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    After for some extensive search, I found the first part of the story. Anyone else knows the whereabout of the second part?

    https://www.reddit.com/r/SOS_Brigade/comments/8yyswj/the_debreasting_of_haruhi_suzumiya/
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    >>26641

    Just write it.
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    >>26728
    Some grace might make people more amenable to your suggestions.
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    >>26729
    I'm sorry. I didn't mean being unthankfully rude to the author of such solid story.
    I just meant that it could be effective to start and enter the flow.
    My apologies.
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    >>26728
    Where and whn can we read it?
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    I liked how the whole insanity was justified. It will never happen IRL but it fits the original almost perfect.

    Tags: (tween, teen, dolcett, sidneyverse, cannibalism, throat slitting, various cooking methods)

    Daisy tried to shift her weight to alleviate some of the discomfort of her position. It helped a little, but there was no going around it; the meat hooks currently piercing her ankles hurt, especially now that her whole weight rested on them. However, it was not as bad as she'd feared, and she quickly consoled herself. The pain would only be temporary.

    Daisy's twelve year old heart was beating quickly in her chest, so she took a deep breath to calm herself. Her nostrils filled with the sweet, metallic smell of blood, but also with the aroma of arousal and lust. It reminded her of the way her fingers would smell after an evening spent rubbing her pussy, often while looking at the pictures in the Sidney's catalogue.

    The hooks in Daisy's legs were connected to a wire, which in turn was driven by a mechanism in the ceiling. With a whir and some metallic clanking noises it periodically activated, sending the girls connected to them forward. The distance varied each time, sometimes she would only reach the spot of the girl in front of her, sometimes she seemed to cover the distance of four or five girls in one go.

    Daisy had never felt so exposed before, hanging there completely naked and defenseless. Her arms had been tied tightly behind her back, and when she had tried to break free, of course strictly out of curiosity, and not out of a desire to actually do so, she had found that the knots didn't give at all. Her sense of vulnerability was amplified by the metal bar mounted between her ankles, forcing her to spread her legs wide and provide everyone with an unobstructed view of her most private parts. Normally her baby pink, meaty pussy lips would at least be somewhat concealed by a small patch of red, curly pubic hair, but her cute little bush had been removed the previous night together with the rest of her body hair, courtesy of a mandatory and highly efficient hair removal cream. Like all the girls that had long enough hair, her wild mop of ginger curls was tied up in what was supposed to be a neat ponytail, but her unruly, frizzy hair had resisted. It had turned out more like a messy bun, as if she'd just gotten out of bed. The resulting look was a mix between girl-next-door and dungeon sex slave, and it made her stand out from the crowd.

    On Daisy's left side, one step ahead of her in the line, was her best friend Claire. Claire had dirty blonde, straight hair, an impressive bust for her age and a beautiful slit between her legs, barely more than a line formed by her very puffy outer lips, only interrupted by her clitoral hood just poking out between them. Claire moaned sweetly as the hooks pulled her forward, and Daisy couldn't tell if it was from pleasure or pain. Perhaps both, she thought.

    On her right side was a petite Asian girl the two friends had met just a few minutes earlier in the cleaning area. They had found conversation somewhat difficult while being hosed down with water by the workers, being commanded into very revealing and indecent postures to make sure every nook and cranny of their nubile bodies was hit by the spray of warm, soapy water. Daisy had despite that managed to pick up that the girl was also twelve, was called Jin and went to a neighboring school that she and Claire sometimes competed against in sports tournaments.

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    Where can we find more Loke stories??
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    >>27147
    Thank you!

    >>27148
    All my stories are uploaded on Pixiv. I'm working on getting them over on AO3 as well, though so far only this story has made its way over.
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    Just another amazing story. Thank you so much.
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    So good.
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    >>27145
    a great story

    The sun had finally set beyond the horizon, which meant Camilla had now been dying for five and a half hours. It'd taken her a little while to work that out but now her latest attempt to distract herself from the horror of her situation had ended and the pain was still there. More than ever, in fact. She'd thought it'd get easier to bear over time, that her senses would dull to it from exhaustion or just familiarity. The opposite had happened. The stabbing pain of the nails pinning her to the instrument of her death had been joined by a less sharp but more insistent ache as every muscle in her body burned from exertion. Her throat was sore, long screamed hoarse. Her wounds were throbbing, as was her head. It felt as though another set of nails was being pounded into her temples.

    Camilla would have welcomed that. Early on in her torment she'd tried to knock herself unconscious by slamming the back of her head into the cross but she'd remained stubbornly aware of her body and what had been done to it.

    It was a strange thing, she thought, to wish for death. In truth, she was still terrified of her young life's impending cessation, but by now if it meant an end to her agony she could accept that.

    She wanted to die...and she couldn't. Her body would not let her. She'd tried hanging still, just letting the darkness take her, but the pain had only grown until she'd once again raised herself up on trembling, nailed legs to draw another breath. Her exertion had been accompanied by laughter, taunts and jeers. She'd still had an audience, then. Cheering, shouting insults, a cacophony of voices, a clatter of dice...



    "These new taxes will be the death of us!", Andreas complained loudly, waving his wine-cup in the air and spilling half of its contents. The old oil-trader had been drinking for quite some time already, and Camilla thought it was probably time to cut him off. She looked around for her uncle, but he was nowhere in sight.
    "I agree, but what can you do?"
    That was Decimus pulcher, who kept a vegetable stall on the other side of the marketplace. A lot less pretty than his cognomen would suggest, he was a veteran of the legions who'd decided he'd rather settle down here in Syria than return to his native Ancona. His service had left him with a few missing teeth, a broken nose that now sat a bit crooked and a vivid red scar across his cheek. "This new Caesar has grand plans, apparently. Expensive plans. And our dear governor..." he continued, his voice dripping with sarcasm (and wine), "well, he won't have it said that Syria did not contribute its share, oh no!"

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    "...fuck her already, Antius! It's almost noon!"
    The approaching voices made her shiver in the dank cell. She'd heard the stories of what happened to girls who got dragged into the carcer underneath the garrison. "Please pass me by, please not me, someone else, take someone else..." she thought to herself, then felt a pang of shame at wishing harm on other prisoners. Not that there were many. Roman justice had been swift after the riot. What was left of the mob after the legion had been unleashed on them had been marched outside the city to die while the last of the fires were still burning.
    She hadn't given them any thought. She hadn't been thinking of anything, really. Still dazed from the night's events, staggering around the ruins of the market, asking anyone she could see for help pulling her uncle out of the rubble, her dear uncle Demetrius who'd taken her in...

    The sun had been setting when the soldiers came for her. "That's the one," their leader had simply said and she'd been grabbed. Her protests of innocence, her questions about her fate, all were ignored. They'd marched her into the garrison, through a yard where a man was howling in agony under a scourge's lashes, and down into this damp, filthy cellar. At first, she'd shouted, yelled herself hoarse, trying to get someone to tell her what she was accused of. It'd been futile. The guards patrolling outside her cell had simply ignored her.

    She'd drifted off into a fitful sleep, haunted by the memories of a night of violence. An argument over the new taxes had turned into a brawl as more men joined in, stones had been thrown. A man had been stabbed, and a furious mob had howled for the blood of the killer. And then they'd stopped caring and all that mattered was the blood. So much blood. Decimus' skull cracked open by a thrown flagstone as he stood in the doorway. Andreas drowning in his own blood after a frenzied madman rammed a pitchfork through his chest. And Uncle Demetrius, taking blow after blow from the rioters, holding the doorway to the storeroom she'd hid in shut with his body until the flames brought down the roof...

    In the morning a jug of water had been wordlessly pushed into her cell, then she had once again be left alone with her fear and grief. And now they were here to...

    She shuddered again. Maybe they would pass her by. Maybe they did mean another woman, maybe...

    The key clattered in the lock. The door opened. Dimly lit from the tiny slit window above, they seemed more like the monstrous giants of legend than men to her. Two of them entered her cell, a third took position outside. "Be quick", the shorter of the two whispered to his comrade, "and remember, you're volunteering for guard duty."

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    She returned to the present with another agonizing fit of coughing. As before, the realization that she was still nailed to a cross and dying struck her together with the pain, except...

    ...the feeling of pressure on her little button was still there.

    Camilla opened bleary eyes and cast them downwards, only to meet the gaze of the strange traveller. Piercing eyes gazed up at her as the stranger's lips gently caressed that spot, sucked it in, stroked it with a skilful tongue...

    She gasped at the unexpected sensation and the new violation. Had she not yet suffered enough indignity? At least the strange woman...stronger than she looked, was supporting her somewhat, making breathing easier. And the feeling was not as bad as it had been in the dungeon, it was more like when she'd rubbed herself at night...

    The strangers lips and tongue were cool and soothing but she felt warmth rise between her legs. Blushing, she realized. It felt like blushing. But why would I blush down there, she thought, where nobody would see...

    Amidst such strange and confused thoughts the caresses went on. She'd still felt the pain of her rape when they'd raised her cross, but it was now fading away, replaced with...something. A tension, a pressure, a rising heat. It felt...different from when she'd touched herself. Was that her pain, her dreamlike half-dead state, that made it feel so good, she idly wondered, as her whole being became centered on that place between her legs. The agony of her wrists, her feet, her every muscle still remained but somehow had become less important than what the woman looking up at her was doing with her mouth, and...her fingers now, gently opening her lower lips, exploring between her folds, soothing pain and bearing pleasure. One finger slipped inside her opening and there was no pain, just a strange yet not unwelcome sense of pressure. A second finger joined the first, and a brief stab of pain from the remnants of the morning's torments made her tense up momentarily. Immediately the second digit was withdrawn, to caress outside her wounded opening again.

    The pressure was mounting, the heat building up. Something was running down the inside of her thigh, except unlike the slime that had dripped from her as she'd staggered towards the site of her execution it felt...right, somehow? She felt her breathing grow faster, lungs aching as they struggled to keep up but it didn't matter. None of it mattered, only that divine touch, that mouth, that finger which had found a hidden place deep within that raised the tension to yet another high. Something rose within Camilla and she tried to keep it down, confused and afraid but it was inexorable, a river, a flood, an ocean and...

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    When she came to this time, she felt curiously light. Her weight was no longer tugging at her nailed arms. Had she been freed? She tried to move and quickly realized that no, she was still nailed. But why, then...

    ...the woman was holding her. Her cool, silky embrace lifted her, held her up so she could breathe freely again for the first time in what seemed like an eternity. Strange, she hadn't seemed that tall...but thought was getting difficult. The ocean was roaring in her head, the darkness crept in again from the edges of her vision.

    "Do you still wish to live?", the visitor asked softly, her face like a poet's dream, now inches from hers. There were spices in her scent, her cool clean breath so different from a man's...

    "Ye...yes." Damn it all, she did. She wanted to feel that woman's kiss again, wanted to linger in her embrace, melt away in her arms. Nothing else mattered, not the pain nor the grief. Only her, only life.

    "Whatever the cost?", the woman asked, all playfulness suddenly gone from her voice.

    "Any...anything."

    Camilla meant it. Truly meant it. Whatever it took, she would give it gladly to live another agonized heartbeat in that embrace.

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    So yeah, I'm writing stuff again. Just a little self-contained story, hope the "twist" wasn't too cringe. Comments and praise very welcome, critique deeply unwelcome but also grudgingly accepted :P.
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    >>26995
    Very well written! My only critique is that the nonlinear plot could be a little confusing at times (damn you Nolan) and the hanging on the cross part could've been extended. Nonetheless, it is a solid 8.5/10.

    School Festival



    Chapter One, Intro and Swim Club (Cons/Semi Cons, Watersports, Drowning)



    Each year the local high school runs a festival and each year many beautiful and sexy young women meet their end promoting their various clubs and classes. Of course not only do students participate in these events, many attendees either volunteer or are volunteered to join in the festivities.

    This year I approached the gate to see a trio of sexy young girls in revealing attire handing out pamphlets to those walking in. One girl, wearing a short tartan skirt, thigh high stockings, a bikini top and a tie (in what appears to be a parody of the schoolgirl uniforms of old), noticed me walking up and handed me a pamphlet.

    "Have you been to one of our festivals in the past?" she asks me.

    "Yes, I've been to the last three I think, one of the things I look forward to most each year"

    "Well welcome back, I'm sure you remember but that pamphlet has a schedule of all the timed events, and a map with all the other events and booths on the back." "If you have something specific you want to do, make sure you plan around it, some of these lines can get a little long to hop in right when the schedule lists"

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    Chapter 5, Part 3 (Cons, Bestiality, Hard Vore)

    There was a woman in her mid thirties addressing the crowd, she wore tan short shorts and a tan button-up crop top with several pockets. She spoke at length and with great enthusiasm, talking about the local zoo and the opportunities there for volunteers and employees. I didn't pay a great deal of attention to the talk, just waiting patiently for the show.

    Eventually the woman thanked the crowd for their patience and moved to the side of the cage, where the girl in the cat makeup I had seen earlier waited. The woman unlatched and opened the outer door to the cage, and after the teen stepped through she shut and latched the door behind her. The teen then opened the inner door and stepped into the cage with the jaguar. The jaguar's eyes open at the noise, and he lifted his head from his paws to watch the girl. The girl shut the inner door and slowly made her way to the center of the cage, the jaguar's eyes fixated on her the whole time.

    The jaguar languidly rose, stretching his long body and showing off his teeth with a gaping yawn. He began to prowl around the outside of the cage, maintaining his distance from the girl as he watched her closely. The girl smiled at him, mouth closed, then hunkered down slightly and held out the back of her hand toward the jaguar.

    The jaguar cautiously approached, sniffing at her hand before giving it a couple licks. The jaguar started to wind around the girls legs, rubbing his face and body up against her. The girl cautiously stretched out a hand to touch the jaguar's side, when he raised no complaints she began to pet him. The jaguar began to let out a deep rumbling purr.

    This went on for a couple minutes, during which the jaguar became visibly aroused, his spined pink penis standing in stark contrast to his patterned skin. He suddenly began to impatiently paw at the girls thigh, to which she responded to with a giggling yelp as his claw drew a small amount of blood. She took a position on all fours on the bottom of the cage.

    The jaguar wasted no time, circling around behind the girl, bounding onto her back, and thrusting forward. The girl yelped again as his claws found purchase on her back and his spined penis abruptly sunk into her. The jaguar began to thrust, not slowly but also not with the animalistic frenzy I had witnessed several times here today. The girl moaned as the jaguar fucked her, moans of pure pleasure as he stroked in, and more pained moans that caught in her throat as he pulled out, spines dragging on sensitive flesh that had not evolved to accommodate them.

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    >>20603
    Yay! Hard vore and impending death by horse cock!
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    Chapter 5, Part 4 (Final Part)(Cons, Bestiality, Hard Vore)

    Hannah had also been watching the girls deliberate and was waiting with a smile as the girls approached.

    "So, have one of you girls decided that you want Buckley to give you the ride of your life?" she asked.

    "Yeah!, Me!" the redhead said, waving one arm in the air.

    "Great!, Though I want to make sure one last time that you don't have any illusions about surviving." she responded.

    "Nope!, One horny snuff slut and one tag along reporting for disposal!" she replied, standing with her heels together and saluting.

    Hannah laughed lightly. "Alright, just making sure. I'm going to need your friends help in a few minutes when we get to the main event if they don't mind, but for now why don't the three of you go make sure the executioner's weapon is cocked and loaded."

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    Great chapter! I especially enjoyed the parts with the horse.
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    This was really good, shame that there's no more to it.

    The Last Field Trip



    Chapter One, Intro and First Exhibit (Non-Con, Watersports, Young)



    I was laying in my bed on a Saturday morning when I was roused from my sleep by the sound of my phone ringing. Grunting, I held up one arm to shield my unadjusted eyes from the sun's ray's bleeding through my blinds while my other arm reached for my phone, to determine the identity of whoever it is that has deigned to interrupt my rest. It was Nick, My own Brother, Nick, who had committed this grievous sin of waking at this ungodly hour of 11:42.

    “What do you want Nick?” I grumbled upon answering the phone.

    “Oops, did I wake you? Must have figured the time zone wrong, thought it was almost noon for you.” He replied, sounding to me more that a little sarcastic.

    “Shut up,” I said. “Now you gonna get to the point or should I just hang up?”

    “Alright alright” He said. “You know how I was asking you for advice on engagement rings a couple weeks back?”

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    >>21226
    It's still on the list of things to write, I don't know how near the top it is, but I haven't forgotten or abandoned this story.
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    Really great. Story.

    I hope it will give more parts.
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    >>27102

    If you're looking for similar... Lady_of_Blu wrote a squeal called One Last Family Trip over at AO3.

    https://archiveofourown.org/works/24522034/chapters/59203171

    'One Last Family Trip' is good but the other stories Lady_of_Blu wrote get weird fast.
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    >>10162
    This is not a new story This is a very old story. There's even an incredibly long sequel of very mixed quality. Also most of the characters in the sequel are kind of disgustingly young.
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    >>15773
    There's no reason to request anything The story is like 15 years old

    From now on, instead of flooding the board by posting each story in a new thread, all of my stories will be posted here. (Fanbox promotions will still be in a separate thread.)

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    The Dancing Lady

    yuri, lesbian, cons(FF), rape(FF), gore, vore, cannibalism, paranormal, ghost
    Who was she? Who was that woman across the street?

    Noy adjusted her glasses and wiped her breath from the window. The woman twirled and pranced around the room. A sheet of platinum flowed behind her and settled around her hips when she stopped.

    It started six days ago. Something flashed in the corner of Noy’s eye as she hung paper ghosts over her computer. She turned her head as a blonde woman leapt across the window. Noy finished hanging the ghosts and climbed on the bed, wrapping her arms around her pillows as she stared wide-eyed out the window. The woman danced for hours without stopping. She was there the next day, dancing away. She was there the day after that and every day after that. She wore the same old-timey dress, so white it seemed to glow.


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    Nosy Couple


    gore, ff-Rom, piss

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    Rachael’s heart seemed to explode in her chest. Down the long stretch of dirt road her green Sudan now barreled, a black 2005 Tacoma sat under Bum’s Manor.

    Who the fuck did they think they were? Bum’s Manor, the looming pile of wood and brick sitting in overgrown fields in rural Oregon, belonged to the Woerner-Pham Sisters. Built by Rachael’s great-great-great-grandfather, it became their sanctuary. She hated the place, hated how everything broke at the slightest touch, and dreamed of the day she and Nhi moved into a new house, but goddamn anyone who dared invade their home.

    Nhi grumbled in the passenger seat, long black hair fluttering as she leaned against the door. She shifted forward, sliding one hand under the seat as her tits hung in her tank-top. “This time, we’re smoking these fuckers. Don’t try to stop me this time. Understand?”


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    Sister Cull

    casual, cannibalism, incest, mf, fg, teen, loli

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    Jake groaned as his show was interrupted with a giant “INCOMING CALL” box flashing across the screen. His finger hovered over the ignore button when he noticed it was from “Justin Bray.”

    “Come on! Enjoy your vacation and quit calling me.” He hit accept. “Hey, Dad!”

    “Hey, son! How is it being the man of the house?”

    “Really amazing! I kinda wish I could do this forever.”

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    Kaitlyn's Final Gift

    Vore, Gore, Incest(FF), Scat

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    Kaitlyn rose out of her sleep after the fourth round of taps hit her door and threw the blankets off, laying there as cold air chilled the sweat on her naked body. Why didn’t she pull the covers back on and tell everyone she was sick? If she had, her day wouldn’t have ended with her ass getting eaten.

    Tap, tap, tap!

    “I’m up! Who is it?”

    “Happy birthday, sweetie,” Mom shouted, “breakfast is almost done. I’ll have Rai come and get you when it’s done.”

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    Just Trollin'


    gore, decap, teen, Mf, necro, piss

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    SrgLongDck wanted to battle her? Did he challenge HER for once? Stephanie closed her eyes, it had to be her imagination. Nope! The notification remained in her inbox.

    “SrgLongDck would like to battle,” flashed in red over the mail icon.

    Stephanie snickered. “Well, guys,” she stared into the camera, flashing her eyes as she breached her golden bangs, “looks like my boy toy grew some balls today.”


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    >>23296 great story

    The golden rays of the sun glinting off the chain-link fences as the crowd’s cheers echoed in the warm air. It was the final match of the junior girls’ tennis tournament, and the tension was palpable.

    Two girls stood at opposite ends of the court, sweat glistening on their foreheads, rackets clenched tightly in their hands. The score was tied, and every point mattered now. On one side was Lily, calm and collected despite the pressure. On the other side was Ava, her energy fierce and determined, her every move a reflection of her burning desire to win.

    The final rally was brutal. Ava lunged for every shot, her shoes skidding across the court, her muscles burning. Lily matched her step for step, her strokes measured and precise. The crowd held its breath as the ball sailed back and forth, faster and faster, until finally—
    Ava missed.

    The ball clipped the net and dropped to the ground. The match was over. Lily had won.
    For a moment, there was nothing but silence. Ava stared at the ball, her chest heaving, the loss crashing over her like a wave. Then she dropped to her knees, her racket clattering to the ground. Tears welled in her eyes, hot and uncontrollable. She’d been so close. So close.

    The crowd erupted into cheers for Lily, but she barely heard them. Her eyes stayed fixed on Ava, who knelt alone on the court, shoulders shaking as she sobbed. The victory, so hard-fought, didn’t feel quite right. Lily hesitated, then set her racket aside and crossed the court.

    Ava didn’t look up until Lily was right in front of her.

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    Oh, I love the gentle moment with Lily and that Lily was the one to do it! Podium indeed <3
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    >>27001

    I love it.

    "Hi everyone," Lillian said with a smile.

    The stunning, fourteen year old brunette stood naked in front of the camera, displaying her magnificent young body to her followers for the last time.
    She had firm, round breasts with big, stiff pink nipples. Her waist was exquisitely narrow, her belly flat as a board. Her lean, supple legs seemed to go on forever. Her straight, glossy hair fell all the way down to her heart-shaped ass; her bald pussy smiled invitingly at the audience.

    "As you all know, I've been in pain for years," she continued. "I love it."

    The audience gazed admiringly at the proof of Lillian's pain. She wore studs through both nipples; there was a ring in her navel, and a stud in her clit. Her breasts and belly were crisscrossed with pink sores.

    "I've been hurting myself for almost three years now," Lillian said. "I've tried it all: cuts, electric shocks, branding. All of it's been wonderful, in its own way. But lately I've come to feel that I've reached the limits of what pain can teach me. In the past years, I've developed quite a talent for hurting myself without causing any permanent damage to my body. If I chose to continue in this vein, I could look forward to a long life of blissful agony, and that's a fine thing.
    But it's not enough. Lately I've been feeling empty, like something's missing from my life. I've thought long and hard about this, and I've come to an important decision.
    My pain is always incomplete because I'm always still alive at the end. I've tortured myself a thousand times, but I've never tortured myself to death. That's what's missing, and that's why you're here now. I know you all enjoy the sight of a beautiful young girl in agony--and who doesn't?
    So I've decided to give you a special treat, a special show. I'm going to snuff myself, slowly and with as much pain as possible, right before your eyes."

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    I really love stories where girls are excited for a painful death all the way through the end. Thanks for making this
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    What a fun girl! I only wish there was more, the way she relished torture I hoped there would be more of it before she dies.
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    Ooooh,love this. And would love more :4
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    >>27060
    love it

    The soft glow of sunlight filtered through the stained glass windows, casting colorful patterns across the ornate church interior. Nathalie, the maid of honor, noticed Molly, the flower girl, fidgeting nervously beside her.

    Leaning down, Nathalie whispered, "Are you excited about Stella's big day?"

    Molly nodded, her wide eyes fixed on the bride but then sighed softly.

    "She's so beautiful. It's a shame I won't be a bride." she murmured.

    Nathalie smiled warmly, placing a reassuring hand on the girl's shoulder.

    "You might not be, but Stella is so proud of you for being here for her."

    Molly's lips curved into a small smile, her confidence bolstered by Nathalie’s words.

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    Women always take weddings seriously.
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    Love this.
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    >>27052

    nice story

    The jungle had kept its secret well. For centuries, it had embraced the ancient stones, vines curling possessively around the remains of a civilization that had once thrived. Now, after weeks of backbreaking work under the sweltering sun, Professor Saskia Wallace and her team of archaeologists stood in awe of their discovery: an ancient Aztec settlement.

    The clearing was alive with activity as the team worked to remove the last stubborn clumps of vegetation. Saskia, a tall and commanding figure with sharp features and eyes that burned with curiosity, stood beside her assistant, Marcus, as they gazed at the settlement's crown jewel—a massive temple pyramid rising from the earth like a stone giant.

    "Incredible," Marcus breathed, wiping sweat from his brow. "It’s been here all along, waiting for us. Look at the carvings—they’re still so detailed."

    Saskia's face broke into a triumphant smile. "It’s not just incredible, Marcus. It’s history brought back to life. Think of what we can learn here. The stories these walls could tell."

    The temple’s facade was adorned with intricate symbols and reliefs—warriors, serpents, and figures that could only represent Aztec deities. The late afternoon sun cast long shadows across its stone steps, as if inviting them closer.

    Marcus turned to his mentor, a gleam of mischief in his eye.

    “You know, Professor, this feels like something worth celebrating. We just uncovered a piece of the ancient world… Maybe we should mark the occasion.”

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    I wonder if real Aztec priests jerked off after helping a pretty girl into the afterlife.

    "Tablesaw ride! Tablesaw ride!" a casually and somewhat slobbily dressed young woman was calling out next to - what do you think - a tablesaw, at the fair.

    "Tablesaw ride?" a young woman dressed for the fair came up to the table.

    "Tablesaw ride!" the proprietor agreed, fixing a lock of hair. It didn't stay behind her ear - she looked like she just rolled out of bed without bothering to fix the hairstyle she'd made several days ago. "Would you like to try it? Just $20 a ride!"

    "$20..." the customer frowned thoughtfully. She was blonde, fairly short and slim, with only the flowers on her blouse and earrings indicating her gender. She twirled her tote bag around her hand.

    "...Nah," she decided. "I'll spend the rest of my money first, I think."

    "A wise choice!" the proprietor called out after her as she sashayed away, her eyes already on the carousel. "Do come back!"

    "I'd like a ride, please," a shy middle school looking girl was stretching her hand with a rumpled twenty towards the woman.

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    I just say that I reread this story about 4 times and like it very much.
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    Don't thank the mods, "Thank the PIG!" Btw these stories suck balls!
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    i want to ride
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    Amazing, 10/10
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    The Death Carousel was certainly interesting but it is a shame that there were no other festival rides.

    Candidacy in Question (snuff, loli, shota, military, war, politics, kidnapping, assassination, conspiracy)

    1. I am a fairly new erotica writer and as such am hungry for constructive criticism and feedback on my work. This story has been posted on multiple platforms. Please let me know in the comments or via whatever messaging platform is available what you thought of the story, even if you did not like it at all. The only exception to this call for feedback is that if you wish to criticize this kind of (violent, sexual, underage) content, please rather keep it to yourself. If you do not mind this kind of content or enjoy it, but nonetheless feel this story is subpar, do engage.

    2. This story is only an exercise in catharsis – its content and characters are entirely fictional and do not represent any real-world preferences or desires. If you are easily offended by themes or literary portrayals of parental betrayal, extreme sexual violence, and underage characters engaged in sexual and violent scenes, please do not read any further than this.

    3. If you enjoyed this story, let me know. That's the only way I know to write more!

    4. This is a standalone prequel to "Fooling Around Under the Table" (https://boards.guro.cx/lit/res/25615.html), meaning that either story can be read in isolation. Both stories exist in the same universe as "The Borderland" (https://boards.guro.cx/lit/res/26628.html).

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    Chapter 1 - Our Established Order

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    Chapter 2 - The Fourth Estate

    "You're a married man," Dan chuckled, shaking his head, as he watched Deke getting ready. "And you're fawning over Little Miss Journalist like a lovestruck teen. I can't believe you."

    "Fuck you," Deke replied. He sighed and looked at Dan. "It's work. We need a way into that rally. We need her."

    Dan shook his head and rolled his eyes, then looked down at his phone, which began buzzing in his hand.

    He laughed out loud for a second, before composing himself and holding the phone to his ear.

    "Hey Sis!" Dan exclaimed, giving Deke a dirty look.

    Deke shrugged and continued buttoning up his shirt.

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    Chapter 3 - An Inauthentic Politician

    "She's going to be fine," Deke said to the panicking mother next to him as she drove them to Charlestown Arena in her car. He looked at his watch as he tapped his foot impatiently, knowing the speech had already begun. "This is a military operation. We don't hurt children unless it's strictly necessary to safeguard our national security. Are you going to be a threat to national security?"

    Lilliana, her face full of worry and fear, turned to the man sitting beside her.

    "N-No... please," she pleaded. "I just want my daughter."

    "That's right, and I just want into this fucking rally, so it's simple: you get me in, I do what I need to do, I take you to your daughter, and everyone goes home safe and happy," the soldier said.

    Lilliana bit her lip and looked at the road as she continued driving.

    He felt bad for the woman, and genuinely wished things could have gone differently.

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    So I have always been confused. What was DJT's thing? This seems like a world where mysogeny is the norm. Is it a free use world and DJT is trying to stop it?

    Is it a very mysoginistic world that is slowly moving Twoard free use and a female president would slow things down?

    or is DJT trying to move the world TWOARD free use and the suits don't want that kind of change to the status quo. I couldn't really get into the story because I couldn't figure out who the sides were or what the stakes are.

    Arianna walked slowly towards the looming noose. She knew that she had deserved her sentence but still she feared the punishment. She was only twelve years old and she didn't want to die, not painfully anyway and certainly not today.

    Yet, that was exactly what was going to happen in just a few minutes: the noose would slowly stretch her neck and she was going to suffocate, her suffering drawn on for as long as possible.

    She raised her bounded hands, took hold of the noose and, reaching out on her feet's ball, she put her head in it. Having to pull herself up was part of the humiliation in the punishment, she knew. As well as the leering crowd her dad invited to watch her last moments of life. she kept her eyes closed, hoping to ignore these people for as long as possible. Not that she could really do anything, with their voices shouting insults and comments at her since the moment she arrived on the platform.

    Then she herd his voice, loud in the room, silencing all the others at once. "Arianna, you've been found masturbating for the third time while under strict orders of not touching your own body in any way."

    The reproach in his tone was razor cold on her lingering hope of escaping her destiny.

    "Your sentence will be to hang on a noose until death."

    The crowd approved loudly.

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    Would love to read the rest
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    I love the attached drawing. She looks so innocent.
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    >>27051
    I would love more as well

    I couldn't get this story out of my head, even though it doesn't have anything to do with my usual subject, pregnancy. I even tried adding pregnant elements to the story, but it didn't work. It's just a sweet, final moment in the life of a mom and her little girl.


    Lemons, a quick story of dinner time. (Ff, implied snuff/cann, no sex)


    I told my daughter, "It's almost dark, baby. Time to go home and fix dinner."

    "I don't wanna go home!" she protested, as only a five-year-old can. "I want to stay here forever and ever!"

    "Do you really want to stay at the playground forever? For the rest of your life?"

    She nodded emphatically. "Uh huh!"

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    Bumpity bump
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    I find it a bit of a shame that the cannibalism is only implied.

    I've had a lot of ideas for stories lately, but I struggle to write longer stories. So I figured the best thing to do was to create a setting where I can place several shorter stories - and here it is. One of the stories has been posted before, so mods, feel free to delete that one. Hope you enjoy!
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    >>23946

    Lolicit.org
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    >>23949

    Well that sounds like a real downer then. Ill probably stick to using AO3 then. Thanks for elaborating anyway.
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    >>23949


    I agree with all of your positives and negatives. However, I will add that it has some of the best vanilla loli & shota story writers I have found on the net.
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    gonna bump this very cute thread
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    Bumpity bump

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