>>11282

i know a few people who've gotten a penectomy fetish done for real. they survived.

like yea if you like the stories with them dying fair enough but i dunno lets not pretend realism is your concern here

I mean, if you actually bandage it etc, then of course you can survive no problemo, but that requires injecting medical care into carnage and that's just not fun ^^

except they didn't bandage it... and survived anyway.

that wire that is mentioned in the dedicker? that's pretty much what they did. so i see no reason why they wouldn't survive. you can look up "trent eunuchmaker" on google. no bandage or immediate medical care involved.

Nice story! I'd avoid details such as 13" cock, and simply put massive or huge. Let the reader interpret that in their mind.

Reminds me a lot of the story The French Cook by Charlie B. on eunuch.org link:
https://web.archive.org/web/20080611120400/http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/F/newea_55722The_Fren.htm

3 - Walk-Ins

"Hey, look at that." my girlfriend said, pointing.

We were strolling casually through the mall on a lazy Sunday, just browsing and enjoying ourselves, passing by a small storefront that had been vacant the last time we'd been through. It was occupied now though, as my girlfriend was pointing out, and the new tenant didn't seem to be the usual mall offering. In fact, it almost looked like some sort of dentist or doctor's office, and it was just called..

.."The Clinic".

My breath caught in my throat as I read the name of the new place.. because I recognized it. Hell, almost any guy would, I think. The nationwide advertising campaign the rapidly growing franchise was plastering on every television channel and in every magazine and online ad was hard to miss.. Which wasn't even addressing the controversial nature (at least to most men) of the product they offered.

"Ooh! I'd heard that they were considering opening one here, but I didn't think it'd be so soon!" my girlfriend exclaimed, clapping her hands in delight. "Let's go in and see!"

"Uhhm.." I hummed, rather hesitant about stepping foot into the place. "..are you sure that's a good idea? I'm not really, um.. comfortable with this.. uh.. this whole.."

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>>16682
I have written a story called Pink Lemons inspired by this story. You can find it here:
>>18820

The Penis Worm story is amazing. The concept is brilliant and hilarious. It's probably my favorite of the CBT shorts and I'm trying hard to think of how to write a version of my own.

The story would be even better if it had more verisimilitude. Certain aspects of the story are oddly unrealistic, like a person keeping a pet worm in her hair. A pet worm is strange enough, but if someone had one, it would be kept in a glass case, much like one would keep ants.

One of the best bits is how Teddy shows his penis to the two girls and lets their worm play with it. That feels very believable, so long as he doesn't suspect what the worm might do. Especially if the girls are pretty, that seems like exactly the sort of thing many guys would do with just a little encouragement.

One bit that seems unrealistic is how the girls seem to give no thought to the consequences of their actions. I have yet to think of a way to really improve that, except perhaps that Wendy shouldn't personify the worm so much. She makes a big point of calling the worm 'she' as if Wendy has affection for the worm and thinks of it like a person, but that doesn't fit with how she's putting the worm's life in danger. Realistically Teddy would have done more to try to save himself and that would mean trying to kill the worm. Wendy couldn't possibly be so short-sighted as to not realize that. Of course all that's beside the issue of them getting in trouble afterward.

Maybe the story could be set in a post-apocalyptic future where penis worms have emerged as one of the new species appearing to fill the gaps left by the extinction of most of the life on Earth. That way there would be no hospitals or doctors for Teddy to seek help from, and no police to punish the girls.

Amy felt like she'd just run a marathon, she was almost completely exhausted as she lay there, panting uselessly on the bed. She could barely lift her head to watch as Bill went back to massaging her from the outside in to get her to relax so that she could withdraw her fist. The feeling of indescribable fullness left her, slowly, and squelchingly as Bill withdrew her fist, her smooth-skinned knuckles drawing the occasional squeak and moan from Amy's well-used frame.

Bill's hand was completely soaking wet with Amy's arousal when she finally pulled it free. “Heather, can you get me a washcloth from the loo?” Bill requested. “There's no way I can hold the scalpel with my fingers this slippery,” Bill added in explanation.

“No problem,” Heather grinned, walking the couple of meters needed to retrieve the miniature towel and handing it to her girl. “We wouldn't want you to slip and cut something you shouldn't after all,” Heather joked.

Bill wiped her hands mostly clean of Amy's arousal, leaving them the soft and damp but ready for the next step.

“Actually, what was the next step?” Bill wondered aloud as she picked the scalpel back up.

Heather was about to speak up when she caught a glimpse of Amy's hazel eyes widening. She leaned back, tangling her fingers through her neatly trimmed pubic bush and letting the green-skinned snuff toy talk instead of interrupting, eager to see what the 'alien' girl would suggest.

Amy blushed lightly at the question, her cunt still aching pleasantly from the abuse that Bill had put it through. The next step? That would have to be… “Well, this is a dissection?” Amy asked, more to remind herself of the facts at hand than for any confirmation. “So, unless you want to just carve out my twat and start dinner?” Amy added with a shiver. “Then the next step would be slicing me open to see what's inside, right?” Amy asked, a quiver of fear underpinning the almost lustful hope present in her words.

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okay, that third one was my favorite so far! a little gay stuff, and you really get across that M'gann didn't know and kinda feels bad. if you keep going, it would be interesting to see how this lesson shapes her. will she become cruel, or (hopefully! but you are the writer) keep her innocent quirky lovability but just embrace how disposable she and other females are, maybe kill one during sex or something? regardless of where it goes, it seems like you have hit a really fun stride <3

>>18717
Thanks, I'm a big fan of your work especially the Evangelion stuff but also the "rule 34" style of guro in general which I guess I'm sort of emulating.

>>18718
I've just started writing the sequel to the Thanksgiving story first but I also intend to complete the fair too.

>>18722

I'm glad to hear it. With regards to gay stuff I'm still experimenting with it to find the right tone. Hetro is my main thing and I've already got the main plot points for the fair sequel but there's no reason it can't share space with some lesbian content. Character wise these two stories both have the same set of identifies for the girls:

M'gann is pretty straight but as an alien everything about Earth is a little new to her and that leaves her bi-curious enough to enjoy some female attention, although she'd never be the one to initiate it. Romantically she's interested in Conner and although she doesn't mind Wally's flirting she doesn't have any true feelings for him beyond close friendship.

Artemis is technically bi-sexual but thinks that admitting that she likes guys too makes her less of a strong woman, so she chooses to identify as a lesbian. This internal conflict may also contribute to the fact that she can be slightly bashful when it comes to openly admitting that she desires sex and intimacy as much as anyone else. She has an open interest in Zatanna and in the Thanksgiving-verse they've had sex on multiple occasions but aren't in a committed relationship (yet?)

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Ellen's Halloween themed entry for her ongoing story made me want to write something to celebrate the holiday too. Hopefully you've watched a few 80s direct to video horror movies because I've borrowed a few tropes from them.

The story itself is a divergent take on the first season episode "Secrets", the episode that takes place on Halloween. Since the first few lines of dialog are taken verbatim (until Artemis tries to walk out) I don't take credit for them. See the screen grab for what everyone looks like in costume.


-DEADLY SECRETS-

"So… you going as my favorite Martian?" asked Wally who was still oblivious to the looks M'gann and Conner were giving each other as he tried to flirt with her. He was already dressed for the dance as a Thriller inspired wolf man with a letterman jacket (though the cast on his arm was real) and M'gann had been helping Conner put on his mummy wrappings.

"Not exactly" replied M'gann and stepped back so that both of the boys would get a good look at her. Starting at her feet her clothes and skin began to quickly transform, her comfy looking purple sweater and skirt being replaced with a tattered wedding dress and her green skin becoming the pale flesh of a zombie bride. "Raaaauuuughhhh" she growled while striking a classic horror movie pose.

"Whoa. Babe, eat my brains anytime" commented Wally. Even if she wasn't showing a lot of skin it still counted as a 'sexy zombie bride' costume for him, at least as long as M'gann was the one wearing it.


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well that was interesting! this new version of M'gann you are going with is a menace to society, while being completely innocent….I kinda love it! I don't mean to pressure you at all, you write whatever you want, but it could be funny if one of the homicidal misunderstandings ends in her being VERY confused about why she is being executed, lol.

regardless, this one showed a really solid grasp of the thoughts of your characters, more consistent than i can usually be. keep up the good stuff!

This is a picture drabble. So click the picture and then read the drabble.

-THE CONTRACT-

"And you're sure this is all I'll be able to wear?" M'gann asked with obvious embarrassment. The green Martian girl wrapped her arms around herself since although she had on the cute little crop top sweater she liked so much it was doing little to actually cover her nudity.

"That's right" said Artemis, "The only clothes you'll be allowed to put on are the ones he picks for you."

M'gann had never been exposed like this in front of Artemis and Wally and so she continued to avert her eyes self-consciously rather than acknowledge the way that one of them was already ogling her. "And he can touch me whenever he wants, or make me touch him, even when we're in public?" she timidly confirmed.

"Oh you know it's much more than that M'gann" urged Artemis with a hint of glee.

"I, I know that. He can order me to use my mouth to suck his penis, or put it inside me… including in my ass" she admitted, "I have to have sex with him however he wants and as often as he wants, I can't say no to anything."

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That level of male hating and cock loving is just funny lol :) what great length girls can go :)
Reminds me those pictures when guys invent complex machinery to extract and preserve pussies to be for sex LOL

When reading this I was already planning to comment that if you just cut a dick it will deflate and become useless, but damn, you thought about that already ;)

Nice story but I would love to know more what girls do with those severed cocks later.
I already can imagine some strange perverted things that could be turned into "Shintaro Kago" style picture story ;)

>>18874
I'm glad you liked my story and look forward to seeing any art inspired by my writings.

As far as the severed cocks go, I just felt that the girls would take them home as mementos of the festivities, display them on the night stand for a few days and then throw them away. In any case, the party planner who is the narrator, wouldn't know. She would more likely be able to tell stories of mothers wanting to sterilise the cock before her daughter lost her virginity, and perhaps she used a blow torch or something caustic which damaged the cock. Sponged it down with bleach and the skin came off. Or perhaps young girls playing rough, or forgotten boxes where a house pet ate the penis before the party guests had arrived.

Take care!

I echo the thoughts above. This was fantastic, and I certainly hope you continue to write more in this vain, and that you share it with us.

On a selfish note, I'd like to add that I prefer it when the girl's face remains mostly intact, and not pummeled to a pulp like Farren's. Farren didn't really seem like my type though, so I didn't mind much. Rumer was the girl I was interested in, and her death was fantastic.

Regarding the continuity error, what I've started doing is keeping tabs at the bottom of the story with each wound inflected on my character. For example:

1) just to the left of her navel
2) above her right breast
3) her right buttock
etc.

It helps keep me from placing bullet wounds, stab wounds, or arrows in exactly the same location, and it helps me keep track of how many total wounds have been inflicted. It also ends up turning me on as I read down the list and imagine all these injuries on a hot, dying girl's body.

>>18744

Thank you so much. I always do like to have as much detail as possible without sounding like I’m dragging on about a specific point, instead of just being like…“Her guts fell out”.
There is so much more that can be done with that. The feeling of them, the sound, the thoughts of the unlucky victim as she see’s them with her own eyes.
However I really like to focus on the mental state of the character. Sure you can have her go through some awful stuff but I want to know how she is feeling and whats racing through her mind and thoughts as these horrific things happen to her.

I do understand what you mean about Farren though. Originally she was meant to be this nameless assassin with a mask that doesn’t speak at all but I decided to give her a bit of a personality, look and name instead.
I think next time in the future stories I write, I will focus on all characters a little bit more, as I admit I spent most of my time on Rumer with he being the protagonist after all.

I am open to requests actually! However It won’t be anything like Scat, Loli, or Furry. Or anything where the person getting “guro’d” is a guy. Otherwise, let me know. Feel free to drop me an email if you want to discuss stuff.

[email protected]


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Woah. This was brutally good. I love this kinda super violent battle to the death stuff. I would love more.

This reminds me of a RP I did a while back based on gladiatrx arena like stuff. The battles were bloddy and ended in a very very gory manner just like this.

Your desctptiveness is really good!

Im really down for more of anything like this.

My hero once again! This one was the best for me. So many girls killed in so many ways, so dramatically. I must be a horrible person for loving it so much >_<

OfixN, I imagined something like this:

https://images.app.goo.gl/JHDgqTmaRETBe3dEA

Just picture her with her arms extended outward instead of in front of her, and once her arms rise to a certain level it triggers a blade behind her partner.

Hanneko, thank you so much, but if you're a horrible person for liking it, what does that say about me?

:-O

>>18436
I enjoyed it even though it lacks the polish of your newer stories. As always, I look forward to more of your work. Ready for more belly damage to our beloved Julie.

I love how you added me to the story, even if it was just in place of another character. Please feel free to keep using me as a character in future stories :)

Hi Bloodlust you work is amazing​ but may i ask you something​ please?. Can you​ do a story with heart ripping please?

This sounds interesting. Can you remember any more details?

It was something support I believe and it used a sort of subliminal program

It’s service patches

I wish you guys wouldn’t have to wait that long, but to be frank, that’s a pretty fair assumption...^_^;

But hey, ain’t nothing like a year-long cliffhanger, amirite?

Glad you enjoyed it regardless, and thanks for the feedback!

Well, I can finally access Gurochan on my computer again, so...here's the rest of Part 5, now conveniently accessible!

Part 5: Back to Our Regularly Scheduled Programming, cont.

Akane's mission had started out perfectly.

Of the three entrances (well, four, but the sewer was essentially off the table) that were available to her, the redhead had chosen the most straightforward: the front door. Of course, such an approach carried heavy risks, but...well, no pain, no gain!

She'd expected to be stopped upon her attempted entry, and she was, yet from that point forward, things took a rather confusing turn. The guard on duty apparently mistook her for some random scientist lady that was supposed to show up around an hour ago, and, after giving her a verbal thrashing about the values of punctuality, scheduling meetings yourself, and advised her to hire an aide that sounded less like an edgy teenager. Apparently the station had almost written the whole thing off as a prank call by someone with nothing better to do, but they ended up scheduling it anyway on the off-chance that it was legit. Despite her grievances, the guard provided her with some identification, entry, and directions to the studio this "Dr. Redwood's" interview was supposed to take place. Akane had no idea who this Red-whatever was supposed to be or what she could possibly be here for, but if it got her in so smoothly, hey, she wasn't going to argue!

Thus, our dashing protagonist found her way into the location in which her target was located. The layout of the news station proved fairly simple, yet every turn seemed to yield another security guard pointing her in the direction she was supposedly supposed to be going in; in the end, rather than her initial objective, the demon hunter instead stumbled into what appeared to be a news room, looking rather exasperated. Initially, the staff reacted to the sight of her and her dangling sack with confusion, but the sight of the tag attached to her lapel changed their gears in a heartbeat. They became a whirlwind of activity, brushing the dust off Akane's suit, making sure it was all nice and neat, even giving her womb something of a pampering with soft cleaning pads and perfume bottles. By the end, Akane was understandably out of it, fluid dripping from her auspicious organ...so when the staff corralled her over to the newscasters, she had no choice but to stumble along to their encouragement.

From there, she underwent an "interview" (something she really just bluffed her way through) which ended abruptly when the newscaster conducting it got caught up in the moment and poured gross white gunk all over her poor, defenseless ovary, something that felt so skin-crawlingly disgusting that she instinctively put up her barrier. After a few moments of recovery, the red-haired huntress took her chance to skedaddle, the cube lodged in her uterus giving her a bit of trouble in the process but not enough to stop her from making her grand escape. In their search for the escaped interviewee, the guards found little more than a trail of white fluid (upon a taste test, said fluid was revealed to be a stale egg beaten into liquid form) and the discarded remnants of the spreader cube.

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This is great! The way the mini demons best the crap out of her womb was so hot; but I have to wonder, when will we see Leanne taking a more active role? The way it seemed at the beginning of the story was for her being the protagonist

Kinda sad but very sweet and very nicely written :-)

>>18449
I agree.

Nice story!

Actually maybe I (Anon 9258) thought it was just a good story?

I witnessed what I had done, and my mind raced, thinking about the luxuries that were coming next. In that tiny cinder block room a smell of mildew and damp air filled my lungs. A single wired light bulb hung from the ceiling, right in between us. It illuminated the room with a yellow tinted glow, I saw the bright light reflect off her beautiful pale skin.

She had pretty hazel eyes and dark black hair. She sat in a cold metal chair neatly placed in the dead center of the room. She was striped of all her clothes down to her bra and underwear. Her wrists and feet were bound to the chair with neon green wire ties. Her hands red from her struggling and the shear snugness of the bands.

I walked around the room and watched as she shook and twitched with every step I made, every breath I took. I don't think I've ever seen a person in such a scared and animalistic state. I pulled her face close to mine with my hand underneath her chin, and stared at her. A single tear rolled down her face washing away some of her cute black eyeliner.

I didn't say a word. I just stepped back and I turned around to face the direction she was looking. The wall had a complete assortment of power-tools and other violent instruments. Knives, saws, and power drills with VERY large bits. This is going to be worth the effort I thought to myself, quite pleased.

I grabbed a dental pick and a block of rubber from the cart next to her chair. I hooked the pick into her bottom lip and whispered in her ear “open up”. She didn’t listen. I grabbed the top of her head and bashed it into the back of the metal chair. This time in a more aggressive almost screaming voice I said again “OPEN UP”. I forced the dental pick downward pushing it into her lip. She gave way with a short gasp of pain. I grabbed the block and forced it into her mouth. I held the palm of my hand against it and kept pressure down on it. I grabbed an Exacto-knife off my cart and she began to squirm and shake her head violently.

I grabbed the knife placing my fingers close to the tip and pushed it into the side of her lip. Cutting it as if it was some dotted line. Her muffled cries gave me a tingling feeling in my chest, the thought of her pain, I loved it and I wanted more. The tears started, Her face was covered in wet eyeliner and I heard her breathing get faster. She was trying to cope but it was too intense.

The room was so secluded and so quite I could hear her racing heart as well as my own, this was my first time doing this after all. I could see her eyes widened between my fingers while my hand pinned her head to the back of the chair. I could see her pupils physically shaking. My upbringing told me to stop, it was wrong. This poor girl, but I couldn’t make myself stop. I didn’t want to stop. I’d come too far and seen to much, and I just loved it. The crying was replaced with pure screaming as I continued to force the knife though her cheek.

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Do some damage to her pussy or tits?

>>9259
>>9261
>>9264

o no it's da bich brgade

Another hormonally imbalanced edgy faggot scribbling shit

This is the literature section, not art. If you're looking for stories, you're probably looking for my thread: https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/5404.html

I can honestly say that I never expected you of all people to reply to my question. Thank you. And you write some very good literature.

But, I actually meant the thread with pictures. I saw it a long time ago, and am no longer sure if it was in the art, 3dcg or g section. I just wasn't sure where to make the post

I already wanted to say how if by Rei you mean the same Rei as me, you made me curious too, because I don't remember such a thread and would love to see it…

…but then I realized, don't you mean another thread of mine - the Alteration thread? Well, not exclusively mine, but a lot of alterations there are made and posted by me.
Old one https://www.gurochan.cx/g/res/47.html
New one https://www.gurochan.cx/g/res/67047.html

Yes, these are the one's that I meant. I actually liked these ones the most, but could not find them agian.
Thank you

Still a better ending than what we actually got.

Solid 10/10

this is worth being a meme

Give this guy an oscar