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    Dear friend,

    First of all, I must say that I’ve been meaning to write to you for a long time. For years, actually. This letter has been in the making since I was a teenager. I'm about to enter the second quarter of my century, and I thought if I didn't do it now, I’d never do it.

    I've been feeling very nostalgic lately. Every day I reflect on my life, especially on my art. You know I like to write. And I think about why I write. What is it that moves people to do anything?

    I think it's love and pain. I believe that humans were made to escape pain and protect love. I say “protect” and not “seek” because love is inherent in human beings, contrary to what cynics might say. To be alive is to flow with love, and as proof of this I can show you the history of humanity: eras of pure misery, suffering that transcends generations, the worst of the worst. Would we consciously choose to continue an existence plagued with endless evils, if there wasn't a reason to do so? Don't you think we would have decided a long time ago to put an end to all evil forever, that is, to voluntarily extinguish ourselves, if we thought that was the most rational thing to do? What makes our small and insignificant species not choose to self-destruct is what makes it not so insignificant. It’s love for life that moves the world, my friend. It may be subconscious, it disguises itself, it changes shape, but it's there.

    But when it comes to art, it doesn't matter what moves the world; an artist is an individual, and the human mind must be analyzed in terms of its uniqueness. What can move an artist who has never loved, or who has never felt pain? Where can his magic… his inspiration come from? Where is an artist's love born?

    Art is sensory. We can see it in paintings, movies and novels; we smell and taste it in culinary works; we can touch it on the fabric of a dress; we hear it in orchestras and indie rock bands. But its inspiration is not sensory. It isn’t intellectual either: it doesn’t come from the body or the mind.

    There's a book called The War of Art (by Steven Pressfield) that states that all callings of the soul, that is, vocations, come from a single source, a single metaphysical force, separated, but united to us, that indicates the path we must follow to reach happiness. There is a force that wants us to accomplish our mission. They are the angels, the muses, the “inspiration”, whatever you want to call it. When we do what we came to do in the world, we are accompanied by this force.

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    Are you still here, OP?

    The air was thick with anticipation as the crowd roared, their voices echoing off the cold concrete walls. They were gathered here for one reason and one reason only: to witness the ultimate power struggle between two individuals, each with their own unique strengths and weaknesses. In one corner, stood Marcus, a towering figure of dominance and muscle. At 6ft 10in tall and weighing a staggering 275 pounds, he was a force to be reckoned with. His eyes gleamed with a predatory hunger as he scanned the crowd, searching for his next victim. And in the other corner, there was Sandra.

    She was just a 13-year-old girl, barely more than a child, with a body that hadn't yet fully matured. Her hair was a tangled mess, her face flushed from fear and embarrassment, and her small frame trembled as she stood there, naked and vulnerable. Sandra was the perfect victim for Marcus. He enjoyed physically dominating girls, and there was no denying that she was going to be an easy target.

    The crowd grew silent as the referee, a burly man with a crooked nose, stepped between them. He motioned for them to touch gloves, and Sandra tentatively reached out, her tiny fist making no impression on Marcus' massive hand. The crowd laughed, their cruel amusement only serving to fuel Marcus' desire to hurt her.

    He stepped back, bouncing on his toes like a panther ready to pounce. With a powerful thrust, he drove his fist into Sandra's stomach, doubling her over. She let out a sharp gasp, her eyes unfocused with pain. Marcus didn't wait for her to recover; he was on her in an instant, his meaty forearm slamming into her shoulder blades, driving her face-first into the mat. The impact reverberated through her entire body, and she felt a sharp stab of pain in her neck.

    She dropped to her knees, gasping for air as Marcus towered over her, his chest heaving with each ragged breath. "Get up," he growled, reaching down to grab her hair in his massive hand. He yanked her to her feet, forcing her to face him again. "You're going to give me a fight, aren't you?" he sneered, his words dripping with contempt. Sandra shook her head, tears streaming down her face. She wanted to fight back, but she knew she couldn't. Marcus was too strong, too big.

    "Wrong answer" Marcus hissed as he grabbed Sandra by the throat and lifted her off the ground. Her feet dangled helplessly in the air as he slammed her back-first against the mat with a sickening thud. He let her body slump to the ground, gasping for air. Her vision swam and her head throbbed painfully. But she didn't fight back. She didn't want to provoke him further.

    He kicked the small girl's legs apart roughly, spreading her wide. "You're just a little slut, aren't you?" he growled, lowering his face to her crotch. Sandra whimpered as his hot breath brushed against her sensitive flesh. She felt his rough hands roughly part her labia, exposing her helpless, vulnerable sex to his view. He chuckled darkly, his hot breath causing her to tremble. "You're so wet for me, aren't you?" he whispered, his voice vibrating against her tender skin.

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    The premise could be interesting, but if I may criticize a little bit, I'm honestly thoroughly confused by the writing.

    One paragraph, she's breathing hard from broken ribs, the next, he looks at her "lifeless body", the next, she's just unconscious and breathes better, the next, she's convulsing … What the hell is happening ?

    Also you mix present tense in the middle for no reason.

    At the start, she's just an anonymous victim. But at the end, it's almost as if he knows her.
    At the start there is a crowd, and after the fight starts, it's like they're alone in an empty room.

    Also you mention a referee, but he then completely disappears. Why doesn't he stop Marcus, or at least try ? What are the rules of this fight ?
    I like that at the start it looks like a standard if unbalanced fight. But it would help the story to talk about the context of the universe along the way and explain what's happening in that room.
    Otherwise, it's just a big burly guy raping a little girl for no reason, and that doesn't make for a very interesting story.

    And as I said, it needs a huge load of coherence. Right now, it seems like completely independent paragraphs loosely based on the same theme, put together in a slightly random order.
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    You have some nice description (which I think is why we're bothering to offer critique – it could be good), but yeah, some parts are confusing. I'll add two more issues to the ones Al mentioned:

    In the first paragraph, you say "two individuals, each with their own unique strengths and weaknesses," which makes it sound like there's going to be an actual fight, it implies that Sandra has some ability that might make up for her smallness. But that never materializes, the fight goes exactly how it looks like it will go. She gets easily defeated and there are no surprises. Which would be fine, except that you implied something else would happen.

    There's also the inconsistency about what she is wearing. In the second paragraph, you say she is naked, but later on you say "her once-pristine white gym suit is now stained and torn."

    It feels like you wrote this in bursts and didn't always remember what you had written before.

    Personally, I think it would be nice if she had some ability or power that allowed her to put up a fight, at least for a little while, even if she might realize it's futile. Maybe she's nimble and has quick reflexes, and her desperate plan is to attempt to get her legs around his neck and put him in a triangle choke. She might even almost succeed despite taking some nasty blows in the process. Maybe she even gets in position, but he uses his enormous strength to pry her off him, which confirms her fear that it will be impossible to beat him and the crowd is here for a different kind of spectacle.
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    I think it’s pretty clear AI wrote this. In fact I’m pretty sure play.aidungeon.com wrote it. I’ve been toying around with that site and this definitely fits its style. It can be pretty good with descriptive writing, but it’s limited on context and memory and that leads to the breaks in continuity the previous posters pointed out. With some careful editing it’s possible to get a coherent story out of it.

    John stood for a moment at the gate of Stonewood High's main campus, admiring the beautiful architecture. He was no expert, but each one of these buildings surely cost millions to design, let alone build.

    Stonewood High was one of the most prestigious high schools in the world. With its sprawling, beautiful campus, overqualified teachers, extensive and well-funded extracurriculars and generous scholarship program, both gifted students and the children of the rich and powerful around the world flocked to it like bats.

    The keyword here being ""was"". Stonewood ""was"" one of the best schools in the world, but a few failed investments, loss of a major donor and an administrator who disappeared along with most of the school's cash have brought the mighty institution to the brink of bankruptcy. The board suddenly found themselves in a sticky situation: the contractually-bound funding of the hundreds of clubs, groups and sports teams, as well as the guaranteed college full-rides for gifted students suddenly became an extravagant expense that the school could no longer afford, yet could not legally back out of.

    Enter John. A professional assassin and hitman, John was hired by the board to eliminate some of the most costly students. With terrorist leaders, prominent businessmen and political leaders in his portfolio, killing high schoolers was hardly going to be a challenge. Naturally, he was not cheap to hire; the only reason the school could afford him was because they were not paying in cash, but rather the promise of free reign with his methods and, if he wished, the bodies.

    John smiled as he entered the school grounds, scrolling through his phone to find details on his first victim. This was going to be fun.
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    Please continue this. This has far too much potential to let it die.
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    I wanna see more, it's got potential
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    Bump
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    grrrrr dont stop npw!!!!
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    I'd always found my older sister, Mia, to be incredibly sexy. She was 4 years older than me, her being 17 and I being 13. Ever since i could remember i had fantasized about her. I knew it was wrong to fantasize about her but i just couldnt help myself and for obvious reasons. She had blonde hair tied back into a ponytail, freckles, cute nerdy glasses, and a curvy body. I'd always try to get a peek of her while she was in the shower of our shared bathroom, occasionally getting a view of one of her breasts or her ass. Our house only had 2 bathrooms, one between me and my sisters room and the other connected to our mom's bedroom.
    Normally when she showered there wasnt too much of a gap in the curtain, making it incredibly easy to perv on her while I 'used the bathroom.'
    Like with any other time I'd heard the bathroom shower running, I gave a single knock before walking in. Walking past the shower curtain, I realized that it wasn't shut all the way, the opening being a few inches larger than normal. As I walked past the opening I was able to get an amazing side view of my sisters naked body. I sat down on the toilet, pretending to actually use it for a minute as to not cause any suspicion.
    I tried to make my way past the curtain with only a quick peek but the amazing view clouded my judgment, stopping and staring at my sister as she lathered up her hairless legs, unable to move, entranced by her perfect figure. Before I could snap out of it myself, someone else did it for me.
    "Enjoying the view?" My sister teased, staring at me through the opening in the curtain.
    "Oh shit, sorry, I didnt mean-" I tried to bullshit my way out but my sister cut me off.
    "Relax, I'm not mad, you just surprised me is all.." my sister moved back a bit, obstructing my view of most of her sexy figure, the only exception being her face, a patient and slightly nervous smile painted across it.
    "But if you're done checking me out, would you mind leaving so I can finish?"
    I'm surprised by her response, not expecting her to be so chill about it.
    "Well i mean, this is the first time ive ever been able to properly check you out. Usually the curtain is actually closed."
    My sister peers down at her feet for a moment before looking back to me, visibly blushing a bit.
    "Oh.. so you want to stay?" Her voice still soft but sounding noticeably more anxious.
    I nod "of course i wanna stay, you look way better without clothes on. Letting me get a good view for a while will help me deal with, you know.."

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    Best sister ever!!! We need extra huge
    bottle of regen pills as it would be a shame to loose her the first day.
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    we definitely need 2nd part and more
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    Very cute sister and hopefully quite durable
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    Bump for more ;-)
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    Good stuff

    Winter Moore, Child Porn Star, Disposed Of At 13 - Paimon Times (No-Sex, Loli, Referenced Snuff)

    1. I am a novice erotica writer and as such am hungry for constructive criticism and feedback on my work. This story has been posted on multiple platforms. Please let me know in the comments or via whatever messaging platform is available what you thought of the story, even if you did not like it at all. The only exception to this call for feedback is that if you wish to criticize this kind of (violent, sexual, underage) content, please rather keep it to yourself. If you do not mind this kind of content or enjoy it, but nonetheless feel this story is subpar, do engage.

    2. This story is only an exercise in catharsis – its content and characters are entirely fictional and do not represent any real-world preferences or desires. If you are easily offended by themes or literary portrayals of parental betrayal, extreme sexual violence, and underage characters engaged in sexual and violent scenes, please do not read any further than this.

    3. As with all my stories, it is dialogue heavy and light on sexual details (which I choose to reserve to the reader's imagination!).

    4. If you enjoyed this story, let me know. That's the only way I know to write more!

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    Reporting by Paimon Times

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    >> Unlike Hyde's excellent world, here kids aren't exactly stoked about being killed. Since this text is in the form of a newspaper report, the lack of any reference to how she felt about it is meant to convey how little people actually care about what the kids think.

    >> Or, at least, that's what I'm going for! The fact that I have to explain it means I still have some work to do in conveying the message if subtlety is what I'm going for!

    Yeah, I didn't get that impression from the story.

    From a writing perspective I would have suggested a quote from her, something anxiously fearful like "please I don't want to die". However the paper would report this with a tone similar to 'kids say the darnest things' and reassure the reader that she did indeed meet a grissly end which can now be purchased for their viewing pleasure.
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    >>16247
    I think in that case there could be more emphasis on how this disposal was just legalized and how her father was like the first person who used this opportunity which also makes this event worthy of mentioning in the newspaper. So the story is no longer about this girls and her father but rather about political change and those people are just an example so no details are required.
    Also to show betrayal it woud be good idea to mention how Winter enjoyed her CP star carrier with enthusiasm and had good relationship with her father as otherwise if he is just abusive asshole as we can see here. There is no betrayal, she was just abused form beginning to the end consistently and never had any value as a human.

    But either wasy in the society where disposal of your children after use them for porn is legal it is still unreasonable to think that they are surprised when that happens to them in the porn story. So some mentioning about how they feel is necessary at least in some indirect way for example casually mentioning how she was trying to resist or something else happened during that disposal what is worth mentioning just to give a clue how they feel.

    Just now it came to my mind that when Winter was signed up for CP maybe your idea was not that she was enthusiastic porn star enjoying her work, like I understood, but rather she was used and raped as slave and then disposed? But that is not the typical CP when girl is raped and abused :)
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    A Response to Winter Moore’s Upset Fans – Paimon Times (incest, loli, guro, snuff, cannibalism, scat)

    Paimon Times Op-Ed by Fred Moore

    I understand that many of Winter Moore’s fans were upset when they learned that I, her father, had her disposed of several weeks ago. When the Paimon Times ran an obituary for Winter, my company, the studio for which Winter was a child porn star, received hundreds of additional queries. I thank the Times for allowing me the column space to explain.

    As with all controversies, context is necessary.

    Her mother and I divorced when Winter was just 2, and a nasty custody battle ensued. The economy had tanked, causing me to lose my job, but I loved my daughter dearly and knew she would be better off with me in the long-term than with her religious mother.

    Thankfully, I won the custody battle, and Winter and I lived on Government welfare for several years. We grew very close. I wanted desperately to provide for my daughter, and felt humiliated at not being able to.

    When child pornography was legalized when Winter was 7, it was as if things fell in place for us. I had Winter audition for softcore roles with some of the adult porn studios that were cautiously branching out. Her immediate success meant we no longer had to be on welfare. She enjoyed modeling and showing off her charms greatly, as only a young girl could.

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    Honestly both parts are good. i like the first story very much, even perfering it to most of the second story. However, the second story did also have its charms.

    I am not sure why people said they couldn't understand what was happeing in your story. … I think maybe they aren't teaching people how to actively read any more maybe? Or maybe people have just forgotten how to read a news paper?

    In any case I really like these. I also read, "stop fussing." are there any more stories set in this world anywhere?
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    This was EXCELLENT! I look forward to seeing more of your work!

    This initially started as a 250 words challenge idea. But by the time I was happy with what I had, it was already twice as long. So instead, I decided to extend it a little bit, to make it its own independent short story.

    Somehow, it's more or less a single picture of the scene in my head, that I gave some context to. I sure as hell don't have the skills to draw it, although I'd love it if someone who does gets inspired, but I figured I might be able to make a half decent story out of it.

    Warning/kinks list : loli m/f (although mostly f), torture, rape, skinning, cannibalism, …

    The spy, the Grok and the blood sausage

    Leah was slowly moving along the line of tents, silent as a shadow, when she heard a scream coming from the tent at the end. A loud pained scream.
    She looked around. Nobody stirred. It was common in the camp.
    A second scream, filled with anguish, that died in the middle. A kid's scream.
    Staying unnoticed was the top priority. She knew she shouldn't, but she had to take a look.


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    Beautiful story!!! I'm very pleased. The staking and skinning is beautiful!!! Please continue!!! Thank you so much!!!

    I don't know what did it, but we all knew it was over.

    Oh, well. They had a good ride.

    My wife- my granddaughter, to be honest. Her mother's… Fifth, I think.

    Honestly, who keeps track anymore?

    She was fully three years old at this point. Long in the tooth. She'd popped out ten daughters in the last two years. Most sold off, a couple wandered away.

    Two I couldn't stand it after they were just over a month old, fully grown, long-legged and with their sweet little F-cups spurting their first sweet cream, ready to get knocked up and pop out their own little baby bimbos in under a week.

    Airheads grow up so fast.

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    I felt a familiar tingle in my balls as we walked down the city street. My companions, three chicks I’d been hanging with for the past couple weeks, chatted among themselves as I looked about for a suitable candidate.

    I could use one of the girls easy enough. All it would take would be to grab an elbow, steer her to an alley, and I could relieve my tension in relative privacy. Unfortunately, I’d had all of them before and I was pretty sure I’d gotten everything new out of them that I was likely to see. I was feeling in the mood for something new and since we were in a new(for me) part of town, I figured I’d sample the local fare.

    Pulling out my phone, I pushed the dedicated side button to point me to the nearest fuck stop. Dealing with a man’s horniness is serious business, and I was pleasantly surprised to find we had passed a fuckstop just moments before.

    As I turned back one of the girls(my father taught me not to bother remembering names until they were at least pregnant with one of my children) noticed. She was platinum blonde, slim, and reminded me of pink bubble gum for some reason.

    “What’s up, babe?” she asked.

    I motioned for the fuckstop. “Just gotta see a girl about a horse,” I said with a half-smile on my face. “I shouldn’t be too long.”

    She smiled up at me and grabbed my arm. “You’ll always be long enough for me, darlin’.”

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    NICE
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    Excellent narration / general writing, and I really love the mood. Exquisite casual.
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    Absolutely exquisite!

    I'm going to post what I've written so far here, so it's all in one thread rather than spread out. And any additional work will be posted here as well!
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    >>16555

    It has quite literally been years, and I haven't really written snuff during that long hiatus, but I figured I could at least say what happened. Back when I was writing these, I was also operating under the username Birdschach and writing a lot of Fire Emblem fics. When I made an AO3 account for Buzzard to house snuff fics, someone was able to recognize my writing style and threatened to attempt to dox me.

    It's a different time now and I don't really give a shit anymore, it was stupid to ever let that get to me but what can be done now? I'm still active under the name Madfalldyn, but as I've said I haven't written snuff in a good long while.

    Every time I've attempted to look back and find these, the site was down or search wasn't bringing them up. Part of me is tempted to pull them and post them up backdated under my name, since they are works I had thought of as lost and ones I enjoyed writing, but who knows if I'll get around to it.
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    >>25479

    that was me. the fact that im still browsing gurochan probably tells you everything you need to know about how that worked out for me

    i'm truly sorry for being a being suchg a putrid little fucking purity cop anti back then. it's probably the most genuinely evil thing i've done in my life, and i cannot apologize enough for it.

    your writing was (and still is) great.
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    Ever make a snuff fic of Clanne, the sexy mage boi? He's from Fire Emblem Engage
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    >>25479
    Oh hey I love your stuff on that account. Props for all the old school UC Gundam filth.
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    >>25479
    THat sucks to hear you went through that, I am glad you are ok though

    Two sets of steps slowly approached him from behind. One was heavy, and thudded loudly in
    the empty court. The other was soft, a whisper barely heard.

    This was it, this is what he had always wanted.

    Two people came into view around him. On his left was a man, tall and deeply masculine with a deep brown skin tone. He had a handsome face and a rugged physique under a simple T-shirt and jeans. He had long black hair, tied into a ponytail at his neck. At his belt was a knife.

    It was a promising omen.

    To his right was a woman in striking clothes. She wore a deer pelt vest adorned with beads and feathers, kept closed with a few leather string ties. He could see her brown skin, tantalizing and beautifully smooth underneath. On her head was a black and blue feather headdress that fell gracefully down her back to her hips. Her legs were clad only in some leggings with decals depicting leather strips and beads. New clothes depicting old designs and hugging her marvelously.

    Another promise that he would get exactly what he craved. What he needed.


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    nice

    The old thread isn't bumping anymore. This seems to be a limitation of the new gurochan. Time for a renewal.

    Old thread full of ultra hot ultra short stories can be found here:
    https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/5209.html

    Keep them coming!
    I'll start it off with this one (repost, since I'm lazy):

    =Slicing fetish=
    Did you ever use an egg slicer? Those with thin wires.
    Imagine I'm the egg, and those wires are a monofiliament grid.

    It doesn't really hurt. If you slice me slowly, you see my boobs squeezed a bit before the wires sink into me. Feels really satisfying! They suddenly go in, like 'slurp'. Butt cheeks, too! Just slice me all the way!

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    Peter had his enemas and stomach flush and now is the last boy on the killing floor.  His arms and legs are weak and he is pissing himself.  He doesn’t watch anymore but can hear the guttural moans and screams as the other boys from the transport truck are gutted and cleaned.

    He did watch the butchers at first all reaching into the open bellies of squirming boys, massaging something that quieted them and made their small penises grow rigid to quiver and spurt pearly white loads. He’ll be next on a table to moan; ”… don't stop … please don't stop …"
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    Boys get searched for weapons at the stadium gates to prevent rumbles, that’s why they picked me as smuggler; I’m the smallest girl in the gang and wore my skintight leathers.

    Two boys walk beside me, their hands in my armpits to help me walk on wobbly legs.

    “You okay, darlin’?”

    “Yep.”

    “Gunna make it?”

    “Think so. I’m leaking a bit.”

    “You’re a trooper.”

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    He had a choice: Be castrated, or be cooked.

    He wasn't ready to die for his owners yet, so he chose castration.

    However, he expected his balls to be cut off. He didn't expect them to bring out a tool, a Burdizzo. A device that was clamped down on his scrotum. he shouted in his restraints, trashing at the pain as his blood vessels were crushed in his balls. Soon, his balls would wither from lack of blood, and shrink. he would be useless as a breeder. At least he bought himself a few more months, but he had to wonder if it was worth it?
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    "Hello?"

    Only Echoes. Smirking, I dragged her by the hair. "We seem to be alone."

    She whimpered. I cuffed her to the basement pipes.

    She peed herself when she saw the knife. Then she strained, but too late.

    Her screams turned into gurgles as I cleaned her out, but I did not allow her to die. We were having way too much fun with her squirming.

    Her expression turned absent when she saw her eviscerated guts, her mind pretending this wasn't real.

    But the pain called her back.

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    Hi. GuroChan is back (hooray!) and I’ll celebrate with a story that I plan on turning into a series. I was writing under the name Loke on the old chan, I wrote a few stories that are still on here I think.

    The concept is simple; Jim operates a Snuff Truck, a mobile processing centre in an alternative reality of some sort where overpopulation is the biggest issue around and people usually die consensually or semi-consensually. The truck is kind of like a mobile home, driver seat and mini-office in the front, execution room in the back.

    This is the first story. Feel free to suggest characters, scenarios and alternative execution methods. I have som rules though, to make sure writing is fun for me too. They are quite simple: No scat (mild peeing is totally ok though”, no toddlers, no male on male, no real people and no characters from anime or TV etc. The more information the better. Don’t hesitate to suggest things though, the worst that could happen is that I just don’t use it. Also, constructive feedback in general is greatly appreciated.

    PS: My favourite subjects are tween and teen girls, 12-15.

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    Chapter 1 (f-solo, M-solo, f-snuff)

    Jim looked at the black and white clock on the wall of his truck. Eager to get home he hoped no more visitors would come, but his hope shattered immediately when he heard knocking on the door. He opened, and greeted the two people standing outside. He recognized one of them, a stunning blonde English teacher named Amanda, coming to his truck for the third time that day. She was there to escort the one of them that wouldn’t leave that truck alive.

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    The next chapter was published on Pixiv, but it looks like I didn't post it here. I think it has to do with the downtime GC was experiencing in those days. Anyways, enjoy!

    Chapter 2b

    Outside the truck stood a magnificent sight. A tall, athletic brunette clad in a black crop-top and tight hotpants stood before him, smiling.

    “Hi, I’m Ashley, I’m a volunteer,” she said still grinning wide, revealing her long canine teeth which gave her a vampiric look. Volunteers, and especially young, sexy ones like these, were always fun as well as exceedingly rare. They usually had a strong reason for coming to his truck and more often than not Jim took great pleasure in carrying out their requests.

    “Come on in then!” Jim said holding the door open for her. He immediately registered her and got through the paperwork, revealing that the girl was only nineteen. Not many people of that age would come to the truck willingly.

    “So, what’s your request, Ashley?” he asked.

    “Well, um, this is a little embarrassing, but, uum-“

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    >>25649

    Nice to see you're still around Loke.
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    >>25649

    Nice to see you're still around Loke.
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    >>25649
    Oooooh nice!
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    young soldier girls in cropped uniform that bare the belly being captured and executed by bayonets fixed on rifles being sunk in their bare bellies and navels and intestines and bowels

    A wolf-man reclined against a tree in the shade just off to the side of a little dirt trail through the woods. Apart from his ears, tail, and teeth, he looked like a well-built and tanned human male, tall and feral, shirtless and barefoot. His nails were long, sharp, and hard like claws. He was waiting, as he had been doing for a few afternoons now in this spot. Idly, he scratched at the trail of hair growing on his muscled abdomen, up from the waistband of his unbuttoned jeans. Then he caught the scent he had been waiting for. His patience had finally paid off. He licked his lips and stepped around behind the tree, ducking out of sight.

    The little bunny girl coming down the trail couldn't have been more than half his height and a quarter of his weight. Her blonde twintails and her long fluffy white ears both bounced in time with her backpack as she half-skipped in her tiny pink sneakers, matching colored mini-skirt fluttering with each rise and fall of her pale, skinny legs. She wasn't wearing any panties, the fucking slut - the wolf could smell her cunny from dozens of paces. It was this familiar scent that had tipped him off, that some cute young prey-thing liked to take this dangerous shortcut home from school some afternoons. She should have been more careful.

    As she approached the tree the happy bounce in her gait died away, prey animal instinct warning her that there something wrong. Peering through branches, concealed from sight, the wolf watched her pause and look around, anxious, her little button nose wrinkling as she sniffed the air. He was pretty sure she was already close enough to catch, being weighed down by her schoolbag and all, but just in case he waited a moment longer. Then she did something really stupid, and sealed her fate. Glancing down, the gradeschooler saw that one of her shoelaces had come loose, and she nervously bent down to tie it, fingers fumbling as she mumbled something, perhaps to reassure herself she was okay and that no one was watching her. Dumb little kid. He was already on her by the time her head snapped back up in alarm at the sound of rapid padding footsteps.

    "AAAAAAAAAAH! NO NO NO NO, nonono, please no!" she squealed in panic and started begging immediately as he grabbed her and roughly manhandled her petite struggling body off the ground as if she weighed no more than a feather.

    "Gotcha, little prey-slut! Don't worry, you won't be needing these anymore," the wolf teased, ripping her shoes off her bare kicking feet and throwing them into the trees, followed by the backpack straps being peeled from her smooth bare shoulders and it dropping unceremoniously to the ground with a thump.

    "No no pleeeease p-please don't, please I wanna go h-home," she cried, breath quickening and her tiny limbs shaking uncontrollably. She squirmed in his arms and sobbed as he pressed his stubbly face to her soft neck and kissed and sniffed her flawless skin. He could feel her frenzied little rabbit heart pounding through her entire small frame. One clawed hand shredded her tube top and let the ragged pieces flutter to the dirt, exposing her perfectly flat chest to be groped and kneaded as his other hand found the inside of her thigh and squeezed.

    "C'mon, you asked for this. Look how you're fucking dressed," he drawled offhandedly as spun her around and lifted her skirt to get a close up look at her bubble butt, her fluffy little rabbit tail, and her gorgeous, puffy, hairless kiddie cunt.

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    and then it never was
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    I would love to see more of this. Though I would request that no one be youger than the racoon. … OR why not leave ages egnostic? With the animals all being different sizes and body types, you don't really need to specify ages. A mouce girl is alsway going to be tiny thin and cute, a rat is always going to a bit bigger and a bit tighter like the racoon girl, bunnys will always be short with tight athlettic bellies small boobs amazing buts and thies that save lives. Their ages won't really change their size or body plan or even their mental quirks. YOU know what ages you want them to be,why not let us imagine the ages we want them to be. You can still specify highschool middle school college, whatever else, let us imagin what that means exactly.

    just a suggestion about taking advantage of a fun dynamic you already hinted at and hopefully encouragement to continue writing!

    Story takes place in the near future, where people find the way to self healing any sustained damage, rendering them immortal. This leads to many different experiments between people, different fetishes and non fatal cannibalism is on rise.

    There is a knock on the door.
    "Who that might be?" I think for myself.
    "Hi, I am Your new neighbor, Katia. Can You please help me? " says beautiful short girl, with long black hair.
    "Well sure, I am Sew, what do You need? "
    She blushes a little. "Well, it is quiet a strange request, to ask from a stranger, but I have invited my friends for a welcome party, and I want to cook something from my heart to Them. Miss Jenkins from the second floor, mentioned, that You are quiet skilled with the knifes.
    "Well, I can sharpen the knife, but I am not a chef or something. " I reply.
    She blushes even more, and she toys with her hair nervously: "Well, sharp knife is important for what I have in plan. I want to cook my heart for Them, but I am afraid, that I can not cut it out myself. Can You please help me with that? "
    My brain stops a few seconds.
    "OK, let me get this straight: You want me to cut of Your heart, so You can cook it for Your friends? "
    "Well, yes, " she replies. "Maybe a little bit more than that. From what I have read, it will take me at least half an hour to be able to move my arms again, or to walk without any issues, it takes some time for ribs to regenerate. And I have not that much time, so, if You can please cut and season it for me, that would be nice.I will fully understand, if You will refuse. "
    "No, no," I reply. "I am more than OK with that. But I have never done anything like that before. Are You OK with that? " "Damn sure I am." she replies. "Me neither. "

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    I really enjoyed this, I look forward to more if you decide to continue it
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    This storry is second part of the Heart for dinner party.

    "Hi Kata. How's party going?" I asked at the door.

    "Hi Sew. It is going great." replied Kata.

    "Is that him? That mysterious neighbor? " another female voice asked from inside of the apartment. "What are You wating for, bring him in! "

    Kata grabbed my hand and pulled me inside her apartment.

    "This are my friends: Tana and Luci." sad Kata, and vaved her hand in direction of 2 nice girls in the living room. "Girls, this is Sew."



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    Surprisingly sexy! I thought that the lack of fatal consequences would be a turn-off, but I'm enjoying the story very much. I hope that there is a way to actually kill a girl, though. Maybe the brain is involved.

    Only one small issue, but it's something that happens in every open chest story. The lungs don't inflate on their own. That's what your diaphragm is for. As soon as you open a girl's chest, her breathing will stop. Perhaps you can use this in your next story. You can still communicate with your willing victim if you read her lips. :)
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    I enjoy non-lethal stories
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    Thank You folks.
    Sorry, I started to like this girls, I think I will keep them alive. And yes, You are right about the lung thing. I think, I will have to address this somehow in next story. But it is pretty big part of what I like, so maby they will use ambu-vac or something like that.

    Disclaimer! This is just a work of fiction.


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    I reckon it’s high time to write about my career. Cancer and diabetes have ravaged my body over the last five years. I'm drunk most days and eat mostly fast food and junk food; I’ll be dead long before prosecution can put me behind bars.

    I was a hired killer. Most of them deserved to die, some were just in the wrong place at the wrong time, it didn’t matter. After a while, it didn’t take much to figure out who was paying me and why somebody was dying.

    You don’t care about all of the details of how I ran my business so I’ll get on with the stories; since I’m feeling generous I’ll stick to the ones where a broad ends up dead.

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    did you need to post the same thing nine or ten times?
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    >>25713
    Sorry, the site wasn't working properly while I was trying to post this.

    Can anyone delete the others?
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    >>25714
    Already done!
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    Short, sweet, and to the point. Could not ask for better.

    If you are open to suggestions, could you accept a hit on a pregnant target? Or would that be against your highly developed sense of morality :)

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