This is the peak of Gurochan literature ladies and gentlemen

I dunno… I found it a bit overly wordy with a lot of unnecessary padding.Hopefully he'll work on that for the sequel!

I think he may have pre-empted you Mr. Hyde.

I'm hanging my head in shame, thinking of all the times I bitched about those "blank posts" scattered across this site. I think we can all now recognise that those works carry the hallmarks of the un-named Master.

>>19441
What about him?

Good stuff, good writing, encore. If you do another story make it longer a little more plot, maybe F/F but keep it semi consensual to consensual and well written like you do here. Thanks.

She thought for a split second, and tried to speak. Before she could get a word out, there came an almighty BOOM, and she was gone.

Colonel Miller gave his gunman the silent order to fire as soon as he saw she was going to say something. She didn’t deserve to speak after all, he decided.

As the bullet struck her dead center in the forehead, it blew out the back of her skull and painted the tree with her brain. A .30-06 had done the job, that was for sure. Perhaps he should’ve opted for a smaller caliber; she might’ve suffered for a moment.

As it was, he observed as she fell sideways and struck the ground on her side. She was dead the instant that thing blew her brains out. She rolled on to her back, and her blindfold slipped off; it now hung limply by one ear. Her eyes were mismatched, one wide and the other dull and droopy. She twitched a little, her head jerking up slightly, her leg spasming briefly, and he could swear he saw a little urine running from her hairy cunt.

Her chest moved up and down a few times, but the Colonel knew that meant nothing. It was called Agonal Breathing, he thought he remembered. It was the body freaking out as it hadn’t figured out it was dead yet.

A pool of blood grew rapidly under her head. She was a shitty soldier, but at least she died acceptably. He reviewed her naked body with disdain. So she had tried to seduce Sergeant Ayers, huh? Like he would’ve ever consented to fuck that miserable, simpering piece of shit. Still, it gave him an idea.

The colonel walked over to her body, retrieving his combat knife as he approached her. Placing a boot on her chest, he leaned over her, gripping the top of her head by the hair and pulling it backward. Her throat was stretched taut before him, and he reached down with his other hand, dragging his blade across her slender neck and flaying it open to the bone. Her arteries squirted weakly, getting blood on his hand and knife. Her cut throat spasmed slightly, and he didn’t stop there. He worked the blade between the bones of her neck, expertly slicing through the connective tissue, and then he was cutting the skin at the back, and her head came free in his hand. He stood up straight, boot still pressing an imprint into her chest, and held her head up to the gathered troops. Her expression was almost hilarious.

“Take a good look, men,” he called out to them. “This is the fate of cowards, of traitors. This is what we do to those who turn on their own and slay them in cold blood. This cowardly whore tried to save herself by seducing her guard.” He turned her to face him briefly, and spoke directly to her. “How did that work out for you?”

A few laughs rang out from the crowd. He turned her to look sightlessly out at them again. “Still, no reason we can’t honor her wishes in death. Catch!” With that, he tossed her into the gathered soldiers. One of them caught her, and looked uncomfortable.

“She’s yours, boys,” Colonel Miller said. “Have your way with her while she’s still warm and wet. She’s ready for the taking over here, too,” he continued, moving her limp corpse under his heel. “’Course, I don’t know how many of you are into dirty sluts with fuckin’ forests on their crotch, but hey, if she looks good to you, take her! That’s all she was ever good for!”

With that, the colonel took his foot off of her and walked to a nearby Lieutenant. Directing him to tie her up to the tree so the men knew where to find her, he walked away, leaving behind the obnoxious fox he was very glad to be rid of.

Not gonna lie, a good start to stories in 2020. Although I prefer my methods slow, the build up and added pictures really sold this one on me, good job!

Abby and her friend Rachel sat in the corner of the room as the party went on. It was Abby's younger sister's Birthday, the sister that Abby despised more than anything in the world.

"Look at the stupid bitch! She thinks she's everything doesn't she?" Abby said turning to Rachel.

Rachel scowled and nodded as she sipped from her cup and stared in the direction of Veronica. "She's so fucking ugly, I don't understand how all these boys could be here."

The two of them continued to simmer in the corner for a while as Veronica walked around the house talking to friends and laughing and just overall enjoying her thirteenth Birthday. Abby and Rachel were two grades above the young girl, being in their Sophomore year of High School. Each of them had grown in the past year or so, developing large breasts for their age as well as slimmer features with large hips and shapely asses. They both enjoyed spending time together in the gym on weekends, taking breaks between machines to drink, catch their breath, and talk about their mutual hate for Veronica.

Eventually, Abby couldn't take it anymore. "I just want her gone for good damnit!"

Rachel looked at her best friend sympathetically and patted her arm. "I wish I could help you."

Abby snorted then her eyes widened and she turned to Rachel.

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>>17085

This was terrific! What about Part 2??

Looking forward to it. =)

Me too!
While browsing on e-hentai, found an other intresting idea not unalike the one of Berty's watch: a product that temporary kill a persone. The one that take it is dead but only for a limited amount of time, and once this time is over ther persone will come back to live no matter what happened to his/her body while he/she was dead.
See it here : https://e-hentai.org/g/973540/16b7ae3ece/

>>9109

I've seen it before and it's a wonderful comic

>>9075

Ooft, great to hear, can't wait. I am tumescent with anticipation.

Bump !

Haha got you! I'm sure you where quivering with anticipation for an new chapter.

Jock aside, no news from new since one month Poguemahone. How do you do?
Have you any fun stuff you work on? Or just amazing new ideas you want to share?
If you just tell me that you are alive and reasonably healthy, I would already be plenty happy.

bump

Alice-What do you get when you throw an awkward nerdy teenage girl into a death game? A dead awkward nerdy teenage girl!

Lauren-Age 14, species human, ethnicity Caucasian, height 5'4, weight 145 pounds, hair color red, eye color green

Alice-Alex is your run of the mill gamer girl with pretty red hair, green hair, and freckles. She loves all things Kawi, and while she has a violent streak in games, gets sick to her stomach when any real-world violence is involved. She will most definitely die.

Lauren-Alex brings nothing to the table. Sure she knows every Naruto theme song by heart, and streams daily but she can't handle it when someone makes a remotely inappropriate comment about her. She's a dead girl

Alice. Hell, no point in even asking the question. She's going to die

Alice-Being the daughter of a South American drug lord, Emanuella Freixa had everything she could ever want. This lead to her growing board, and in her boredom, Emanuelle discovered she was, perhaps, the most sadistic and fucked up person in the world

Lauren-Age 13, species human, ethnicity Hispanic, height 5'1, weight 125 lbs, hair color, brown, eye color brown, cup size A

Alice-raised in Venezuela, Emanuella is the daughter of the leader of a powerful drug cartel. Don't let her curly brown hair, cute freckles, and pink braces fool you, this girl is the definition of fucked up! She'd torture animals in her free time, and watch her father's men execute prisoners whenever the opportunity came up

Lauren-Though she may have little training with it, she carries a Glock 19 on her person at all times and has no qualms using it. But her deadliest weapon by far is her cruelty. A master of both emotional abuse and physical violence, Emanuella is one drug princess you don't want to upset

Alice-But will her cruelty give her the edge she needs, or will this brat finally be taught a lesson

Alice-After years of research Japan had finally done it, the first genetically engineered cat girl! Yuna! But there's more to this kitten than meets the eye

Lauren-Age 10, species human-cat hybrid, ethnicity Japanese, height 4'6, weight 75 lbs, hair color brown, eye color green, cup size A

Alice-Yuna is the perfect example of why weebs and science don't mix. Cooked up in a lab by splicing human and cat DNA, Yuna lived most of her life in a testing chamber. Though she has the intelligence of a girl her age and can speak some Japanese, she has the personality of a stray cat. She's scared and pissed

Lauren-And being part cat, Yuna has the perfect tools to express these emotions. Yuna is far more agile than even an adult athlete and can see perfectly in the dark. But her most viable assets are her razor-sharp claws which can sprout from her fingertips in an instant

Alice-But will she end up at the top of the food chain, or will someone put this kitty down?

Alice-The world is full of mysteries. Stonehenge, the Pyramids, etc, etc. But one of the greatest mysteries can be found in a young lady from Louisiana named Juanita

Lauren-Age 15, species human, ethnicity mixed (half Caucasian, half African American), height 5'4, weight 134 pounds, hair color brown, eye color brown, cup size C

Alice-At Willow Park high in Louisiana, one can meet Juanita. Ask around and people will tell you that she's normal enough. Everyone knows her, but no one is close to her. She's a pretty girl especially in her school uniform and she makes good grades. Her smile is a little creepy, but she's normal enough. Of course, none of them know about Juanitas talent for voodoo

Lauren-Juanita is quite formidable with her variety of spells. She can easily manipulate one's body, and with enough time and resources, she can create a doll of her target that allows her to use this spell from afar. If things get too hairy, however, she can always call upon her imaginary friend Lanky to do some more direct damage

Alice-But is magic and a creepy smile enough to snag her the win, or is she just going to be another victim?

Alice-Guns, fucking guns. Hannah loves those things, and she knows what's up

Lauren-Age 14, species human, ethnicity Caucasian, height 5'11, weight 134 lbs, hair color light brown, eye color hazel, cup size C

Alice-raised by a military family in good old Kentucky, when Hannah wasn't eating fried chicken she was shooting guns. She shot her first deer by age six and by age 12 was the best shot in the county. Damn, a girl after my own heart

Lauren-Alice may have given it away, but Hannah will be bringing firearms into this battle. Her personal favorite is her M4, but she carries a beretta m9 in case she needs a backup

Alice-But are guns eno, oh who am I kidding she better fucking win

…. herby updated to illustrated story.

very amusing. out of one oven and into another.

Thanks!

Here is another, alternative ending. More victims. I'm not sure, wich one is really better. Anyway, in both cases the cooking itself is mostle left for the imagination of the reader. Quite useful story telling trick, when the author is really bad at describing ;) .

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"And if? I am an lonely old lady. Is it illegal for lonly old ladies to grab some child to eat it?"

"In fact, yes, it is."

"Never heard of this"

"Listen, when you do not have grandchildren that come every minute, all you argument, that Sakura has to be cooked a faast as possible, is invalidated. You just are too lazy to start cooking something different."

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Wow, nice story you have here.
Please continue your imaginatipn like this one ;)

Thanks, nice you liked it.

May i ask, which ending is better?

Perfect! This is your greatest story to date! I liked everything about it, the story , the chars and ofc the brother-sister sub-plot and the sexual tension it created was the final ingredient that made this story great.I hope we will see more like this in the future, maybe with full-incest families! I am going to nominate this one!

Realy great story

>>19262
Awesome! and the scene where the thugs break in the room just when the brother was cumming in his sister mouth is priceless!

>>19262
Oh fuck yes! I loved it. Would love a sequel story where maybe Daniel enjoyed it a bit, and defaults again. Causing them to pay the sister a visit with pistols~

>>19262
Best story i've read in a while, this deserves to win the gurochan award!

((This artwork was a commission drawn by MarcusHunter on Furaffinity))

Not a furry myself, but the quality of the writing is fantastic, manages to be descriptive, yet not so much as to overwhelm. We need more execution fics of this quality.

This is beautiful

First post of a long term story I'm working on. It's been a hot minute since I've written pornography so my descriptions may be a little lackluster, but I hope to improve swiftly. I happily accept questions, comments, and constructive criticism.

Seems promising, excited to see what happens!

Minsekk and Minni walked down the crowded city street, the hot sun baking the skin on the back of their necks.
"So are you staying with me and my family tonight," she asked, stepping closer and nuzzling into him.
"I have nowhere else to go," he said coldly, putting his arm around her. "You can't let your family know what we're doing," he added. She smiled up at him.
"I know I know. They think they know best for me. Adults are stupid" she said. "I love you Minsekk".
"Mhm," he replied with a nod. She gave him a sad glance but said nothing else about it.
"I feel weak," she said.
"You had a long day" he replied emotionlessly.
"But really weak. I just wanna lay down"
"Well you worked really hard for me," he said, still not looking at her.
"I guess I did," she said, nuzzling him into him closer. "It's worth it then. I'll feel like this my entire life if it makes you feel that good". The two children reached a small house. Minni and her mother's house like the rest of the homes in the city was packed tightly into a seemingly endless row of homes. Unlike most of the other houses, however, it was well kept, and clean. A fresh coat of yellow paint covered its walls, and though the roof coat was older, the purple was still vibrant and pleasing. While the other homes smelled of filth, sickness, and death, the pleasant smell of sweet herbs emanated from the windows. Minni pushed the door open and held it for Minsekk with a loving smile. He walked in, finding himself in the house kitchen.
"Welcome home dears," a comforting female voice said. Minsekk turned to the woman. Minnis's mom was a beautiful woman who had only seen her thirtieth summer. Like her daughter, she had ashy grey hair which had let grown to her waist. A complex, almost flowery blue design decorated her fair skin. Though the baggy clothes she wore hid it, she had a pleasant figure which could only be glanced when she wore her much smaller nightgown. She gave him a pitying smile, her blue eyes full of a mother's empathy.
"I was just boiling some Gnocks. Would you two like a cup?" She asked, her breathy accent far stronger than her daughters. On the table next to her lay a bowl filled with a cup of ground-up brown leaves. When boiled, gnock leaves made a bitter-sweet brown liquid which with its watery consistency was unpleasant, but when mixed with a sufficient amount of milk produced a popular treat.
"Yes please," Minni said happily. Minsekk nodded.

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Updates to the story will probably be slim or even non-existence during November as my attention will be focused on NaNoWriMo. Chapter Two is currently in the writing process however, and I have so much planned for not only this story, but it's sequels. Hope you're as excited as I am, and enjoy the story

Post should start up again soon

Anyone? :-/ Feel free to add other names.

I’ve seen squunch post over at Fetnoir. Not sure about the others.

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A few months later the results of that night were clearly visible on Candices and Sandras swollen bellies. One night they were sitting with Mark and his friend Tony in Sandra's and Mark's living room, sipping a glass of wine, talking about the exciting night that day. It was a winter evening and they talked about that other night they spent at the Cut Club. Remembering the wall and the grinder, Candice suddenly felt hot shivers coming up her spine and wrapped her cardigan more tightly around her belly. She felt an inner urge rising ..... She looked at the others with dreamy eyes: " I want to go back there again ...". 

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Tony had never been to the Cut Club before and didn't quite know what to expect. With some reluctance he opened the heavy door to the club and gasped at the view of the large glass wall with the grinders and the intense action at the wall above. Aaron and the two heavily pregnant girls followed him, eager in anticipation for the things to come. 

They watched a very athletic guy and two adorable female companions approaching one of the holes in the wall where a stiff cock was sticking out and eagerly waiting for some action. one of the blonde beauties was massaging the cock while the other took care of the beautifully built man. massaging his balls and penis. While the action became more and more intense, our four friends, watching the scene, started massaging each other. Tony and Mark took care of the swollen and milk-filled breasts of their girlfriends while they were  staring fascinated to the wall, anticipating what was to come. 

While the action became more and more intense and you could hear the joyful moans and cries, one of the girls suddenly pressed the button. 
Mark stared fixated at the display behind the glass which was splattered by Aarons blood and intestines. He was so aroused that he came heavily again into Sandras mouth. Both were utterly fascinated by the eagerness with which Aaron and Jessica had sought their fate, but didn't feel ready yet to submit to the wall and the utter beauty of the grinding process.

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Tony immediately started to fuck Candice from behind as well, whereas Jane started working on the tits and belly of Sandra, which she gently caressed. Besides the red button alongside the tits a second button appeared above the belly, apparently to trigger action there. After a brief exchange with Tony and Candice Jane decided to press that button first.

After a few seconds a loud ripping noise could be heard. Two knives had entered the belly from below. An assistant brought a flat bowl and a knife and handed it to Jane. Suddenly Candice had an idea, she laid down besides the bowl, directly under Sandras belly about to be cut open. 

Sandras belly popped half open and Jane began to scoop out the contents with her bare hands. Candice began vigorously smearing herself with the gory innards and blood. When Jane opened the uterus with her knife, Candice began rubbing her belly vigorously with the bloody mass, until something big and slimy popped out and fell on her belly. Candice almost orgasmed and pointed at Jane's blood-smeared knife with a pleading look in her beautiful face.

Jane began slowly to cut open Candices belly, the innards wobbled out and mixed with the bloody gore coming out of Sandys belly. In the meantime Tony took care of Sandys breasts, until the nipples were rock hard. Then he pressed also the button besides the tits. For the uterus content the assistant brought a special silver bowl where the parts were carefully collected by Jane. Tony received the breasts slowly when they popped out of the wall and a minute later the grinders started whirring again. When the trapdoors opened one could see two bodies falling into the grinder, apparently Mark was anally fucking Sandra while falling to his death with her. The amount of gore and blood spurting against the botton of the plexiglass floor was astounding. Jane and Tony carefully disemboweled Candice completely, since she was not able to get up any more, they asked the assistant for an alternative method to have her submit to the grinder. With a smile the assistant pointed to an extra trapdoor in front of the wall which allowed direct descent to the grinder if desired. She also brought a battery driven hand blender for the content of the silver bowl which was put into immediate action by Jane. Tony laid down besides Candice and asked Jane to manually cut off his balls and cock.  Jane carefully castrated Tony with her knife and put the cock and balls into the bowl where it was pureed as well with the

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Glad to hear you liked it. I am the author. Is this yahoo still active btw?

>>12815
I love this story, nice to see it reposted here again

NAME: ANDREA [REDACTED]
DATE: XX/XX/2019
SUBJECT: SECTION ONE TEST
RECIEVER: OPERATIONS HEADQUATERS

PRIMARY AGENT: JASON ORTEGA; 35 YEARS; 189.2CM; 87.4KG; BLACK HAIR; BROWN EYES; TYPE IV PIGMENTATION

SECONDARY AGENT: ALYSSA MARTINEZ; 14 YEARS; 146.7CM; 35.9KG; BROWN HAIR; GREEN EYES; TYPE II PIGMENTATION

OBJECTIVE:
TO ASSESS THE EFFECTIVENESS OF METHOD ONE.

BRIEFING:

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Alternatively: Operation is a partial success. Primary Agent has established contact and is developing rapport with traffickers. Recommendation is to deploy a new Secondary Agent to aid in infiltration.

Really good start. Hope to see more from you and from this series.

Great start! i'd love to read more but I'd prefer it not in all caps.

bump. moar please. :)

I also made an extended version of the last part.

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Seeing that Asuka was no longer among the living, Rei pulled the knife from her throat. She stood up and walked to the sink, rinsing the blood off of the knife, before making her way to the living room, knife still in hand. She went to her school bag, rummaging around. She found it. Molecular Cell Biology. The book she was reading through in her spare time.

"Your turn".

Asuka's words rang through her head. She looked down at her stomach. She already knew what she would find should she cut herself open, so that was of no particular interest to her, but she saw no harm in complying with Asuka’s final request either. Rei didn’t plan to finish herself with a quick slash to her throat like Asuka did though, as she figured just cutting her abdomen open would work just fine for killing herself. Of course, it would be slower and hurt more, but if she was aiming for quick and painless, she could have just chosen another method in the first place. So Rei figured, as long as she was committing seppuku, might as well go all the way with the slow and painful part. Not that physical pain ever bothered her anyway. And what for the long time it would take to die – that’s what the book was for, to kill the time while she was killing herself (naturally, Rei didn’t even smile, totally missing the pun in her own thoughts).

Rei laid her bag down lengthwise, placing her book on top of it. Recalling she had stopped reading it last night just before the chapter on Nerve Cells, Rei opened the book on the appropriate page and continued from where she left off. Rei has read a couple of paragraphs to gain momentum and then, without averting her eyes from the book, brought the knife she was still holding close to her left hip. Rei tried pushing it in while keeping reading, but found it hard to measure required pressure just right without really paying attention to it. After all, if she pushed the blade too deep, she risked damaging her viscera, thus shortening the time it would take her to die. Not that she minded it in and of itself, but it would make the entire endeavor with the book rather pointless. Rei wanted to have at least enough time to finish this chapter and not just rush it through, as she wasn’t interested in reading something without actually digesting it. And so, too make sure she’ll enjoy her reading, Rei had to stop reading for now and concentrate on cutting herself.

Making sure to properly read to the end of a paragraph and also to note where on the page it was, so she would be able to return to it quickly afterwards, Rei has finally averted her gaze from the book and focused on the knife in her hands. She took her time, making sure she made the cut just right. The knife didn't have too much to cut through, given her small, lithe build. She clearly felt the lack of resistance one she had pierced through the muscle, stopping herself from applying more pressure almost instantly. Good, now that she has found the appropriate depth, she just needed to keep it steady as she pulls the knife towards her right hip, and Rei was sure this much she could handle alongside the reading.

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