just someone you refer to that way?
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    >>29488
    I said "daddy" because I wondered if it was good idea to confirm that he's actually my dad, but at this point I don't think it matters.
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    I have a lot of first parts of writing I might continue. Here's one.

    Lethal injection, consensual, semi-casual, children

    Myrtle approached the pharmacy counter. “Hi, I need ten Little Angels.”

    The pharmacist seemed surprised. “Ten? Are you sure?”

    “They're going to be birthday party favors.”

    “Oh, that's a cute idea!” She stepped away, rummaged around, and after a couple of minutes returned with a modest carton covered in the usual logos and text. “Here we are, ten doses of Mortaxim Juvenile Formula in single-use injectors for self-administration. You've probably seen the ads, but just as a reminder, you take the black caps off both ends of the injector, just pull straight, and press the red end against the child's belly to right or left of the navel, at least two of your finger-widths away, or four of theirs. Older children can do this for themselves with supervision, younger ones may require a little assistance. Press down on the white plunger until you hear a click. You don't have to press specially hard. There should be no more discomfort than a hard pinch, and the child will begin feeling pleasantly woozy within two to five minutes, accompanied by engorgement of the erectile tissues of the genitals and nipples. Death should occur within five to fifteen minutes. It's not approved for children under four years of age or twenty kilos in weight, and for those over twelve years or fifty kilos, or who have started puberty, you should use Mortaxim Adult, OK?”

    “Oh, I always keep a couple of those around the house. Might as well pick up a couple extra, though, as long as I'm here.”

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    Oh this is cute fun! I can see it being popular with Trick-or-Treaters too! If someone is stingy with the candy, they get dead bodies on their doorstep to have to clean up! XD
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    such a party sounds great
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    Sounds like a promising idea, but so far we just have an exposition dump, hoping for the actual story to come next.
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    Sounds like fun. Shame that they don't do anything with the bodies though.
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    That's a really cute idea!

    I would love to read the story of what happened during the Little Angels sleepover in detail. :)

    The idea of eager consensual suicides/homicides with erotic side effects sounds really wholesome and hot.

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